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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
Here is the next update I have tried my level best to make this marriage extra special as personally I feel Maaneet of MH are the best couple as compared to the Maaneet of the rest of my FFs

I had to think a lot before penning down this part do let me know if my efforts were fruitful or not. If possible do give me big comments😳
love-Piya
PART 99


He placed her on his lap and rested his head on her chest; Geet also submitted herself completely in his arms and both of them slowly drifted off to sleep hoping to see the arrival of the next morning which would bring the message of their new life wherein the whole world would address them as "Mr and Mrs. Khurana"

Next day

The whole Khurana family was searching for the bride and the bridegroom

All of them finally walked upto the terrace as that was the only place which was left unexplored by them

As soon as they made an entry their eyes were welcomed by a divine sight as they noticed the love birds lost in their magical world of dreams and sleeping peacefully in each other's embrace

Annie: Haye main mar jaawa kitne sone lag rahe hai bhaiya aur bhabi [Oh I can die after seeing this pleasant sight they are looking so cute]

Meera took Dev's mobile and captured Maaneet's picture in it

Dev: Hume inhe disturb nahi karna chahiye chaliye hum chalte hai [Let's go from here we shouldn't disturb them]

Dadima: Kaisi baate kar rahe hai aap Dev; hum maante hai k Maan aur Geet ke iss khoobsurat pal ko hume todne ka koi haq nahi par agar ye dono yuhi baite rahe toh shaadi ke mandap par kaun jaayega? [Dev I agree we don't have any right to break their romantic moment but if they continue to sit here then who will go to the mandap for the marriage?]

Meera: Aapne sahi kaha Dadima aur hume toh kafi taiyaariyaan karni hai Maan jijaji ka surprise successful banana hai toh hume inn dono ko abhi jagana hi padega [U r right Dadima we need to do a lot of arrangements and if we need to make Maan's plan a success then both of them have to wake up at this moment itself]

Annie: Oh my God main toh surprise ke baare mein bhool hi gayi thi chal abhi uthathe hai humare Romeo Juliet ko [Oh my God I had completely forgotten about the surprise part come on let's wake up our Romeo Juliet without any further delay]

Dadima: Rukiye hum uthathe hai inn dono ko [Wait I will wake them up]

Dadima goes and stands besides them she slowly guides Geet's hand towards Maan's cheeks and caresses it

Maan: (in his sleep) I love u Geet humesha yuhi meri baho mein rehna; Maayari tumhara Maan tumhare bagair jee nahi saktha [I love u Geet always stay in my folds forever Mayari as ur Maan cannot survive without you]

Annie, Dev and Meera let out a small chuckle

Dadima lifts Maan's hand and guides it towards Geet's face

Geet starts blushing in her sleep and lets out a loving moan

Geet: Oh Maan'I love u

Dadima: Bete ye baat aap ek dusre ko puri zindagi bata sakthe hai par agar aap dono ek duje ki baho mein yuhi madhosh baithe rahe toh aapki shadi hone se rahi aur jaante hai Panditjine saaf saaf kaha hai k aap dono ki kundali k hisaab se agar aaj k din shadi nahi hui toh agla shubh murut pure 5 saal baad aayega lagta hai aap dono ko 5 saal baad shadi karni hai thik hai aaj ki shadi cancel hi kar dethe hai [Both of u can go on confessing ur love for each other throughout ur life but if u guys continue to sit here intoxicated in each other's arms then I guess I have to cancel the marriage as it is after analyzing your kundalis the priest has clearly mentioned if the marriage doesn't take place today then both of u need to wait for another 5 years for becoming lifepartners. Hmm' I guess let us wait for the next 5 years as both of u r still lost in each other's warm folds I am gonna cancel the marriage right now]

Maaneet immediately open their eyes and scream on top of their voice

Maaneet (together): Nahi shaadi cancel nahi hogi [No there is no need to cancel the marriage]

The entire family starts laughing

Maan straightens his head which was resting on Geet's chest and Geet too gets up immediately from Maan's lap; both of them were feeling slightly embarrassed

Geet: Dadima wo darasal [Dadima actually we]

Dadima: Aap dono ko safayi dene ki koi zarurat nahi hai humne sab kuch apni aakhon se dekha hai [U need not give any explanations as I have witnessed everything with my own eyes]

Maan: Dadima par [But Dadima]

Dadima: Maan aapki shararat k liye humare paas waqt nahi hai hume dulhan ko taiyaar karna hai chaliye Geet shadi ka waqt ho raha hai [Maan I don't have time to waste on your mischiefs as I need to make the bride ready for the wedding common Geet lets go as it is almost time for the marriage ritual to begin]

Geet: (confused) Par Dadima shadi toh shaamko haina? [But Dadima the marriage is the evening right?]

Maan, Dadima, Dev, Meera and Annie had a mischievious smile on their face; Geet could make out that the entire family had planned something big and she was unaware about their plan

Geet: Aap log mujhse kuch chipa rahe hona haina Dadima? [U guys r hiding something from me right Dadima?]

Dadima: (with a serious face) Ab ye sawal aap apne saiyaanji se hi puch lijiye kyunki jo honewala hai wo sab unhi ki planning hai [U better ask this question to ur darling Maan as he is the mastermind behind this plan]

Geet: (worried) Kya hua Maan sab thik toh haina? [What's the matter Maan is everything alright?]

Maan caressed her face lovingly and slowly took her in his protective embrace

Maan: Geet ek baat batau hum shadi mein kitne phere lethe hai? [Geet how many pheres do we take during the marriage ceremony?]

Geet: Saath [7]

Maan: Inn saath phero ka matlab kya hotha hai? [What is the meaning of these 7 pheres?]

Geet: Shadi ke saath pavitra vachan [The pure and divine 7 vows of marriage]

Maan: Jab vachan 7 hai phere 7 hai toh shadi sirf ek baar kyun? [When there r 7 vows and 7 pheres then why do we marry once?]

Geet lifted her gaze and looked at Maan

Maan pecked her forehead with utmost love

Maan: Geet humari shadi 7 alag tareeko se hogi taaki humare rishte ke har ek vachan ko uss rab ki khaas meher mile [Geet our marriage is going to take place in 7 different traditional styles so that every vow of our marriage gets blessed with the divine light of the Almighty]

A lone tear of happiness escaped from Geet's eyes she just hugged him possessively with all her love

Dadima: Geet chaliye bete pehli shadi ka muhurut kareeb aa raha hai [Let's go Geet the muhurat of the first wedding is approaching]

Geet looked into Maan's eyes to take his permission

Maan: (replying through his eyes) Kuch der ki duri hai Geet phir toh zindagi bhar ka saath hai; main apni dulhan ka intezaar karunga jaldi aana [After these few moments of separation we are going to be tied into a lifelong bond; I will waiting for my bride Geet come soon]

Geet lowered her gaze as a reddish tinge made way to her cheeks

Dadima, Annie and Meera took Geet to her room

Maan too left for his room along with Dev

All the close relatives; friends and office staff of Maaneet arrive

There were 7 different mandaps that were constructed for the 7 marriages

The first style of wedding that was going to take place was the Maharastrian style wedding

The Sakarpuda ceremony begins and Geet is gifted a nauvari saree and a sweet from Dadima on the behalf of Maan

The Maharastrian friends of Annie dress up Geet as a typical Maharastrian bride

Geet's simplicity was giving a new definition to her beauty (This was how her bridal wear appeared)

Her heartbeats increased as Meera announced the arrival of the baarat

All the ladies went ahead to welcome th groom and carried out the Simant Puja Annie washed Maan's feet and Meera gave Maan a gift on Geet's behalf

It was now time for their marriage which would bestow its blessing on their first marriage vow

Adi and Dev were holding the Antarpat (a silk shawl) to separate the bride and the groom

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93yFyu48Qxk

Music

Pinky's dad Mohinder brings Geet to the dias lovingly

The musical tunes of her anklets were declaring her arrival; Oh Maan was getting desperate to see a glimpse of his princess but alas the Antarpat was not supporting him in this mission

Dev and Adi were busy teasing Maan as they understood his state of mind

Mohinder takes Geet to the other side of the Antarpat

Oh both of them were getting restless to see each other's face

Maan was busy imagining Geet's serene beauty; her blushing face; her lowered eyelashes' he was sure that Geet would be looking magical

Same was the case with Geet she was also getting restless to get a glimpse of her charming would be husband

It seemed God had answered their prayers as within a matter of seconds the recital of mangalashtakas started

Maaneet were counting the moments that were left which would mark the removal of this Antarpat between them which was forcing them to stay away from each other

As soon as the recital of the mangalashtakas was over the partition of the silk shawl (Antarpat) was removed and Maaneet see each other for the first time

Sajan ghar aana tha sajan ghar aaye hai

There was thin layer of water in Maaneet's eyes it seemed both of them could not bear these few minutes of separation also

Sajan ghar aana tha sajan ghar aaye hai

They locked their eyes immediately and started narrating the tale of their heart through them

Emotions were oozing out through this one eyelock of theirs

Piya mann bhana tha Piya mann baye hai

Dadima placed her hand on their shoulders and brought them back to reality

Geet started blushing profusely whereas Maan kept on admiring his shying angel

Har khushi hai ab tumhari mujhe de doh gum

It was now time to exchange the garlands

The guests showered the couple with unbroken rice as they exchanged the garlands

Jaaneman Jaaneman

Jaaneman Jaaneman

Once the garlands were exchanged Maan held Geet's hand and promised her that their bond would always remain unbroken like the rice

Geet placed his hand on her forehead and promised him that their relationship would be eternal

Sajan ghar aana tha sajan ghar aaye hai

It was now time for the kanyadaan ritual which was once again performed by Pinky's dad Mohinder

Piya mann bhana tha Piya mann baye hai

Maan tied the mangalsutra and applied sindoor in Geet's hair parting

Har khushi hai ab tumhari mujhe de doh gum

Geet applies the sandalwood tilak on his forehead after which both of them take seven rounds around the sacred fire and became soulmates in every true sense by dedicating their life to each other's name

Jaaneman Jaaneman

Jaaneman Jaaneman

They take blessings from their elders and were once again ready to get drowned in each other's eyes when Annie stopped them by making them aware that both of them need to get ready for their second marriage which was a South Indian style marriage

The bride and the bridegroom go to their respective rooms to get ready

Music

The mandap for the second wedding was in the other area of the mansion

Full grown plantain trees were tied to the gateposts marking the evergreen beauty of love through their presence

Nadaswaram notes were giving a musical touch whereas rangoli designs at the doorstep were giving an artistic welcome to the divine function

The ladies dressed up Geet in a traditional South Indian bridal wear (This was how her bridal wear appeared)

Geet was taken to the mandap to get married to her Maan for the second time so that the blessings of this marriage would help them to obey the second vow of their marriage successfully

Maan went into a trance as he saw the fairy descending down the stairs

Geet was made to sit besides Maan and the marriage was initiated with the Ganpati Puja

Zindagi mein aaye tum chahto ke raste

It was now time to exchange the garlands

Adi lifted Geet on his shoulder and Dev lifted Maan on his shoulder

In this position Maaneet garland each other thrice thus symbolizing their unification as ONE SOUL IN TWO BODIES

Kaash ye raste sanam kut jaaye haste haste

Maaneet were then seated on a SWING and were rocked forth and back making them realize that the sea waves of life are undulating but they have to stand steady and stable in all conditions like a true soulmate

Sone dildaara tere pyar toh main vaariyaan

Maan holds Geet's hand and both of them walk seven steps together thus promising to be each other's shadow in every phase of their life

Meri ya duvaawa tainu lag jaave saariyaan

Maan placed the golden chain around Geet's neck in the form of a mangalsutra and once again wrote his name on her destiny by decorating her forehead with the sindoor

Chand ho tum chandni se bheega jaaye mann

Geet placed her hand on Maan's cheek and Maan placed his hand on Geet's cheek

Both of them touched each other's forehead and declared the biggest happiness of their life in front of their entire world

Jaaneman Jaaneman

It was now time for their third wedding which was a Kashmiri style wedding

Maaneet were once again ushered to their respective rooms

This was how Geet's Kashmiri bridal wear appeared

Jaaneman Jaaneman

The blowing of the shank marked the arrival of the barat

Music

Mohinder carried Geet in his arms and took her to the place where Maan was waiting for her arrival

Maaneet cross their arms one over the other and hold each other's hands beneath a cloth thus in this way they completed the ritual of "Aathwas"

A GOLDEN THREAD is tied to their foreheads and Maaneet start taking 7 rounds around the sacred fire and with every step they kept on placing one rupee silver coin in a circle thus promising to beautify and glorify each other's life with their presence.

With this marriage they had asked the blessings of the Almighty on their 3 marriage vow

Maaneet marked the success of their third marriage by sharing a sweet together thus promising one another to stand by each other's side not only in happiness but also in times of sorrows

Now it was time for the 4th marriage ceremony which would bless the 4th vow of their beautiful bond

The next marriage was a Bengali style marriage and the ladies created a typical Bengali atmosphere by blowing CONCH SHELLS and ululation

Khwabo ke iss ghar ki khair khare O rabba

Maan was seated at the wedding altar and canopy that is the "Chadnatolla"

Geet was seated on a low wodden stool called "Pidi"

Dur tale kalishiyaan aur bair kare o rabba

She was carried to the mandap by Dev, Adi, Romeo and Manisha

She had covered her face by holding 2 leaves in her hands; her 4 brothers (Dev, Adi, Romeo and Manisha) help her to complete 7 circles around Maan by lifting her on their shoulders thus winding Maaneet securelyto each other

Naaz se bade maine kare hai taiyaariyaan

Geet removed the leaves from her face as soon as the rounds end and once again allows her eyes to step into a paradise by making them see the face of her Maan

Din raat pyar diya nazra utariyaan

Maaneet exchange loving glances and promise one another to make their relationship so strong that every dark cloud would bring the message of a beautiful morning in their married life

Ye mohabbat hai ibadat kabhi hona kum

They exchange garlands thrice and promised one another that the fragrance would remain fresh till the last breath of their life

Janeman Jaaneman

Geet is placed down and she takes her seat besides Maan; Dadima ties a sacred thread on the couple's hand making them united for a lifetime

Jaaneman Jaaneman

The fire God is made the divine witness to their marriage and once again Maaneet take the 7 pheres and thus requested God to protect their 4th vow by bestowing his blessing on them

Music

The next marriage was a Muslim style marriage

Qazi was invited to oversee the marriage proceedings

This was Geet's attire for their 5th marriage

Both of them were seated in separate rooms

The qazi went to both of them individually and asked their approval for the wedding

Maaneet express their free will by repeating the word "KABUL HAI" meaning I ACCEPT THIS MARRIAGE 3 times

They share a sweet and give each other complete authority on one another's existence

The marriage reached its destination when Maaneet recited the "Fatihah" i.e. the first chapter of the Holy Quran made the promise of being loyal and honest towards each other

Thus their 5th marriage vow was also protected with the blessings of their 5th marriage

After the completion of this marriage Maaneet moved in to their next destination i.e. their 6th marriage style which was a Christian style wedding

This was the wedding gown of Geet

The wedding was taking place in a nearby church

Maan was already present in the church and was waiting for the arrival of his Maayari

After sometime the Bridal Procession arrives'Maan was spellbound after seeing the beauty of his divine angel

Geet lowered her gaze and went and stood besides Maan

Maan brushed his finger with Geet's hand sending shivers throughout her body

After the opening prayer it was time for Maaneet to exchange the wedding vows

They face each other and once again get captivated in the serene ocean of their love

The priest tells them to exchange the rings

It was now time to light the Unity Candle. Maan held Geet's hand and both of them lighted the candle together thus announcing to the world that from today they are one

The Priest reads out the closing prayer and request Maan to kiss his bride

Maan lifts the viel of Geet and after taking permission from Geet through his eyes he locked her delicate petals into his folds thus declaring to the whole world that Geet is only Maan's and she will always be Maan's Geet

Geet responded with equal love and after few minutes they ended their kiss thus allowing the Priest to introduce them as a couple in front of the whole world

In this way they requested to take their 6th vow of the marriage in the guiding light of the Almighty so that they would always stay together and remain each other's biggest strength


Now only the last marriage was left which was a traditional Hindu marriage.

It was evening and all the guests had arrived at Khurana Mansion to participate in this celebration

Annie, Meera and the rest of the girls brought Geet to the mandap

Aa aaghosh mein meri zulf savaru teri

As soon as Dadima gave the Varmala to Geet everyone started laughing wholeheardly as Maan had already bowed down his head in front of his Maayari as if telling her that I am and will always be your slave

Geet blushed profusely and introduced the Varmala onto his neck

Maan was always in his naughty mood he slipped his hand on her bare waist which converted the pinkish tinge on Geet's cheek into a dark red blush

Dadima twisted Maan's ear and gave him the Jaimala

Maan kissed Geet's forehead and introduced the Jaimala lovingly onto her neck

Chahat ke rango se main maang sajadu teri

Dadima ordered Maaneet to go to the mandap; Geet was just about to take her walking step when without giving any warning Maan scooped her in his arms and carried her to the mandap

The girls and the boys started whistling and expressed their happiness

Maahiyan ve aaj mainu aaive kyun ve lagta

Maaneet take their respective seats on the mandap and the Pandit starts chanting the mantras but there was some special arrangement around the sacred fire

There were 7 circles which were distinguished from one another by different colors; this arrangement looked like a rainbow but Geet was unable to understand the significance of this arrangement right now she tried to find the answers of her confusion in Maan's eyes

Aashiq de sachha hove roop hondha rab ka

Maan replied her by placing the sindoor on her maang and by placing the mangalsutra on her neck

Hum yaha hai tum yaha ho hone doh Milan

It was now time for the pheres

As soon as Maaneet get up Adi gets a diya and gives it to Maan

Maan placed the diya on Geet's hand and lighted it within a second

Jaaneman Jaaneman

He placed one hand of his beneath the hand of Geet which was holding the diya and he entangled his other hand with the fingers of her left hand so that this can act as a protective shield for the diya

Jaaneman Jaaneman

Both of them start taking the pheres and it was only then that Geet realized the meaning of this RAINBOW ARRANGEMENT made by Maan

This was not an ordinary arrangement every step that they were walking was getting imprinted on this arrangement

Janeman Jaaneman

Jaaneman Jaaneman

Yes with the help of the seven different colors Maan was trying to preserve the memories of their 7 vows that they had taken during their marriage; they moved on to the second color to complete their second phere

Hmm.. hmm...

They continued walking without breaking the eye contact; the diya continued to illuminate with every step and gave an open challenge to destiny that u can place us in difficult situations but our love will remain strong and would be bonded forever for an eternity

Janeman Jaaneman

Annie took the diya and placed it in the mandir after the completion of the pheres...With this last marriage every vow of Maaneet was under the protective folds of the Almighty and now they knew that nothing can come inbetween their love

Jaaneman Jaaneman

The entire Khurana Family started showering Maaneet with rose petals as they took each other in their protective embrace and allowed their hearts to do the talking for the first time as Mr. and Mrs. Khurana

PRECAP: Maan's mouth was completely drenched with her warm feminine juice but with every passing moment his thirst went on increasing'he went on mounting the force and supported his mission by squeezing the upper part of her vag**a with his demanding fingers'.

In an attempt to relish the deepest secret of her unseen beauty''☺️☺️

Keep on dreaming guys as MH's SR would be the hottest SR that I have ever penned down.

Will update on 18th as MH will complete 1 year and also 100 parts on that day

If possible give me big comments for today's update as I really had to think a lot for making this marriage update extra special

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love-Piya


PART 100: Page 90


Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first yipppeee
loved the update
whole family caught dem in sleeping position on the terrance...nd still in dreams dey r doing roamnce
loved it
loved the way maaneet married in types...
nd finally maaneet r married
awsome description of each nd every marriage
loved it
hayyeee

whayt a dream marrige
loved it
tooo awsome
finally waiting for sr

totally hot hoga

Edited by uteem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maha marriage just took place...omg 7 style of marriage...this is really crazy i guess but i know its fiction...lolz...and maha episode is yet to cum will b waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
😲 😲 7style of marriage 👏 its not easy to think and then write so beautifully d seven style of marriage 😛 but u did it so beautifully 😳 hatts of to u 👏
Amazing update 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

m speechless...but m also happy to see bengali type marriage also...

awesome n beautiful n mindblowing update...

loved it...


thank u sooo much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
7 style of marriage...
loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was very beautifull and lonng update

loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
my god how you think of these things
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Posted: 13 years ago
piya di you out did your self that was awesome gorgeous beautifully loved 7 marriages 7 different bond yet same vow of forever loved it awesome word cannot described it perfect in every way loved it thanks for the pm and the translation loved it

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