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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: namratajadhav

ohhh god m sry... I mixed up dashing_devil n dazzling_smile... Sry my mistake. M so sry. Vo cell se ol thi to mene thik se naam nahi dekha tha sry

hahahhaha its ok :)

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Shreya

@krasforever

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome start!!!!!!!!!!!
n description of the girl was too good...

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Superbly written. The pain the song the emotions yaar it is just out of the world. It is a bit spooky to think they are all in the midst of forest with vamps out their. You have got a beautiful way to narrate and keep the readers on the edge. Well done and plz contine fast.

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

It's awesome yar! :)

Continue soon...

I guess the girl is Kria, right?

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

😊Please pm me when u update...looking forward to this interesting story

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update...loved it very much

that girl was awesome...and i think that was kria

i loved the way you described her condition, her pain...it was awesome

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing update:):)
Luvd it;);)
I think dat gal s kriya...!!
Waiting for d next part:)

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

I liked this part, the story is quite different and nicely penned..!

The whole sequence of horror, the girl roaming around and singing and the old man created a horrific atmosphere..!

good job!

thanks for the pm

update asap!

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awsm update nimmi...

Was that girl kriya?

Thx for pm

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Iram Shaikh

@Shantanufan4evr

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

loved the girl singing part
yhe update was awesome

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