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lovely ff ,where do u get these unique ideas from ? waiting for update pl update soon
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
I dedicate this part to my dearest friend Kat (dumas) as she was the only one who could guess the hint behind the precap 😊
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PART 97

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Maan took her viel and without breaking the kiss he placed the viel on their heads; as this world belonged only to them and no one had the right to enter this world as here they were no longer Maan and Geet they were Maaneet

He took Geet in his possessive embrace and responded to the kiss with equal passion and offcourse with an undying love whose beauty and sacredness was greater than the godliness of the Almighty himself

Their lips were still glued to each other when Maan carefully scooped Geet in his arms and carried her to her room thus completing the ritual in style

Dadima: Aaj se Khurana Khandan mein jitni bhi shadiyaan hongi usmein ye kissing ka ritual compulsory hoga [From today all the marriages that would take place in our house it would have a kissing ritual for sure]

Annie: Wow Dadima kitna maza aayega haina Dev bhai [Wow Dadima this would be so exciting right Dev bhai?]

But Dev was embarrassed after hearing Dadima's announcement of this new tradition without saying anything he left that place

All the ladies started laughing at his shyness and innocence

Dev was walking in the gallery when he heard Meera's voice

Meera: Dev rukhiye toh [Dev pls stop]

Dev: Kya hua Meera aap thik toh haina? [What's the matter Meera r u alright?]

Meera: Ji Dev wo bus aaj aapse thik se baat nahi ho paayina issliye socha k abhi aapse kuch baatcheet kar lijaaye [Yes Dev we didn't get time to talk to each other so I thought why not right now]

Dev: Haan maine bhi aaj aapko bada miss kiya [Yes I missed u a lot today]

There share a small eyelock and both of them started walking

Meera: Ek baat puchu Dev aap itne der chup baithe the Mehndi k function mein hum mein se kisi ko bhi pata nahi chala k ghoonghat k neeche aap ho Geet nahi toh phir achanak aisa kya hua jiski wajah se aapne khud apna bhandha phod diya? [Can I ask u something Dev? U were sitting patiently in the Mehndi function and none of us could make out that u it wasn't Geet but it was u who was sitting in front of us by covering his head with the viel then all of a sudden what happened that u urself leaked out your secret?]

Dev: Main darr gaya tha k jab kisi ladki ko pata chalega k maine apne hateli par apne bade bhai ka naam Mehndi se likhwaya hai toh wo ladki mujhse kabhi shadi nahi karegi [I was scared that if at all any girl comes to know that I have written the name of my big Brother on my palm and too with Mehndi then no girl would agree to marry me]

Meera was bowled over by his nature.

He confessed his true feelings in a matter of seconds without any hesitation and this genuine nature of his was acting as a catalyst and was attracting her towards him

Meera: Par Dev ab toh aapki mushkil aur bhi badh gayi [But Dev now your problems have increased]

Dev: Wo kaise? [How come?]

Meera showed him the letter "M" that was written on his palm

Meera: Ab toh aapko ek aisi ladki dhundni hogi jiska naam "M" se start hotha ho hmm' thoda mushkil hai ye kaam haina? [U need to find a girl whose name starts with the letter "M" this is a difficult task isn't it?]

Dev: Mujhe dhundne ki zarurat nahi hai aap chahe toh main uss ladki se aapko issi waqt milwa saktha hoon [I need not find any girl if u wish I can introduce that girl to u right now]

Meera: Kaha hai wo? [Where is she?]

Dev: Saamne dekhiye mere dil mein chupi hui tasveer aapko saaf nazar aayegi [Look in front u will see the image that my heart has sculpted clearly]

Meera moved her eyes in the direction where Dev was indicating and within a matter of seconds a reddish tinge made way to her cheeks as she saw her image in the mirror

Dev: Kaisi lagi meri pasand? [Did u like my choice?]

Meera covered her face with her duppatta and left the area immediately with a beautiful blush on her face

Dev had a sweet smile as he was himself surprised that he had actually confessed his feelings for Meera so soon

He was going to his room when he heard some conversation

Adi: Kidnapping aur wo bhi 4 ladkiyon ki nahi main aisa kuch nahi karnewala [Kidnapping and that too of 4 girls no way I am not going to get involved in this]

Person: Kidnapping toh tumhe karni padegi warna' [u will have to carry out this kidnapping or else']

Dev: Kidnapping? Ye aadmi kaun hai aur Adi issmein kaise phas gaya? [Kidnapping? Who is this man and how did Adi get into this mess?]

Adi: Par main hi kyun? [But why did u choose me?]

Person: Kyunki sab tumpar aakh bannd karke vishwas karte hai aur tum bade aasani se iss baat ka fayda utha sakthe ho [U r the most trustworthy person and no one will doubt your intensions]

Adi: Par [But]

Person: ye lo paise aur jaisa maine samjhaya hai waisa ho jaana chahiye [Here is the money and remember all the things should occour as per my wish]

Adi accepts the money

Dev was completely shocked and he was now desperate to see the face of this stranger

In this process he touched a vase accidently and this sound was enough to alert Adi and the stranger

Dev: Mujhe turant hi Bro ko inform karna hoga [I need to inform Bro immediately]

He runs away from there

Adi: Ye toh Dev Sir hai [That was Dev Sir]

Person: Jau aur uska bhi intezaam kardoh [Go and take care of him]

Adi runs behind Dev

Next Day

Adi: Geet Maan Sir ne tumhare liye ek message bheja hai unhone tumhe shaam ko iss jagah par bulaya hai [Geet Maan Sir has sent a message for u he wants to meet u at this place in the evening]

Geet: Par Maan kaha hai Adi Sir? [But where is Maan Adi Sir?]

Adi got nervous

Adi: Haan unhe kuch urgent kaam tha iss liye wo kahi gaye hai [He had some urgent work ]

Geet: Achha ek baar unhe phone karke ye toh puchu k shadi k beech mein unhe aisa kaunsa urgent work yaad aa gaya [Let me ask him whatthe work more urgent than the marriage preparations?]

Adi stops Geet immediately

Adi: Geet badi mushkil se maine Maan Sir ko convince kiya hai iss meeting mein jaane k liye agar wo nahi jate toh company ka bada nuksaan ho jaata aur ab agar tum unhe kuch kahogi toh wo ussi waqt meeting chodkar yaha aa jaayenge [Geet with great difficulty I have conviced Maan Sir to attend the meeting if u will call him right now he will leave the meeting and we will be facing a great loss]

Geet: nahi mere hothe hue Maan ka koi nuksaan nahi ho saktha [No Maan can't face any loss as long as I am there]

She takes the address and thanks Adi for giving her the message

Adi: (thinking) Maan Sir aur Dev Sir ka toh bandobast ho chukka hai Geet ab jabtak hum nahi chahthe koi bhi unse mil nahi paayega [Forget about Maan Sir and Dev Sir Geet none of u would be able to meet him until we give u the permission to do so]

Both Maan and Dev were missing and Adi convinced the entire family that both of them were busy in some urgent meeting

Adi was like a family member hence no one questioned him any further

Adi messaged Pinky, Annie and Meera and called them on the terrace

Annie: Kya baat hai Adi bhaiya aapne hum sabko ek saath kyun bulaya? [What's the matter Adi why did u call us on the terrace?]

Adi: Batatha hoon actually maine Maan Sir aur Geet ki shadi mein ek surprise plan karne ka socha hai ussi k discussion k liye maine aap teeno ko yaha bulaya hai [I wanted to give a special surprise to Maan Sir and Geet and I wanted to discuss the details with all of u]

Pinky: Adi Sir aapne mujhe pehle nahi bataya iske baare mein jaayiye ab main aapse baat nahi karungi [Adi Sir u did not tell me about this before go I won't talk to u now]

Meera: Chup kar Pinky aap bataiye bhaiya hume kya karna hoga [Shut up Pinky tell us bro what do we need to do?]

Adi: Yaha nahi aap logh shaamko iss jagah pauch jaaiyega saare details aapko pata chal jaayenge [Not here each one u be present at this place in the evening I will tell u everything over there]

Annie: Yaha kyun nahi bhai? [Why what's wrong with this place?]

Adi: Annie tum samjhi nahi jo apni Geet haina wo kahi bhi kabhi bhi pauch jaayegi aur humara surprise taiyaar honese pehle hi flop ho jaayega shaamko Maan Sir aa jaayenge toh Geet unke saath busy hongi toh hum aaram se apna surprise work out kar sakthe hai [Annie our Geet is extraordinary she will come here exactly at that time when we would be planning our surprise and then our planning will automatically become flop; Maan Sir will be here in the evening and then Geet will be busy with him so we can easily work out our plan at this particular place in peace]

Meera: Aap sahi keh rahe ho bhaiya hum pauch jaayenge [U r right Bro don't worry we will be there in the evening]

Geet: Annie tu kaha hai? [Annie where r u?]

Annie: Achha bhaiya shaam ko milthe hai abhi hume Geet k paas jana hoga [Ok Bro see u in the evening we need to go to geet right now]

The 3 girls go away

Adi: Wah Adi kya acting ki hai bina kisi mehnat k charo ladkiyon ko phasa diya; sorry girls aap charo jab uss jagah par pauchoge tab aap waha se humari ijazat k bagair nikal nahi paauge kyunki aap logh Kidnap honewale ho [Wow Adi without any efforts all the 4 girls got trapped in your plan; sorry girls once you'll reach the place none of u would be able to escape from there without our permission as very soon all 4 of u would be Kidnapped]

Adi dials a number

Adi: Kaam ho chukka hai [The task has been accomplished]

Person: Dev ka kya hua? [What about Dev?]

Adi: Aap unki fikr mat kijiye maine unhe samal liya hai [U need not bother about them he is under my control]

Person: Thik hai ab aage ka plan bhi dhyan se karna ek baar wo ladkiyaan waha pauch jaaye toh saare raaste, darwaze khidkiyaan sab unke liye bannd ho jaane chahiye [Okay carry out the next part of the plan properly remember once the girls reach at that place all the routes, doors and windows should be closed for them they shouldn't be successful in escaping from there]

Adi: Aisa hi hoga [Our plan will be a success]

Evening

All the 4 ladies reach the place one by one

Geet entered the house from the front door whereas the remaining girls entered the room from the back door

As soon as they entered the house the door and the windows got locked

The room was totally dark and somewhere or the other the girls could sense something strange

Geet: Maan aap kaha ho? [Maan where r u?]

Annie: Adi bhaiya aap yahi hona? [Adi r u here?]

The girls collide with Geet and all 4 of them let out a loud scream

Geet: Tum teeno yaha kya kar rahe ho? [What r u girls doing here?]

Meera: Hume Adi bhaiya ne yaha bulaya hai koi surprise plan karne k liye [Adi had called us here to plan some surprise ]

Geet: Par Adi Sir toh keh rahe the k Maan mujhe yaha milenge [But Adi Sir was telling me that Maan would be meeting me here]

Pinky: Par Adi Sir ne humse jhooth kyun bola? [But why did Adi Sir do this?]

Geet: Jo bhi ho hume yaha se nikalna hoga mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raha [Whatever the reason we need to get out from here I don't find this place suitable for us]

The girls walk towards the door but to their horror the door was closed

They tried to open the windows but once again they were unsuccessful

Annie: Ye hum kaha phas gaye hai Geet? [Where have we trapped Geet?]

Geet: Dar mat Annie main abhi Maan ko phone karti hoon sab thik ho jaayega [Don't worry Annie I will call Maan right now everything will be fine]

Geet takes her mobile but to her dismay there was no signal in that area

Geet: Yaha toh mobile ka signal nahi mil raha [There is no signal]

A voice: Ye humara ilaka hai aur yaha sirf humara raaj chaltha hai [This is our territory and everything occurs as per our wish over here]

Meera: Kaun ho tum aur hume yaha kyun kaid kar rakha hai? [Who r u and why have u trapped us over here?]

Second voice: Oh Ladies aapko khushi hogi ye jaankar k aap charo ko kidnap kar liya gaya hai [Ladies you'll would be pleased to know that u have been kidnapped]

Geet: Kya bakthe ho agar mere Maan ko pata chal gaya toh tum sabki kahir nahi issliye bhaliayi issi mein hai k hum sabko jaane doh [What rubbish if my Maan comes to know this then it would become a very difficult situation for u to handle so its better that u leave us]

Third voice: Maan ko bhul jau Geet yaha sirf humara raaj chaltha hai [Forget Maan Geet we r the rulers of this territory]

Pinky: Ho kaun tum log [Who the hell r u?]

Together: We r the Desi Boys

Annie: Desi boys my foot

Third person: Lagta hai ye aise nahi maanengi inhe humara jalwa dhikana hi padega [It seems they r not going to listen so easily we need to show them our true colors]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q42z-KWwwfM

Make some noise for the desi boys

The boyz'the boyz

The girls got scared with this sudden outburst

They could see some shadows moving around the room

Music

Aa aa oh oh aa oo '

The girls held each other's hand protectively and started moving in the opposite direction. They were forced to take few backward steps as some guy shouted "Aha" from that direction

Let's go come on

The girls were trying to figure out some way to escape from here when all of a sudden the darkness of the room got converted with a romantic dim light forcing them to stop and notice the surroundings where all of them were present

Kudiyan de dil uthe rule karande

Yahi bazarran vich fhaili hai hawa

Adi made a grand entry in a rockstar style with these words; for the first time Adi had not worn his specks and Pinky was going gaga over his looks whereas all the remaining ladies were totally surprised to see Adi in the gang of Desi Boys

Todenge romeo da love da record vi

Likhenge ishq ka path nawa

Before they could recover from this sweet shock they got another shocker in the form of Dev. Annie and Meera drank their saliva as the shy and innocent Dev was dressed in a typical road side Romeo style

Hum yaaro bigde hai dil apna hai shareef bada

But the one who stole the hearts of all the ladies was the prince of Geet's heart yes the one and only Maan Singh Khurana. He made a grand entry through the aerial route and showered the girls with beautiful rose petals

Make some noise for the desi boys

One two three four

Maan jumped and landed on the ground in a perfect style


English thumke Dil ki rhythm pe

Maare jum jum k desi boys

As soon as Maan made his presence felt a message flashed on the screen which read "WELCOME TO THE BACHELOR'S PARTY OF MAAN SINGH KHURANA"

Sohne mone banke chathi dole tan k

Nache jum jum k desi boys

All of them started executing their dance steps perfectly

English thumke Dil ki rhythm pe

Maare jum jum k desi boys

Sohne mone banke chathi dole tan k

Nache jum jum k desi boys

All the ladies were happy and they started feeling extra special as the boys had made them a part of their party. Geet blushed profusely as Maan gave her a teasing wink and touched his heart where he had written her name

Music

Like a true gentleman Maan invited geet to join him in this dance by placing his hand in front of her eyes.

Dev requested Meera and Annie to become his partners and Adi wooed Pinky by gifting her packet of chips

The entire group started enjoying the dance but more than the dance Maaneet were enjoying each other's closeness

Hum toh yaaron henge pyarde vyapari

Soniya maange saade ghar ka pata

Maan scooped Geet in his arms and started walking in a particular direction

Dev placed his arms on the shoulder of Meera and Annie and guided them in the same direction

Adi bowed down his head in front of Pinky and requested her to follow him

Kehnde hai lady gaga fan humari

Usse kaho kade mil ja zara

There was huge swing made up of flowers and all the ladies made themselves comfortable in it and the men started giving them a royal treatment by rocking the swing to and fro

Oh kudiyon ko khush rakhna apna toh hai asool sada

Adi gives another packet of chips to Pinky whereas Dev gives Meera and Annie a rose each and Maan bows down in front of Geet and takes her hand in his and declares that u r the queen of my heart and without u my world is incomplete

Make some noise for the desi boys

Unn dos tres go

But now the boys were again back to their mischievious self and they pulled the girls back to the dance floor

English thumke Dil ki rhythm pe

Maare jum jum k desi boys

Sohne mone banke chathi dole tan k

Nache jum jum k desi boys

All of them started dancing and enjoying each and every moment of this party

Music

Maan showed his smartness and made the room dark for few minutes. He captured Geet in his protective folds and started decorating her neck with wet and sensous kisses

He squeezed her belly as Geet moaned his name softly; Maan turned her and geet immediately encircled her arms around his neck giving him full access to her complete self

Maan started tasting the delicacy of her angelic face with utmost love. He kissed her forehead and her angelic eyes

He licked the entire length of her nose and bit the tip of it gently. He moved his attention to her rosy petals which was only his possession. He blew air on her delicate lips and made Geet aware of his desires

He started reducing the distance between their lips but our naughty Geet wanted to trouble him she immediately switched on the bright lights and gave a mischievious glint to Maan and moved away from him

Jisko kehthe hai badmasshi kar lethe hia achhi kasi

Apni toh hai zimedari jaha bhi deke kudi kawari

Usko ghar tak chod k aana aadhi raat ko laut k aana

Bhalle ni aaja thale

Maan stopped her from going by holding her hand

He turned her around and gave her seductive looks; Geet started moving in a backward direction and Maan slowly started bending in a forward direction

He was just about to kiss Geet when she pushed him playfully

Hum kudiyon ki hai kamzori hum pe khali kare kijori

Hum mein dekhi hai kya khubi aaja in se puch le tubhi

Balle ni aaja thale

The girls were giving angry glare to the boys, Dev and Adi started moving back whereas Maan lifted Geet by hoding her waist and started swaying in the air by holding a rope

Hum yaaro bigde hai dil apna hai shareef bada

Geet hugged him lovingly and Maan took the oppourtunity and placed a quick peck on his angel's arm

Make some noise for the desi boys

One two three four

Maaneet descended gracefully with the help of the rope and joined the entire family to complete the dance

English thumke Dil ki rhythm pe

Maare jum jum k desi boys

Sohne mone banke chathi dole tan k

Nache jum jum k desi boys

Maan placed Geet on his shoulder and started doing bhangra steps

Duniya k kone dekhe aune baune

Sab se hai sone desi boys

The girls were pleased by their efforts and decided to give them a sweet gift.

Maan pouted his lips and was waiting for his gift

But naughty Geet gave him his gift on his cheek and poor Maan started making a cute puppy dog face

Dev was the luckiest as he got a kiss on both his cheeks one from Annie and the other from Meera

Poor Adi Pinky was so happy that she kissed one of her potato chips and immediately made sure that the chip reaches its correct place that is her stomach

Raise your voices make some noises

Tere liye aaye Desi boys

All the guys go down on their knees and placed a sweet kiss on the hand of their respective partners

Music

As everyone was busy dancing Maaneet took the oppourtunity and made an exit

As soon as they come outside Maan pulls Geet in his loving folds and looks at her rosy petals naughtily

Geet understood his intentions

Geet: Kya irada hai Mr. Khurana [What's ur plan Mr. Khurana?]

Maan: Wahi jo aap samaj rahi hai Mrs. Khurana [Exactly what u r thinking Mrs. Khurana]

Maan started reducing the distance between their lips but Geet pushed him playfully

Geet: Dekhiye ji kal humari shadi hai aur maine decide kiya hai k shadi k baad hi aapko aapka gift milega tab tak intezaar kijiye [We r getting married tomorrow and I have decided that u will get your special gift only after our marriage]

Maan: Achhaji toh ye baat hai [Okay so this is what u have planned?]

Geet: Haanji [Yes]

Maan: Waise Maayari hum aapko kiss nahi kar sakthe par kya aap humare saath kuch beete hue palo ko taaza karna chaengi; mera matlab hai k kal humari zindagi ki nayi shuruwat hai toh kyun na uss nayi shuruwat se pehle kuch haseen yaado ko taaza kar liya jaaye taaki'[Maayari I can't kiss u but would u like to revive some of the old memories that both of us shared before stepping into our new life so that']

Geet: Taaki humara aanewala kal humare guzre hue kal se bhi zyada haseen ho [So that we can make our future more beautiful that our past]

Maan nodded his head in approval. Geet submitted herself in his embrace

Geet: Suniyeji aapki Maayari ko phir se humare gusre hue kal mein le chaliye le chalengena [Take ur Maayari to a journey of our past u will fulfill my wish na?]

Maan placed a loving kiss on her forehead in response to her question and both of them started walking towards the beautiful memories of their past life

PRECAP: Reliving the past😳

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PART 98: Page 34


Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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wow tat was awwweeesssooommmeee
im really sorry for not commenting these days inspite of getting regular pms...
all ur ffs are simply superb
waiting for the next one
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tat was an amazing yaar
first was sacred but later happpy
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Awww Its wonderful updateee .I loved it Awesome Update
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Congratulations On The New Thread
Mind Blowing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
Edited by nahtani88 - 13 years ago
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lovely update piya di.maans bachelor party i never expected that.pinky ate her chips and kissed it instead of adi🤣.loved all maneets moments.naughty maan switched of the lights and geet is too smart she own the light
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yaar what to comment i dont have proper word to describe this part.
Its simply awesome, mindblowing, fantastic update.
love it love it love it sooo much. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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