New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#4 LINK#5 pg147 - Page 61

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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont want geet to b sooo weak...

is she committing suicide...my geet is sherni...she cant do dis...

update soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aise teaser abhi hi update chahiye
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

TEASER


Geet closed the door... her eyes were devoid of any emotions

Without any hesitation she took the matchbox and removed a matchstick...she drank her saliva and ignited the matchstick and allowed the stick to slip from her finger

She closed her eyes as she could not feel the flames of fire


So guys how was the teaser😉 when do u want an update Today or Monday?

love-Piya



OMG 😲😲😲😲
DID SHE REALLY..
HOPE ISS AAG MAI MAAN ND NT KO JLA DE..😡😡😡
WNT DIS UPDT TODAY...
WTTNGG EGRLYY
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb Teaser...
eagerly waiting piya...Pls update today
And super soon




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Posted: 13 years ago
update today only
after reading the teaser
can't wait till monday
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends.There would 2 more characters that would be entering this FF and its a surprise I am sure u gonna love them
love-Piya
PART 28

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Prem was busy talking to someone on the phone when Adi switched on the news channel

He was shocked to see Maan and Naintara conducting a press conference

He knew that this press conference had some relationship with Geet hence instead of changing the channel he started watching the telecast

Naintara: Aap sab ye soch rahe honge k humne yun achanak se Press Conference kyun bulaya [You'll might be wondering why all of a sudden did I call this Press conference]

The journalists agreed to her statement

Naintara: Humne ye Press conference iss liye bulaya hai kyunki ab hum apne Maan ko aur tadaptha hua dekh nahi sakthe [I have called this Press conference as I can't see my Maan in pain any futher]

Everyone present in the hall including Maan was confused

By that time Prem was also done with his call and as soon as he saw Maan in front of his eyes through the television his anger reached its peak

Journalist: Naintaraji par aap Maan k saath kya kar rahi hai Geet kaha hai? [Naintara what r u doing with Maan where is Geet?]

Naintara: Issi baat ka darr tha hume dekhiye aakir ye sawal utt hi gaya aur iss sawal k uthne se humare Maan ke zakhm aur bhi taaza ho gaye par kya kare har din Maan ko yun tadaptha hua dekhne se behter hai k hum ek hi din mein unki saari pareshaniyon ko dur kar de [This was what I feared I knew that this question is going to come due to which once again the wounds of my Maan's heart would take a painful turn but I guess its better to finish this painful chapter for once and all instead of dying a slow death everyday]

Journalist: Aap kehna kya chahthi hai? [What r u trying to tell?]

Naintara: Aap toh jaante hai k Maan aur Geet ki shadi kin haalatho mein hui par phir bhi Maan ne shadi ki pavitrata ka sammaan karte hue iss rishte ko sachhe dil se apnaya [The whole world knows the circumstances in which Maan and Geet's marriage took place but Maan respected the beautiful bond of marriage and accepted Geet as his wife wholeheartedly]

By that time Geet also reached the living room. She goes and stands besides Prem and with a strong mind she starts watching the telecast

Adi tried to change the channel but Geet stopped him from doing so as this conference was related to her and she had full rights to watch this telecast

The 3 of them continued watching the telecast

Naintara: Are humare Maan toh itne mahaan hai k unhone shadi k rishte ko imandaari se nibhane k liye mere aur unke beech ka pyar ka naatha bhi todh diya aur unhone humse keh diya k aaj se Geet hi unki patni hai uar unka pyar agar humare aur unke beech koi rishta ho saktha hai toh wo bus dosti hi hai [My Maan is so great that to maintain the respect of marriage he made it clear that Geet is his wife and also the love of his life he told me clearly that now only one relationship can exist between the two of us and that is friendship]

Naintara: Maan ki ye baat sunkar hume garv hua k hum itne nekdil aur sachhe insaan se pyar karte hai jo k jasbaatho aur rishte ki aihemeyat ko itne ache se samajhta hai humne bhi Maan k iss faisle mein unka saath diya [I felt proud that I love a man who knows the value of emotions and relationships I decided to support him in this decision of his]

Naintara: Par kehthe haina har sikke k 2 pehlu hothe hai; hum sabko sikke ka ek pehlu pata hai par sikke k dusre pehlu se hum sab bekabar hai [But every coin has 2 sides; we have seen only one side of the coin the other side is still hidden from our eyes]

Journalist: Hum samjhe nahi [We didn't get u]

Naintara: Hum samjhathe hai [I will make you'll understand]

Maan tried to stop Naintara by holding her hand

Naintara: Nahi Maan ab hume mat rokhiye aur kitna sahenge aap? Aap fikr mat kijiye wo Geet bhale hi aapko chodkar chali gayi ho par hum aapki Tara har raah par aapke saath maujood hai [No Maan don't stop me why do u want to tolerate this pain? Don't worry Maan that Geet might have ditched u and left u all alone but me your Tara is always there by your side and will support u in every phase]

Journalist: Kya Geet Maan ko chodkar chali gayi? Par kyun? [What Geet left Maan but why?]

Naintara: Aisi giri hui aurat aur kar bhi kya sakthi hai? [What else can u expect from a cheap woman like her?]

Prem's eyes were burning in anger; he started walking towards the door but Geet stopped him by holding his hand

Naintara: Hum bhi ek aurat hai par humare liye shadi ek bada hi pavitra bandhan hai uss Geet ki tarah koi publicity stunt nahi [I am a woman but for me marriage is a divine bond and not like that Geet who considers this as a publicity stunt]

Journalist: Publicity Stunt?

Naintara: Ji haan Geet Maan ki biwi hone ka naatak kar rahi thi taaki unki movie ko muft ki publicity mil jaaye [Yes Geet was just pretending to be Maan's wife so that their movie gets publicity]

Journalist: Aisa nahi ho saktha hum aapki batho par kaise vishwas karle? [This is not the truth why should we believe in your words?]

Naintara: Achha agar aapko yakeen nahi aata toh ye divorce papers dekh lijiye issmein uss Geet k signatures hai aur ye papers usne apni movie ki shooting khatm hone k ek din baad banwaye hai [Have a look at these divorce papers it has Geet's signatures in it and by the way let me tell u Geet gave these papers to Maan exactly a day after they completed the shoot of their movie]

The reporters go through the divorce papers

Naintara: Are humne badi hi mushkil se Maan ko convince kiya inn papers par sign karne k liye wo toh ab bhi uss dhokebaaz se pyar karte hai par hum Maan ko tadaptha hua nahi dekh sakthe [I convinced Maan to sign these papers with great difficulty he is such a pure soul that he still loves the woman who cheated him but now I won't allow Maan to punish himself any futher]

Naintara: Humare Maan koi bejaan si cheez nahi hai jinhe istemaal karke chod diya jaaye par ye baat uss pathardil Geet ki samaj mein thodi aa saktha hai [My Maan is not a nonliving entity which anyone can throw after using him but how can u explain this to the heartless woman called Geet]

Journalist: Kya Naintaraji jo keh rahi wo sach hai Maan? [Is there any truth in the words of Naintara Maan?]

Maan gulped his saliva

Everyone was waiting for an answer

Prem felt like breaking his TV set; he snatched the remote from Adi and was going to switch off the TV set when Geet held his hand firmly and informed him that she needs to know the answer that this man would be giving

Maan was silent; Naintara placed her hand on top of his and pressed it firmly

Naintara: Aap akele nahi hai Maan aapki Tara aapke saath hai bhale hi Geet ne aapko dhoka diya hai par aapki Tara aaj bhi aapse utna hi pyar karti hai jitna k pehle karti thi boliye Maan sabko sachhayi bataiye [U r not alone Maan your Tara is with u; Geet might be a cheater but I still love u don't worry let everyone know the truth]

Journalist: Hum intezaar kar rahe hai Maan [We r waiting Maan]

Maan: Ye sach hai [Yes this is the truth]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GAdUYCfC5IA

Music

Geet left Prem's hand as soon as she heard Maan's reply. She started walking life a lifeless soul towards her room

Aa'aa aaa'.aa

Adi tried to stop Geet as he was scared that she might take some wrong step but Prem had full faith in Geet he requested Adi to allow her to take her own decision

Teri meri meri teri Prem kahani hai mushkil

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

Her face was pale there were no emotions in her eyes; yet there was a strange determination in every step that she was taking' maybe she had decided that today she will end this painful tale permanently

Ek ladka aur ek ladki ki ye kahani hai nayi

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

She entered the washroom and opened the shower and allowing the ice cold water to wash away all her pains

Teri meri meri teri Prem kahani hai mushkil

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

She undressed herself completely and applied the shower gel and started rubbing every inch of her skin aggressively as if removing the traces of Maan's touch from it

Ek duje se hue juda jab ek duje k liye bane

She was hurting herself in this process but she was ready to bear this physical pain inorder to remove the burden of the name "Maan" not only from her body but also from her soul.

Teri meri meri teri Prem kahani hai mushkil

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

Yes she wanted to erase all the memories associated with that selfish man; his touch; his words; his deceit everything; today she had decided that there was no place for someone called Maan even in her memories; she had realized that he was not worth of her love but today she knew he did not deserve her hatred as well

Aa'aa'aaa

She stepped out of the washroom in a simple dress and takes out a key from her purse. She opens a drawer and started removing all the small and big things that were related to Maan which she had cherished till now

Music

She placed all the things in a bag and then opened her wardrobe and within a matter of seconds all the black colored dresses, saares and accessories that she possessed also made way into that bag

Black was the favorite color of Maan and now this was the color that Geet hated the most

Tumse dil jo lagaya

Doh jahah maine paaya

As she was closing her bag she saw Maan's photograph in it and for a brief second her hands automatically started caressing the frame as her heart recollected some of the precious moments that she had lived with him

Kabhi socha na tha ye meelo dur hoga saaya

But her heart was her biggest strength how could it allow her to become weak again; her heart brought her back to reality by reminding her the way Maan had used her and had questioned the divinity of her pure love

Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwab dhikaya

Jab haqeekat mein usse todna tha

Aa'aa'

This was enough for Geet to come back in the present without wasting a second she packed her bag and started walking outside with a strange confidence and determination in her eyes

Ek duje se hue juda jab ek duje k liye bane

Adi and Prem were waiting for her but today Geet was in no mood to talk to anyone before completing her task she opened the door and walked out of the house

Teri meri meri teri Prem kahani hai mushkil

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

She placed the bag in her car and started driving to the place from where this story had started as she knew there could be no better place to end this story other than this

Teri meri batau ka har lamha sabse anjaana

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

The press was asking all sort of stupid questions to Naintara and she was giving them good spicy news about Maaneet's breakup by portraying Maan in good light and Geet in bad light; but Maan was feeling restless he excused himself for few minutes and went and stood near the window

Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ek yaad mein tera afsaana

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

A lady was feeding her husband parathas with her own hand; Maan's heart started beating violenty as he remembered how Geet had burnt her hand just to fulfill his one wish of eating parathas

Aa'aa'

His heart was trying to make him realize that he was wrong but Maan was busy ignoring this fact

He looked in some other direction and saw two kids who were drinking honey; a feeling of guilt passed through his soul as once again he remembered Geet and her love and care

Music

By that time the press conference was over. Naintara walked towards Maan and hugged him tight

Maan right away crushed all the memories of Geet and kept on repeating in his mind that Geet was his culprit she was after his money and she deserved only his hatred and not his sympathy

Saara din beeth jaaye saari raat jagaye

Bus khayal tumhara lamha lamha tadpaye

Geet opened the lock of her flat; yes the same flat which both of them used to share

She felt his fragrance in the air as soon as she unlocked the door

Ye tadap keh rahi hai mith jaaye faasle ye

Tere mere darmiyaan jo hai saare

As soon as she stepped into the house all her beautiful memories started dancing in front of eyes but today these memories were not having any impact on Geet; these memories were enough for her heart to skip her beat but today she was completely stonehearted in front of them

Ek duje se hue juda jab ek duje k liye bane

Geet closed the door'her eyes were totally devoid of any emotions

She opened her bag and started throwing all the things that were related to Maan one after the other on the floor

Teri meri batau ka har lamha sabse anjaana

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

She stopped for a second when she saw the dried yellow rose that she had cherished for so long; her eyes became moist but she did not allow the moistness to take the form of tears

She threw the roses along with the remaining things

Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ek yaad mein tera afsaana

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

But her task took a difficult turn when she saw the black saree that Maan had gifted her and which was the witness of the most blissful moment that both of them had shared together; yes it was the same saree which had marked her submission to Maan's love

Was she courageous enough to throw it?

Teri meri meri teri Prem kahani hai mushkil

Doh lafzo mein ye bayan na ho paaye

Maybe not but a voice started ringing in her ears yes it was Maan's voice

"IT WAS A WEAK MOMENT WHICH OCCURRED DUE TO A LUST THAT MATERIALIZED BETWEEN 2 YOUTHS"

She made a disgusting face and threw that saree on the floor

Music

Without any hesitation she took the matchbox and removed a matchstick' she drank her saliva and ignited the matchstick and allowed the stick to slip from her finger

She closed her eyes as she could now feel the flames of fire in the surroundings; yes with this act of hers she had not only erased Maan's memories completely but she had actually murdered the Geet who was in love with a selfish man

The Geet who was standing there right now was a new Geet; yes she was the girl who would now live her life on her own terms; she will be successful and would take care of only those people who deserve her love

For the selfish worls she was now a stonehearted women who knew very well how to crush the selfish people beneath her feet

Precap 1: Geet once again starts living her life happily

Precap 2: Prem's special plan for Geet


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JAANE TU YA JAANE NA THREAD 5


Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is such a jerk, n that naintara is a bich ...
aww poor feet...she need to b happy..
loved it
awesome work...
Edited by rupzloveu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear pls pls update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
Naintara n maan hate them
hight of selfishness
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan Is bas**** and Tara is ****** ..I am to killed them with my bare hands ..Loved the Geet determination .. Nice Updateee waiting for Geet Next step

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