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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Ha ha! This si getting really lovely, isn't it!

Much of challenges to make one suited to other!!

ASR is dismissed by Kushi whilst their first official couple talk.. Aww..!

Loved it.. Thanks for the PM..

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jenshadrocks

@jenshadrocks

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

very nice...seems june is so far to wait:-)update soon

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

luved it

luved the way khushi challenged arnav.

looking forward to seeing how the story progresses

thx a lot for the pm

continue soon

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kethgauthami1

@kethgauthami1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

loved the update but cant wait till june caroline...please try to update soon...and the previous update is also rocking

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

what an attitude khushi...good job just keep it up all for woman power

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

oh poor arnav,challenging lioness

i cudnt understand the 100 girl concept, is he true or just to make her jealous

precap is very much interesting

amazing, pls cont soon, thx a lot fr pm

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Livetoparty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

Amazing ...Khushi is so full of life...already waiting for next update

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Just read the last to updates, so much fun to read.

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#339

Chapter 3 was just out of the world!

The way you penned Arnav and Khushi's feelings and how both of them seemed to challenge each other was amazing!

Very well penned!

I really love the dialogues, they are very effective!

Good job!

Here are a few I really appreciate-

"What belongs to me, I call it what I want"

"I will give you a month's time, if in that month you can convince me you have the qualities to be my husband, I shall stay with you, otherwise I shall leave"

Arnav was appalled, this chit was giving him time?

"And I give you one month's time, to get used to the fact Arnav Singh Raizada doesnt let go of things that belong to him"

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Chapter 4 was outstanding!

I love your work Caroline! :)

Well penned..but quite short..!

Khushi has created such a havoc in his room and there our Raizada is so irritated by her!

and then the qualities she mentioned were nice..!

I guess after a month, both of them would be changed completely!

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