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mehak arora

@Mojo.

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

HEY :D Superb part, loved em! <3 By every update I fall for Maan Geet more and more and more :P I just loved the two <3 I really AW Maan for what he did for Geet, he gave such an amazing answer to Brij, WOW! HAHAHAHA :P What an amazing way to learn martial arts :P Amazing updates, keep up the great work thank you for the pm :)

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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

the update was awsome 👏👏👏

love the way you're taking the story and the pace of the story seems to make it so natural

superb story line.. do update soon waiting anxiously

love

Noor

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Now... am waiting for the next update

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

waiting for the next part

update soon

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.lovemaaneet.

@.lovemaaneet.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

yar u got ur likes now its time for an update waiting for it

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OsheenDGr8

@OsheenDGr8

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

KHUMAARI- Beauty With The Beast
PART- 33

@love2_soma

Loved ur lines dear...

@supriyaanand

Sunaina's chapter is not over n why r u nt replying me on FB... I wont eat u😊

@abisamratgunjan

Mr. Singh is the princi of Geet's school

@sarah_zaisha

No belans please😛

I got my lesson, not to set mark lol😆 U guys are so fast... U ol made me update the very next day... So here it goes😊

Maan looked above from his file n found her lost n not concentrating on her work. That was odd, she always gave full attention to the work in hand.

They were in study, working but Geet was sitting absently with some long forgotten book in hand. Something was distrubing her n he needed to find out. If it was bothering her then it was his worry too.

He stood up from his chair n sat on the couch beside her.

Geet... She looked in front where he was sitting previously but then discovered he sitting beside her.

Ji... Geet answered looking into his eyes.

What happened? He asked, his face unreadable but care etched in his dark orbs.

Nai kuch nai... She stood up not wanting to confront him right now. Mai aapki coffee lati hu.

But running away was not an option. Maan held her hand n pulled her into his lap.

There is no point hiding from me. Maan said n she knew it was true.

He tucked the loose strands of hair behind her ear to get a better view of her angelic face. She looked here n there nervously his touch giving her goosebumps.

You can share with me. He said not getting anything else to speak. He was never good with these type of talks.

Wo wo... She fumbled, playing with his shirt button. Wo next month baccho ke exams shuru ho rahe hai toh mujhe darr lag raha hai aur 3 din mein school ka annual function hai, uski tension bhi hai.

She lied with a stone on her heart, the problem was Mr. Singh. First she thought of his gestures as a fragment of her imagination but the day when she rejoined the school after coming back from Mukki, he held her hand n told that he missed her.

She just jerked her hand away terrified. But that day she became sure that the bad vibes she was getting from him were not baseless. His dirty touches n looks contuinued n she felt disgusted of herself.

Everytime he touched her or stared at her she felt like cheating on Maan. Her each cell n nerve was named his no other man even had the right to see her in that way. But she kept silent n tried to ignore Mr. Singh as much as possible finding no other option available.

She did'nt wanted to include Maan either, she knew how possessive he was, he would kill Mr. Singh bare handed or could even ask her to quit teaching which she loved dearly.

Maan delicately holding her chin made her look into his eyes n found her eyes filled with tears, tears of helplessness, tears of guilt for lying.

Everything will be fine. Maan assured giving a faint smile though he knew her reason was not worth getting tense but she was Geet n she could get scared of the silliest things.

His assurance was enough to give her courage. She hugged him showing her gratitude while Maan hugged her back.

Before he thought about physical intimacy only but now he was aware,
that a warm heartfelt hug does have its own importance in a relationship. (by aashluvsmaan😊)

Maan nuzzled her neck making her giggle.

Maan mai aapse ek baat kahu??

Haan...

She leaned back to look at him. You look beautiful when you smile. She said softly, blushing hard.

God! How can someone be innocently arousing. He thought n pushed her down so that she was lying on couch below him. Until she was with him he always had a reason to smile.

Maan mujhe bahut saara kaam hai...

First complete mine... He said naughtily n took her lips into his, his hands exploring her hidden treasures.

Guess who?

You should'nt be here Su. Maan said coldly removing the pair of hands from his eyes. How peacefully he was sitting in living room checking his mails but seems like god was not liking his happiness. Thank god Dadimaa was not at home.

I am back. Sunaina chirruped, her face dripping with tons of make up.

Headache is back. Maan thought then spoke aloud. I told you clearly not to come here.

Comeon MK I am back after so many days from Dubai. She cooed.

You were in Dubai? He asked.

Yeah... She screeched. I had informed you before leaving.

Whatever. You are not allowed here Su, so leave.

Well I thought you would like to have some fun. Sunaina trailed her finger on his cheek, her long nail painted red like a witch. If you want I can stay here tonight.

Maan rolled his eyes.

Su you don't understand my simple words. I said I don't want you here. So just leave right now. His voice was loud n clear n she understood he won't give in. It would be better to leave for now.

Fine. She said making a face. I will see you in office.

She left, her high heels making irritating click-clock sound. Maan again was going continue checking mails but insead his eyes met Geet's.

Dinner is ready. She said with a smile. Surely she knew that Maan was previously involved with Sunaina but she believed him more then herself. Her heart was only filled with love for him n there was no space for doubt. So she did'nt asked any question n gave him the freedom to deal with Sunaina in his own way.

Geet... Geet looked behind at the sound of her name n saw Pinky walking hastily towards her, with a burgur in hand.

The bell has rung which means the recess is over. Geet said chuckling n resumed walking to her class while Pinky fell in step beside her.

Wo sab chod... What are you wearing for the annual function? She asked excited to the core.

Abhi tak soch nai maine. Geet replyed.

Kya? Abhi tak nai socho. I brought my dress a week ago. You know who is the chief guest? Pinky asked not believing that Geet still did'nt knew

what to wear for the function.

Na... Geet was going to answer but just then a girl passed them like lighting n with her gesticulates it seemed like she was crying.

She is Riya. Right? Class 9th. Geet said n they both followed Riya into the girls washroom. The washroom was deserted at the moment as the classes had already started.

They found Riya bundled up in a corner crying her eyes out.

Kya hua Riya? Geet asked the pretty girl, kneeling beside her on the floor.

She did'nt answered n kept sobbing hidding her face in her arms that were folded over her knees so tightly as if she was trying to protect herself.

Geet gave a puzzled look to Pinky to which she just shrugged.

Riya you don't need to fear us. Geet said n Riya looked at her. Geet blinked her eyes encouraging her to speak.

I had not completed my homework so Khusboo Ma'am asked me to go to Principal Sir. I went to his cabin. Riya said in between sobs. There he closed the door, I was alone with him n... n... he tried to k..kiss me. Someone knocked the door n somehow I ran out.

She again started crying bitterly n Geet eyes also became misty seeing the young girl's torment.

How can someone be so cruel. A teacher's place is regarded higher than the god n here he was misusing his place as a principal, taking advantage of poor girls. That was not at all acceptable. Geet's patience broke that very second Geet decided to show Mr. Singh his right place. It was time for him to learn how to respect woman.

He should learn that a girl is not just a piece of meat but a living creature who has the right to live without a vulture always fying over her to tear her apart.

IMP: Friends add this ID bcoz from now on I'll be sending PMs from this ID only... though it will be really helpful if u could follow fb for updates😳

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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 13 years ago

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

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yeee me first

will comment after reading

me stalking u

had a feeling u will update

Sorry for delay Power cut

😕

Just ❤️ this maan

The metamorphosis of Maan from a ruthless inhuman individual to a responsible,caring n loving husband.

😳

The eyes which looked down upon Geet as a piece of filth not even worth talking, today those very eyes want to read the unsaid words in Geet's eyes.

😲

Till sometime back Geet's body was just a medium to quench his lust, today that very Geet's slightest discomfort makes him restless n worried

😊

KUDOS to you for bringing such changes to our notice through ur writing

🤗

Singh Grrr😡

Pervert

Seriously such cheapos should be whipped in public who tarnish noble profession of a teacher, teacher are supposed to be second to God as they enlighten u with knowledge

Thanks u really brought the seriousness of the problem by involving a kid (Riya) 😭 poor thing

I presume any woman generally does realise the look of a person wether it is genuine or no, that means other females also may be facing the same kind of problem with Singh, I feel Geet should also confront Khushboo as how can she be so irresponsible to send a young girl alone to Singh's cabin.

This is just my POV that Khushboo should have been careful

😔

So the chief guest is MSK

Time for Mr Singh😡 to face MSK n GMSK

Please let Maan break his bones

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Any relationship holds on mutual love n trust

Geet trusts Maan blindly with Su

Though he will be dead angry, I so want Maan to trust Geet in the Singh matter,understanding why she did'nt confide in him.

Taking their relation another step forward instilling deep faith in them

😃

That was too long n emotional comment