SS: Living Without You: Part 27 updated

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

So beautifully written.

I love how you portray their emotions.

Well done. Loved it.

Continue soon.

Thanks.😃

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Your Arnav is so very irresistible Smita.

Loved this update.

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

ohh fab continue next part soon plz

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priya

@silvia1999

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

awesome update👏

continue soon

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Oh God ... my breath is coming ut in shallow puffs...this so mesmerising and i can so visualise it ... i can smell the atmosphere in the room... that was so intense...plz update next part soon... thank you

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Haha, loved the way she said "To?" Indignant Khushi as always.

Update soon. :)

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Dneha

@Dneha

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

so little.. but soo cute... great job gal...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

aww, just when I was getting into the flow of things, you concluded the part 😭! anyway, short but sweet... loved how arnav calmly and quietly explains to khushi why they can never be apart: they ring with so much truth and honesty that khushi will have no option but to understand the depth of arnav's feelings... her hesitant exploration of his features was a nice touch!