IPKKND: Second Hand News - Completed: Pg 83

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

KatnissEverdeen

@KatnissEverdeen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#691

Thank you!!!...for giving Khushi a better ending...

Loved everything about it!!!...Arnav 's repent at the end was beautifully sketched...👏

Quote

PriyaLove

@PriyaLove

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Wow! That was a different SS. It was unique but I loved it!

The ending of khushi dying left me a little upset and in disbelief, a bit like arnav, as I thought khushi was stronger than that and would keep hope. This ending seems to fit more, that khushi gave her happiness, now for arnavs.

I'm glad shyaam didn't make too big an appearance as he is pure evil!

I love how arnav knew exactly what khushi would do, he knew she wouldn't take her Payals off and he knew it wasn't her ashes and she wouldn't do that. I always love a bit of aman. He's a trivial character but one of my favourites.

I hope you make a sequel to this as arnav is still not aware of khushi's whereabouts and Im sure you can make another, new, exciting plot with your original brain! I can't stand arhi separated!

Sorry for the long comment!

-Nikki-

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

great parts
but is this really the end and if yes then i want an epilogue plz

Quote

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

very nice way to end the story..good work..😊

Quote

priyah_reddy

@priyah_reddy

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

Wow !!! Am so relieved that Khushi is alive 😊 Hope they meet one day and sort their issues 😊

Absolutely loved the SS !!! Too good 👏👏👏

Quote

Niaahuja

@Niaahuja

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

I skipped a heartbeat when I read that khushi had passed away..never did any piece of reading have this effect on me...urs was the first...great job..beauuutifully written...

The last part was Lso just amazing...she was alive, a reason for arnav to live and rejoice...wow fab ss

Edited by Niaahuja - 13 years ago

Quote

OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

i loved the SS

i thought it would be something political so i did not read initially

now i have realized my mistake

gosh the last 2 parts i had tears flowing with the turmoil khushi went through

there definitely has to be a sequel to this infact i should say all ur works need sequels

i know i sound greedy but ur writing is such a huge break from the serial

Quote

fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

Absolutely loved the story and waiting to read the Sequel !!!

Please write a story where the two of them meet and Arnav repents a lot !!!

Waiting for it

Quote

ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#699

read all the parts...you are a genius...loved the way they know each other when it actually matters...she had hope and now he does...so adorable...

a sequel will definitely be welcome...

Quote

Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#700

love this SS! emotional and so so touching... nice to know Khushi didn't believe anyone but her heart :D

I really hope you write its sequel! I cant wait to read that..

xoxo