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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Awesome update kritzz..
loved it
kriyansh convo was nice
the BB match was really interesting
loved the krisha talk
update the next part soon

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Nishtha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

tune kya record banana hain sad updates krne ka
kyun aisa kr rhi hain yr
shayad tu bhl rhi hian dat tune kha tha dat es SS ki sad endin nhi hogi
lg toh sb kuch sad hi rha hain abhi tk

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Shailja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Supar Dupar Awesum update kritzz !!!!!

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Misha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

really nice update dear...

krisha bondin was fabulous...

cant wait fr a proper kriyaansh meet...

please update soon...

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

ok twist in the story,,liked it!!thanx 4 da pm!!

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

kritz I know its a very emotional update.

Loved the way u described Kria's emotions.

Loved Ashmita's and Kria's bond.

So finally she had to face them-her friends,her class mates and who all not.

So fianlly he saw her but what was that has she changed so much tha he was not able to find ourt at its the girl he loved so much.

it was wonderful to see her rejoining her moments in Bb court.But what suprised me was she reacted to it.She was not able to be numb to It.

KriSha is a relation I still admire a lot.

s both had their differences but still they were able to understand eachother even without words.

The way first Sharon was rude and Kria bold and Sharon trying to comfort her was superb.

S there is a big part missing that none knows now except Ash.

Hope they come to know it soon and wish Sharon be first here.

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sujana

@sujana9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

res
shit cheeko forgot to see dis mrng will unres tmw
srry yaar :(

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sujana

@sujana9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

chal unresing ab :P
She was sitting by the window sill, emotionless. With nothing particularly running in her mind. She had achieved it, she could make her mind blank, without even wanting to. It took years for saints and monks to accomplish the phenomena with hardcore meditation and will power. But she could do it effortlessly, it was as natural as breathing for her.

man dis part sudden tears in my ears i think ab d3 mein bhi kria is like dis ...😭😭😭KRIA *snuff snuff*...
kria turned into hearless ...😭
rey thought she was known to him but could not realise it was kria :( :(
d way kria answered him i love it d perfect way to avoid someone u want to go away frm *sigh...
outside bb court d falskback was super awesum i got smile on my face 😃 KRIYANSH 😭
Kria started walking towards the exit Hand in hand with Swayam, only to be seen by Reyansh who was fuming with jealousy. Kria looked at Reyansh and gave him a sarcastic smile, indicating that he had lost. He on the other hand winked at her.
Swayam started howling with laughter at kria's expression. Her mouth was hanging open, and eyes were wide. Swayam gently pushed her lower jaw up and shut her mouth.

Kria was glaring at Reyansh, and stuck her tongue out childishly to which he smiled. He was frustrating her, why wasn't he glaring back or retorting. She waved him off as he smirked and continued walking.

man i love dis part KRIYANSH UAAN UAAN UAAN ::( :( i badly miss dem nd want dem back :(

d way sharon nd kria spoke to each other wow just so awesum like for a chance .. to us dey chanced d behaviour wid each other *applause* for dat ...!!!!!!

but i thought rey will follow her to bb court *sigh... its ok may be u want to bring out something else ...!!!!

awesum yaar cheeko fably written i love it
thank u for d pm
update jaldi se pjeelll *plzzz* 😛

Edited by sujana9 - 13 years ago

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nityaa02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

omg omg omg omg... that was an amazing update👏... the attitude kriya is trying to throw... the rey and kriya's interaction😕... and the last part... when kriya and sharon speak🤗... omg... i just loved the update... really very well written... eagerly waiting for the next update... do write soon😃