Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar# 11 LINK THRD 12 Pg 142 - Page 66

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
Here is the next update I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it. I dedicate this part to my friend Bhanu (bhanurekhag)
love-Piya
PART 103



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Maaneet (together): Hume nafrat hai uss jhooth se jo hum keh rahe the kyunki sach toh ye hai ke humari mohabbat mein itni sachhayi hai ke hume ek dusre ki khamiyoon se bhi pyar hai'humare rishte ki neev itni mazboot hai ke nafrat ki talwaar iss rishte ko kabhi chunauti de hi nahi sakthi'Haan hume pyar hai ek dusre ki har choti badi baat se aur ye pyar yuhi barkarar rahega umrbhar khatm na hoga humare wafao ka ye safar [We hate the lie that we were narrating as our love is so pure that our weakness also appear to take the form of our strength. The foundation of our relationship is so strong that the sword of hatred cannot challenge the divinity of our love. Yes we are in love with every small and big thing that each one of us possesses and this love will continue to blossom throughout our life as the journey of our loyality will continue to spread its shine forever and ever]

Dadima had tears in her eyes as the entire family started applauding in happiness and showered their blessings on our beloved couple

Dadima moved towards Maaneet and touched their heads lovingly

Maaneet come out of their hug and Dadima takes both of them in her embrace

Dadima: Aaj aap donone ye baat saabit kar di ke agar pyar sachha ho toh bade se bade toofan se bhi muskurakar kashti paar ki jaa sakthi hai [Today both of u have proved that if your love is true then the ship of a relationship can successfully reach its shore despite of a challenging storm]

Annie comes and hugs Geet

Annie: Haye aap dono ne toh mera game yun chutikyon mein badal diya maan gaye aap dono ki mohabbat ko [Both of u changed the entire game in a matter of seconds I salute your love]

Dev and Meera also join the remaining members

Dev: Ab humari family complete hai aur rab kare ke humari family mein yuhi khushiyaan barkaar rahe aur ek saath milkar hum sab har ek musibat ka saamna yuhi pyar se kare. Thanks Bro thanks Bhabhi aaj aap dono ne hum sabko pyar ka sahi matlab samjhakar hume rishto ki ehmiyat ki samaj di hai [Our family is complete now and I hope the Almighty continues to bless us with happiness in the future as well so that together we find the strength to face all the hard times with a smile on our face. Thanks Bro and thanks Bhabhi for teaching us the lesson of true love which made us understand the depth and sacred bond of relationships]

Maan wanted to lighten the mood as all of a sudden everyone was getting emotional so he decided to wake up the naughty MSK again

Maan: Dev tumne baaki ki baat toh sahi ki par ek bahut badi galat baat keh di tumne jisse ke wo naraaz ho jaayegi [Dev whatever u told was fine but u also uttered a wrong statement, she will get angry if she comes to know about this]

Everyone was confused

Meera: Wo kaun jijaji? [Whom r u referring to?]

Maan: Wahi jo aanewali hai [The one who is going to come]

Annie: Kaun aanewali hai bhai? [Who is coming Bhai?]

Maan: Uske aane ke liye abhi waqt hai badi planning karni padegi uske swagat ke liye par uske bagair humari family complete ho hi nahi sakthi haina Geet? [It will take some time for her arrival as we need to do a good planning to welcome her in our lives but one thing is sure our family will get complete only after her arrival right Geet?]

Dadima: Geet bete Maan kiski baat kar rahe hai? [Geet what is Maan trying to tell?]

Geet: Dadima mujhe kuch nahi pata [Dadima I am clueless]

Dadima: Maan khulkar batiye aap kiski baat kar rahe hai [Maan be clear what r u trying to tell?]

Maan: Dadima main toh aapki pothi yaani ki mere aur Geet ki beti ki baat kar raha hoon afterall humari beti ke bajaye humari family kaise complete ho sakthi hai [Dadima I am talking about your granddaughter i.e. Geet and my daughter our family will only be complete after her arrival]

Geet's cheeks were beetroot red; she immediately hid her face in Dadima's shoulder

Dadima held Maan's ear and twisted it lovingly

Dadima: Humari beti ko pareshan karne mein maza aa raha hai aapko dekhiye sharm se paani paani ho gayi hai humari phool si bacchi [U enjoy teasing my dear daughter just have a look she is melting like ice in embarrassment]

Maan: Ahh..Dadima dard ho raha hai ab maine sach toh kaha waise bhi maine toh future ki puri taiyaari kar rakhi hai ab shadi hui hai toh bachhe toh honge hina haan ab kitne honge ye nahi pata par ek cricket team toh banti hai [Oh Dadima it's paining and what is my fault I just shared my future plans I mean we r married so naturally we will have kids ya I m not sure about the number though but I guess it won't be bad to have a whole cricket team]

Geet raised her head in utter shock and looked at Maan

Maan gave her a naughty wink

Geet: Hayo rabba [O God]

Geet was so shy that she couldn't meet anyone's gaze

She tried to escape from there when Maan caught hold of her hand

Maan: Maayari ye toh batathi jau ke apne Dhust danav ka plan kaisa laga? [Maayari how did u find the plan of your Dhust Danav?]

Geet pushed him with fake anger

Geet: Aaj ki raat outhouse mein bitane ke liye taiyaar rahiyega [Be ready to stay at the outhouse tonight]

Geet left for her room leaving a shocked Maan behind

Dev couldn't control his laughter

Dev: Bro apni si panga lekar aapne bahut galat kiya ab saza paane ke liye taiyaar rahiye [Bro u invited trouble by messing with ur wife now enjoy your punishment]

Maan: Geet aisa nahi karegi wo mujhse bahut pyar karti hai [Geet won't do that she loves me a lot]

Annie: Pyar toh karti hai par aapne jo bhabhi ko chedne ki galti ki haina uske liye aapko unhe manana padega ya phir outhouse mein bhabhi ke khayalo ke saath enjoy kijiye [Yes she loves u but u tried to tease her and u need to find a special way to pacify her or else enjoy your date in the empty outhouse with the memories of ur beloved wife]

Maan made a cute puppy dog face just with the thought of staying away from Geet and spending the night at the outhouse

Dadima caressed his head naughtily

Dadima: Outhouse mein akele raat bitane ke liye all the best bete humari best wishes aapke saath hai [All the best for your night at the outhouse Maan my best wishes are with u]

The foursome started laughing

Maan: Has lijiye raat tak toh main apni Maayari ko mana hi lunga [I will surely find a way to pacify my Maayari till the night]

Dadima: Aap apni dil ki dhadkan ko manane ki taiyaari kijiye Annie aur Meera aap dono humare saath chaliye uss special function ki taiyaari karni hai[U think of ways to pacify the beats of ur heart till then Annie and Meera come with me as I need to discuss something important realted to the special function]

Dev: Kaunsa special function Dadima? [Which special function Dadima?]

Dadima: Hum aapko jald hi bata denge bete tab tak aap apne Maan bhai ko emotional support dijiye [U will get to know soon till then u give emotional support to your brother]

All the 3 ladies laugh at Maan's condition and head start walking towards Dadima's room

Dev: Bro main aapki haalat samaj saktha hoon [Bro I can understand your feelings]

Maan gave him a typical MSK glare which was enough to seal Dev's lips

Dev: Bro main office ja raha hoon Adi aur meri ek meeting hai [Bro I think I should head for the office as I have to attend a meeting with Adi]

Without waiting for a reply Dev rushed out of KM

Maan: Haye ab main apni Maayari ko kaise manau [How am I supposed to pacify my Maayari?]

Maan started thinking

Meanwhile,

Maaneet's room

Geet started removing some night wear of Maan, some sheets, pillows and all the necessary items that he would require to sleep peacefully in the outhouse

Geet was scanning their cupboard and was making sure that she had all the necessary items ready for Maan's date with the outhouse as today she was in no mood to let him in during the night

Geet: Maan bade shararthi ho gaye ho aap wo alag baat hai ke mujhe aapki shararate pasand hai par phir bhi aapko ye saza milegi hi aaj ki raat aap pillow ko apni Maayari samajkar seene se lagakar baitiyega yahi aapki saza hai mujhe chedne ki [Maan u have turned naughty nowadays its true I love your mischiefs but u deserve a punishment for this naughty act of yours, today consider the pillow to be your Maayari by keeping it close to your heart]

She removed 2-3 night wear of Maan it seemed she was planning to punish him for a longer duration of time though her heart knew that eventually she would end up landing in her charming husband's embrace but it was not a bad idea to trouble him for a small duration of time

As Geet was busy removing the clothes from the wardrobe her hand accidently touched a small black box that was lying in one corner of the wardrobe

The box landed on the floor and Geet's eyes started examining the box

Geet: Ye kaunsa box hai aur humare cupboard mein ye kya kar raha hai [What's there in this box and what is it doing in our cupboard?]

Geet picked up the box

She could sense a strange negative vibe as soon as she got hold of the box

She was the heartbeat of Maan and as soon as she touched the box her heart could sense an unsaid pain of Maan

The romantic and teasing air of their room got converted into a dreadful and horrifying nightmare

She started feeling insecure as her breaths started becoming heavy making her realize that this object had a strong connection with her soul, her Maan

She was the fragrance of Maan's soul and her heart was giving her clear indications that the color of the box explained the content of this box aptly

Some dark spell was hidden inside this box which was giving her signals that this is one aspect of Maan's life which had the potential to destroy him emotionally

Yes it had the power to shatter and stab his innocent soul with the swords of his terrible past

No she won't let it happen her love had the divine touch to destroy the entire evil spell of this hidden element

Geet decided to open the box as she wanted to find the reason which was challenging the peace of her Maan

As soon as Geet opened the box the negative vibes started to become dominant

There was a strange strength in her angelic eyes, this was the light of her unconditional love for her Maan she was ready to fight this spell and destroy it completely with her one look

She scanned the box and was surprised to find a photograph in it

It was a lady's photo and somehow she could connect the broken threads of her Maan's heart and his hatred towards marriage

Geet: Ye kiski tasveer hai? Kya yahi aurat wo kadi hai jiski wajah se mere Maan shadi se nafrat karte the? Najaane kyun mere Maan ki chupi hui takleef aur tadap ki wajah mujhe iski shakal mein nazar aa rahi hai. Kaun ho sakthi hai ye? [Who is the lady in this photograph? Is she responsible for Maan's hatred towards marriage? Why am I getting the feeling that she is the one who is responsible for the unsaid pain of my Maan? Who is she? ]

Maan: Ye aurat meri maa hai Geet [She is my mother Geet]

Geet turned around and saw a blend of anger, frustration and pain in her charming husband's eyes

She couldn't see this pain and immediately ran and hugged him protectively giving him the assurance of her love, telling him that she is there in every phase of his life be it present, future as well as his past

Maan hugged her back and closed the door of their room

He knew it was time to tell Geet about the most painful element of his past life which made him a ruthless and insensitive guy before his angel his Geet entered as a guiding star in his life

PRECAP: Maan's past

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cute part
hmmm can't wait for the past !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind Blowing Update
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Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb 😊
maan is really too naughty😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooo kya update Negative wibes physics mera picha kahi nai chodta .. i just lv maneet kya teasing session mast tha... haaye maahhhiii ...

Zindagi ke kaale andhero se
Tuffan ki vo aahat
Kya todh dega
Uss rishte ko ??

Janane ke liye keep reading MERE HUMSAFAR ...

yeaaah acha dialogue na ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part..😃
Sach mein maan s becumg naughty day by day...😉
i loved the punishment she was going to give..😆
But since the past came in front of her,maan needs her nw the most...
Loved the depth of geet's love..
Just by the mere sight of the box she was able to c maan's pain..
so ds was the start of the twist!!!!gud one piya... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice partwaiting to know maan's past
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Maan is sooo naughty hayeee
nd love deir cute moments
nd maan words r short to describe his love
awsome blossom nd maan punishment to sleep in outhouse
nd precap seems onteresting
maan past
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb love it waiting for there past to reveal
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After the teasing session its time for some painful truths...

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