Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#751

Absolutely loved the chapter dear.

ArHi are simply love ❤️

Great work 😳

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@awwwwwww

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Posted: 13 years ago

#752

brilliant as always,thanks a million for wonderful update👏

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#753

What a beautifully put together chapter!

The pure love that you portrayed for both Arnav and Khushi was just heart warming!

The sheer tenderness with which Arnav is holding onto Khushi made me tear up!

"Arnav taking full advantage of a completely drenched Khushi, staring up at the inky blue sky with delight spilling out of her smile, lifted her up, encircling her legs around his waist, before walking off to a direction opposite to that of the hotel. When she resisted, Arnav noticed with pride, that her hesitation was a mere formality, he simply ran his lips over her jaw, tracing the way up to her right ear, before whispering, "Babies..."

That was my favorite part in the whole update!

Its nice to see that even thru all their fears and vunerablities they never cease to live when they are together!

Brilliant update!

Continue soon?

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

OMG,It was so interesting.
Arnav asked khusi to marry him.
Thanx 4 d pm

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pheonix24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#755

That was amazingly written...Very romantic..

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

amazing update. Loved it. Thats all i can say!

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

I'm glad they admitted to their fears, its very important that you do, while battling a disease like cancer. Its the fear that will give rise a new strength, a strength that will hopefully bind them together further and help them fight cancer.

I really love the way Arnav is being supportive of her, how he is making the most of every second he has with her. Life isn't about how long one lives- its about making every second count, its about making memories that one can cherish forever.

I'm not sure if this is going to have a happy ending or not, but either ways I think the story teaches a very important lesson- a lesson of love and living life to the fullest.

Thanks for the PM.

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Kiah

@kashforlifex

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#758

Can I just say that after reading through the 27 chapters in one go, I was in tears! Like literally, the last 10 chapters or so made me cry like a little baby. I swear to God, I couldn't stop crying! I felt SO shaken up with the emotions of Arnav and Khushi! They were both right in their places and yet, so apart! AAAH! I'm so glad he finally knows and he's not being the whole BRAVE-HERO-I-CAN-FACE-ANYTHING, he's admitting he's scared because we're all scared!

You're an absolutely amazing writer! Like WOW! I absolutely adore this FF and I'm definitely looking forward to more of ArHi! And I'm a total sucker for Happy Endings. And especially for THIS FF because I'm SCARED for them! So pleaseee don't let Arnav be all alone and lonely because I will cry like hell! :'(

WELL DONEEE :D Continue soon! :)

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Shobhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#759

I wouldnt have commented you know !!
But the ghost inside me was making me feel so bad for not commenting on probbaly one of the best updates ever Ive read , that I couldnt sleep for over 2 days 😆 !! Yaa ayaa !! Soch lo jo sochna hai but let me comment haan !!

Sona !! I love you !! And I mean it OK🤗

The moment I read the first line, there was this calm amazing feeling that I got enveloped by, Im telling you, I was just so happy that we got an update !!

Arnav's confession on how he feels about Khushi !! Damn that's just one of the best Ive ever read !! The way he sees her, with every movement of hers, the way he describes her, feeling her , almost like she is the air he breathes, (well I guess she is) !! Was just so perfect !! I loved the confession out there,... Though it wasnt loud , it just made me smile !!

"And that moment in Khushi's life, that day, that beautiful evening, it was decided, that from then, from the very second she had seen Arnav walk across the shore towards her, she would live. Live for him"

This was I guess the best line from Khushi's POV from this update !! The accpetance, the love !! The want for each other is so damn evident in every move of theirs, you cant help but admire them !! Gush over their love and go madly in love over their love !! And I guess you made me do that all over again !!

And then the proposal !! And the way Khushi answered it back !! Aww !! That was amazing just amazing !! (see I told you if I comment there's nothing for me to be able to write 🤪)
Babies !! And I was like yayyy !!!😉

And then the rain !! Rain always sets the mood for anything and everything !! And to top it all, I was having coffee while reading it !! Coffee in a blue mug and rain describing their kiss !! the begining of a new life for Khushi , and in a way for Arnav too !! That kiss was juste everything serves together on the best platter !!

Aww !! My coffee just got cold, cause I was busy drooling over the rest of the part !! The way you describe their love, its just makes me go 😍 !! That was P-E-R-F-E-C-T !!!

And then the ending !! Where he starts kissed her again , I was like this by then☺️ Or probably just near a beetroot !! Thank god no one saw me , Or they would have come up with the wackiest theories of the world !!

"I'm scared too."

And this part !! It was just, I dont know !! At that moment I just wanted to hug them both !! But I know one thing, and I remember you saying that you're a sucker for happy endings, so Im just keeping mu fingers crossed and waiting for the updates , to see Khushi recover, to see them both love and be loved throughout their lives !!

I loved this update beyond words Sona !!🤗

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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#760

after writing such a beautiful chapter you are definitely forgiven sweety.! just loved it...😊 LOL he and his plans...babies.?! 😆 was literally grinning after reading that one.! continue soon

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