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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Mid multiple Ids hai Vaishu.

Khushi vaishu is in all go to know atlest a truth .
Yup[ S u realy had a long nd tiring journey.


Haha yea... Lagta hai she will end up finding about one thing or another 😆
It seems as if it was just yesterday that I was on vacations there... 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
di mausam ... iski vajah se huya...

NS pyaar aur dosti mein fayda nuksaan nhi dekhte... hum teri baat maante haina... matlab main toh maanti hun na... ( baaki ka main nhi guarantee le rhi hun )

toh kareeban ek baar tu bhi kar na...

*melodramatic style*

tujhe un raaton ( tere liye evenings )ka vaasta jo humne saath chat karte huye bitayin thi... ( main likhne wali thi ki jo humne saath bitayi... but nhi likha.. leads to double meaning )

jab main tere saath baith ke likes count karti thi jab mujhe update chahiye hota tha.,...

jab main un tanha raaton mein IJD ke thread mein tere saath rha katrti thi...

woh saare dinon ka vaasta...

bata de NS... bata de NS...

aakhir DP mein kaun tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



P.S: i promise i will keep my mouth shut...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

hey its awesome
loved it
kria a secret agent wow...


Thanks chetna!! Glad you like the idea 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..


home tutor, person comes home and teaches you everything one on one. Regular tutor, there's a whole class and you have to go there. It's not just you and tutor but many more students.



seriously mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha...,

stupid..

me asking education wise...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhi_d3

Wooaah! I loved this chapter Khushi! :)

Through out this part my eyes were glued on the screen, I guess I even forgot to blink! :P
Well, well, well it was definitely one of the best stuff I ever read on the secret agent thing.
The way Kriya was introduced and then her conversation with Rajveer and Karan was well penned. I loved all those dialogues, quite effective I must say.
So, Kriya is moving to Mumbai to protect Rey whose father called up FBI a few days back. That was a surprise!
I am really loving the way this story is proceeding.
You are undoubtedly an amazing writer! :)

So, there's one thing I want to know that why is Kriya restricted from dancing? Can you please answer that if possible.

Well penned!
I hope this comment made you happy! :)
plz update asap!
thanks for the pm


Aww thank you so much Surbhi!!! This is a really sweet comment. Thank you! 🤗I'm super happy ki you loved the update, introduction, the conversations and everything about it. Glad you're loving it so far. Hope I don't disappoint :D Thank you so much for the compliments 🤗 She is restricted by her own wish and also because of a past that will reveal in first 10 chapters of the story 😳
It surely made me super duper happy! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

seriously mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha...,

stupid..

me asking education wise...


education wise hi toh kaha.. 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
education wise as in kya padhaya jaata hai wise
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

di mausam ... iski vajah se huya...

NS pyaar aur dosti mein fayda nuksaan nhi dekhte... hum teri baat maante haina... matlab main toh maanti hun na... ( baaki ka main nhi guarantee le rhi hun )

toh kareeban ek baar tu bhi kar na...

*melodramatic style*

tujhe un raaton ( tere liye evenings )ka vaasta jo humne saath chat karte huye bitayin thi... ( main likhne wali thi ki jo humne saath bitayi... but nhi likha.. leads to double meaning )

jab main tere saath baith ke likes count karti thi jab mujhe update chahiye hota tha.,...

jab main un tanha raaton mein IJD ke thread mein tere saath rha katrti thi...

woh saare dinon ka vaasta...

bata de NS... bata de NS...

aakhir DP mein kaun tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



P.S: i promise i will keep my mouth shut...


O M GEE!!! aab mai iske baare mai kya bolu? 😲 Humne bohut pal saath bitaye re 🤗 Par phir bhi... me not gonna tell aur dekh, you're my true friend so friend ki baat maan le aur aab mat puchna please... 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
The subjects you ask for. You have the same options as a kid going to school would.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vaishu itni dramatic nah ban.Varna mai bhi ho jaungi.
pehele hi tujhe tortutere kar rahi hu mai.

Aur lagtha hai woh personal hai warna Khushi jarur bata deti nah hume.


Khushi:ro mat.u'll come back here soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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