Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awww that was for me the most beautifully written chapter of this fanfic! the meeting after the long separation couldn't have been better, I couldn't have imagined it any better! just beautiful! words weren't needed, the actions had me mesmerized! so beautiful!
lots of love
Sonia

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

This was just beautiful! Everything forgotten when they saw each other! I was stunned with this update.

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Congratulations for you 2nd thread for this AMAZING FF 🥳🥳

Goshh!! yu wrote this chapter sooo beautifully!! I could have fully imagine seeing Arnav and Khushi by the beach.. in each others arms!! Really sweet <33

'I missed you, Arnav.' Loved it <3

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

congratulations on the new thread!

Awesome update👏

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Congrats sweets for the new thread, I knew you would reach to thread 2!

Yes, and thanks a lot for the dedication, but all we do is encourage, and y

you are the one who write such beautifully to compel us to encourage 😊

I feel so special, thanks to you :P Sorry if I annoyed you a lot with my update soon's. But I am sure I cant help it, so you have to really really update soon ...LOL

I am just so speechless reading your update. You are a poetess, aren't you?

Six months. One-eighty days. Come November, the sight of his face. A little tired. Lines of worry, frustration, etched across his forehead. The contours, hardened, the same messy hair. Lips thinned into a straight line, contemplating, thinking. The eyes, beautiful black, drawing her in, like the very first time. Was it a hint of surprise, or relief that she saw in his eyes?

Six months. One-eighty days. Come November, the sight of her face. A little exhausted. Skin like porcelain. A faint blush right under her eyes. Parted lips, ever-inviting. Stray black tendrils plastered to her cheeks. The eyes, hues of ash, drawing him in, like the very first time. Was it a hint of longing, love that he saw in her eyes?

The above lines are just magic, beautifully written, touched my heart my soul.

The moment that they have, the kiss, the pent up emotions, a little too late but still so fresh and real in their minds. I just loved it.

I cant find enough words, but I absolutely loved your update, and when I find enough words I promise to comment again! LOL

Until then, as always update soon! You are a rock star!

Edited by inspiringstars - 13 years ago

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

CONGGOO FOR THE NEW THREAD... THE UPDATE WAS SOOO WOW GIRL.. LOVERS MEETING AFTR A SEPARATION IS LYK RAINS THE DESERTS... THE PART WHER U DESCRIBED THEIR SEEING EACH OTHR AFTR 6MNTHS, 180DAYS WAS BEAUTIFUL... THE SETTING WAS LOVELY AGAIN.. ON THE BEACH IN BTWN THE WAVES, IN EACH OTHRS ARMS, WOWW FEELING... IN THE WIND OF LOVE N PAIN... BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL... I HOPE THE NEXT UPDATE THY DONT PUSH EAACH OTHR N I WANT HIM TO KNO THE TRUTH... POOR THNG IS GUILTY... MUAH..

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I think that was the best reunion they could have possibly had! It was marvelous! Continue soon!

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

i was in another world while reading, their meet after the gap was written beautifully and am so glad that they shared that kiss there was so much longing, love and pain in it😊😳 i want them to talk and clear everything in that beach, there is no perfect place to do it given that the tide would wash away all their pain and bitter memories, pleasee update soon,,,am waiting eagerly😃thanks for the pm and congrats on new thread, you truly deserve a lot more...🤗