Originally posted by: lazyleaves
Me first me first. Do you know I am stalking you since 3 a.m. (IST)? I tried to sleep but couldnt wondering when will you update. Then I checked the time of your previous updates at 5 a.m. So it was decided I have to be awake till 6 a.m. 😃
Enough of my ranting lets talk about the update that I was stalking 😊
This is such a nice and feel good SS. Aww Arnav must truly like Khushi. If it werent the case he will never wake up early in the morning to meet her AND get her Chai Tea and Doughnuts (hey but he hates doughnuts coz they made Khushi forget his coffee 😛 but khair 'tumko jo pasand wahi kaam karege' 😉 that too chocolate filled plus initiate the converstion.
Was Arnav slightly elated to feel that Khushi was at his house?
I can totally relate to Khushi. The way she closed her eyes and asked Arnav to undress the mannequins 😉 so that she doesnt get confused super duper cute 😊
He will actually let the models wear her ensemble! Now thats the hot and sexy minus the jerky ASR that I love
Akash's love progress is good for you. You have to write lesser stuttering dialogues 😃
Akash dropped Payal
Arnav dropped Khushi
Akash takes Payal on a date
Arnav takes Khushi on a date
One other thing I like about your SS is that you have not emphasised on their physical tension but have focussed on their dialogues and behaviour
P. S. You were waiting for page no. 101 to be filled up so that you could update on the first post of this page?
Aww bless, you shouldn't stay up so late! The update will still be there in the morning!
Glad you liked it so much. :D
Yeah I was waiting for the page to finish because I prefer updating near the top of a new page :)
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