tere liye- Angad, Garv, Kumud, kripa

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IntGarv, and Angad are brothers who are so carefree in their lives that they don't care about anything. Their grandfather is rich, and all they do is have fun on their grandfather's money. Garv is the older brother and Angad is a year younger. Garv being the big brother has a steady girl friend whose name is Kumud, and Angad on the other hand is a playa! Lol. he changes girls almost every day. These two brothers are really close to each other, they share practically everything with each other. Their grandfather, Mr. Khanna is very concerned about his grandsons, and his only wish for his grandsons is that they get married and to him that will be the beginning of their responsible lives. Their parents die in a car accidents and their grandfather is the one who brought them up.

Garv 25: handsome, very lazy, only cares about enjoying and hanging out with friends , no goal in his life besides chilling. But is truly in love with his girlfriend, Kumud.

Angad 24: handsome, Casanova, doesn't stick to one girl. A party animal.

Kumud 24: Loves Garv but wants him to have a goal in his life, she wants him to succeed on his own feet.

Kripa 23: a club dancer, does so to support her family, does not like it but she is the one who her family depends on for the money. She has no choice but it is not a vulgar club. She is a very good dancer and performs decent songs for the club.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 1
Garv and Angad are at the breakfast table with their dadaji.

Dadaji: Good morning boys!

Garv and Angad: Good morning dadaji

D: so what are ur plans for today? Anything productive or just fooling around with girls (talking to angad) Garv u need to join me in the business, I think you are old enough to take the responsibility. You know your father, my son, joined me when he was in his teens. I know you are talented, u are capable all u have to do is try which u aren't. Angad is your younger brother, he will follow you, like he followed u into being useless, he will follow u into becoming useful.

Garv and Angad are bored of their old man's lecture.

G: Ji dadaji. You are right, but I am too young to join u in the business, when papa joined you it was a different time, I wanna live my life, I wanna enjoy it. And besides why do angad and I need to work, we have got all the money we can have, even more.

A: Bhaiya is right. Dadu you need to relax, guess what, ur angad and garv are living your youth. Dadu u struggled all your youth and never got to enjoy yourself. Aapki jawaani aayi or chali bhi gayi, we are just enjoying your share of youth too, dadu. You know what give me another six months and I will join u. I don't know about bhaiya.

Dadaji is happy that angad is gonna join him siz months, and then he looks at garv, waiting for an answer.

G: What?

D: aren't u going to do the same.
G: Dadu, I will be honest with u. I am not interested in this business stuff. I wanna do something different, something cool.

The servant comes and hands over a mail to garv. Garv opens it and reads it, he is very happy.

A: What is it bhaiya? Why are u so happy?

Garv hands over the mail to Angad, he is shocked. Angad then passes it to Dadu, who is shocked as well. What could it be in the mail?




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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh wow....seems really interesting and different! Awesome character intro...Looking forward to reading the story 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2

Dadu looks at the mail and is shocked in an angered manner.
D: What in the world is this, don't tell me you are serious about this?
G: I am dadu.
D: Angad tell him to change his mind.
A: Yea, bhaiya. Dadu is right this is stupid. I mean you can't do this to us.
D: Angad the question is not about us, the question is about him. Garv this is not your piece of cake, the Army is not where u belong,
G: what are u trying to say dadu? U are saying that I am a failure.
D: No, all I am saying is that u need to be self disciplined, know ur goals, be a determined person, which u are not, at least not right now.
G: dadu, I expected this kind of a response from you, all I wanna say about this is that I am going to join the army, and that's final - this is the only way I am gonna prove myself to you.
D: don't make false promises to urself.
G: dadu, u can never understand me, u have always discouraged me and continue on doing so, but I am not gonna be dejected coz I am used to this attitude on your side.
D: I have my reasons for doing so, and by the way if you come back without getting into the army, u r going to join me in the business whether u like it or not.
G: U can't make me.
D: Its' a challenge.
G: Fine.
A: Oh come on guys chill out. Bhaiya, u are sacrificing ur freedom.
G: I don't care, it about time, I do something about this joining the business thingi and end it once and for all.
D: U are gonna regret It son.
G: Dadu, I am ur grandson, I am stubborn like yourself.
D: well then done, if u get in the army I will get off your back about joining the army and support you, but if u don't u are gonna join the business.
G: Done.

They shake hands, Garv goes and Angad follows him.

A: See ya dadu.
D: Bye, take care.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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so nice.Grand starting.u no my old Garv-kumud fic's name was also tere liye
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks guys will continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3
Garv and Angad are outside, about to go somewhere.

A: Bhai, where u going? Kumud ke paas?
G: Yea, n u?
A: I have a date.
G: Subah subah?
A: yup, got 4 dates today bhai!
G: tu kabhi nahin sudhrega
A: Bhai how can u stick to one girl, and that too someone like kumud, I mean she is so bossy, she is a journalist too.
G: What's journalism got to do with this?
A: No, bhai u aint seeing the connection, here. U see journalists are soooo nosy and so u know - I mean …
G: Angad mere bhai, don't think too much. U won't understand so I won't even go there, once u will fall in love, u will understand it all on ur own.
A: Bhai, whatever. All I can say is that this is the only thing we differ in, but hey what's with this army thingi. Are u serious, or just to shut dadu up.
G: I am serious.
A: You don't have to do this.
G: I have to in order to prove to myself and dadu and everybody else who think I am a loser.
A: you won't change ur mind.
G: No.
A: Well suit yourself. I am gone, to meet priya, then riya, then jiya, then liya, then diya…
G: Bus, kar yaar!
A: aur ek hai!
G: Angad!
A: ok I am sorry bhai, today u are very angry- so I will let u go. See you tomorrow morning.
G: what, u aint gonna be back home
A: 4 am is morning na bhaiya.
G: right (they both laugh) I am such a fool. Go ahead have fun.
A: thanks bhai, u have FUN too.
G: ok.

They both hop in their respective convertibles and go to meet their ladies. For Angad its LADIESssssssssssssssssss.

Part 4 coming soon.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome job! Hmm....I kinda like Garv's attitude better than Angad's, in the aspect that he is only sticking with Kumud 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 4

Garv comes to meet Kumud at her place. Kumud lives with her parents, but right now her parents are not at home. Kumud's parents also think that Garv is good for nothing and that he needs to do something in life before they give away their daughter to him. They are aware that he is from a rich family. But they want their daughter's husband to be an independent man.

Kumud: Hi Garv
G: hi, your mom dad aren't at home?
k: nope, they went to some seminar.
G: hmmm.
K: What's wrong, y do u sound so upset?

Kumud is sitting on the sofa, Garv just lays his head on her lap and tries to relax, u know in a sleeping way. She caresses him, she makes him feel like she is there for him.

G: Kumud, why are u the only one who bears with me, excluding Angad, he is just like me but yea why do u love me?
K: Because you are hot
G: can't argue about that one

They both laugh and kiss.

G: no seriously, Kumud
K: I know you are capable of achieving the best, you just need that motivation to achieve that….
G: What's the word?
K: What word?
G: In English it is objective. Or goal. What is it in Hindi?
K: The word is LAKSHYA!
G: right, Lakshya.
K: You just need that.
G: I think I have found it.
K: Really. Kya hai tumhara lakshya.
G: besides, you?
K: Yea!
G: I am joining the Army.
K: That's great, I am sure you will make it jaanu. I am so happy for ya.
G: you are the only one supporting my decision.
K: coz that's what u want, right? I mean I hope you doing this because YOU want to.
G: I really want to.
K: Well then, I can't say anything to discourage you. Now is that why u were upset coz other people are not supporting you.
G: Yea! But now I don't care, as long as you are by my side.
K: I am always by your side.
G: I love you, Kumud.
K: I love you too, Mr. Garv Khanna or soon to be Captain Garv Khanna.

They both laugh and cuddle up to watch a movie or something.

Next scene.

It is almost 9 pm and surprisingly Mr. Angad Khanna is done with his dates, and he decides to go to a club with his secretary, who manages his expenditure, and dadaji has asked him to go around with Angad and make sure he controls his spending. Unfortunately the secretary ends up falling into Angad's trap and covers all the bad stuff that Angad does and calculates only half of what Angad spends or even less.

Angad and his secretary reach at a club, where Kripa dances. Now lets name the secretary Mr. Singh. Kripa starts performing, Angad is blown away by Kripa's simplicity and her beauty, she is probably the most beautiful girl he has seen. Angad joins her too, they both dance and Kripa begins to like him. Angad approaches Kripa in a prince charming manner. Kripa is impressed by Angad because he is not indecent like other guys who make nasty gestures at her. He is a total charmer. Kripa has a good impression of him by the end of the dance.

The same night Angad ends up at Kripa's dressing room.

A: Hello Ms…
K: Kripa, mera naam Kripa.
A: Well, Ms. Kripa… just wanted to tell you that I am a fan of your dancing.
K: Aap khud bahut acha dance karte hai, it was fun.
A: you meant funNY?
K: No, I really had fun, you are a good dancer Mr…
A: Oh I am sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. I am Angad, Angad Khanna.
K: Nice to meet you Mr. Angad Khanna.
A: Hey.. Its VERY nice to meet you.

Kripa blushes.

A: So u wanna go have some coffee?
K: Umm, no thanks, I am getting late, some other time, good night.

Kripa takes her stuff and leaves.

A: Man she is really something. I like her, but I think she is different, other wise Angad Khanna ko koi no thanks kehkar nahi chala jaata. No No.
I need to find out about her, Mr. Singh please get me some information about this girl, other than what I know. Got it?

S: Yes, sir! I think the club owner might know something about her.

A: good job Mr. Singh, after a long time, you have said something intelligent. Ms. Kripa get ready to be swept off by Angad Khanna.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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this is the best part till now

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