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Posted: 13 years ago
do u want a update??????
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puhunch gayi?????/😆 acha sun gaana tu insert karegi...????//
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Posted: 13 years ago
wildcat meko bhi update chahie :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
ofcourse
mujhe bhi update chahiye
ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai

jldi update kro na
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S i want update

plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
accha dee ek faadu update diyo so that u can become ff of the week..

then gives the clean sweep u see... u got ss and os and now ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so guys...dnt bhadko mujhpe...so finally im here with update...with my fav baatcutter!!!!!!!!

finally they parted to their rooms...as soon as entering rey pulled her towards him resting his back on the door...


k: rey ye aap...

r: sshhh!!!!!!!! u promised ri8????/

kriya got what he was talking abt and blushed more

she looked away...

r: so tell me mai karoon kya?????//

k: rey!!!!!

she hugged him...he hugged her back...

r: isse kuch nahi hone wala my dear baatcutter...

she pulled herself backa nd ran to bed and stood there...he stood before her...


r: kriya we made love many tyms ri8???/ fir bhi itna kyun sharmati ho???

kriya blushed more and turned back... he hugged her from back...and kissed her cheek...she caressed his cheek with her left palm...

r: kriya...

k: hmmm...

r: baat kare????? pehle ki tarah...

kriya smiled wide at this...

k: damn...i m missing those days...jab hum ...

r: hum??????

k: pehle chalo...

she pulled him to the balcony...

it was all dark...she pulled him onto the couch...and settled in their usual position...she b/w his legs and he hugging her from back...and they were looking out...

r: hum???????

k: rey.aap bhi na...mai ye kehne wali thi ki ...

r: ki...

k: wo...jab hum ...

r: hum?????

k: jab hum ache dost se kuch jyaada bane ...uske baad hum bohut ache se baat karte the ri8??/

r: hmm...aur tum har choti baat pe mujhe galat samaj thi ho...

k: hmm...shayad yahi...

she went silent...

r: baatcutter...say it...

k: shayad usiki wajah se aap mere dil ke bohut hi jyaada kareeb aagaye...jab bhi aapko galat samaj thi thi...mujhe lagta tha ki maine kuch bohut badi galti i ...aur sach jaan ne ke baad pata chalta tha ki aap bohut hi jyaada acha ho..mai aapke baare mei galat thi...

he tightened his grip...

r: shayad mai sach mei bohut hi jyaada acha hun ki i got u...

she smiled...looked back and pecked his lips...

r: finally...thoda toh comfortable feel kiya...aur kissed me...*pout*

k: mai kab uncomfortable thi?????😕

r: arey abhi toh thi...

k: budhu...mai sharma rahi thi...uncomfortable nahi thi...

she said annoyed...

he pouted...

r: mujhe laga ki tum uncomfortable ho...

k: mai aapse kabhi uncomfortable nahi ho sakti...

r: sach...😉

she saw him smiling...she blushed...

he hugged her more tight and dug his face in her neck just feeling her skin...she breathed in heavily and gave a sigh ...and smiled and placed her head on his shoulders he was just feeling her skin with his face when their fingers played with each other...finally after a long tym when she was asleep he pulled back...pecked her lips and made himself lie on the couch and she in sleep comforted herself on him...he hugged her tight...she dug her head in the crook of his neck...her lips touching his skin and slept...he pecked her forehead and slpt looking at her...the next mrng kria felt the rays on her...she moved in sleep...she tried waking him...but she found the couch...

means he was not there...(she still didnt open her eyes...)

k: mumma!!!!!

she crid getting irritated...and suddenly out of no where she was lifted and placed on the smooth matress ...she knew it was him...she smiled wide and caught his hand...he leaned and kissed her forehead...

r: baatcutter so jao...abhi bohut tym hai...kk...

k: tum bhi...she said with a pout still eyes closed...he pecked her lips and layed beside her when she immediately slipped herself into his arms...

he smelled awe!!!!!! yeah she could say he had taken his bath and aloso put on his colougne...she loved it...she just inhaled it...

k: itni jaldi fresh hogaye???

she asked in her sleepy tone...

r: haa baby...wo swayam se kuch baat karke aaya tha so socha tym hai toh frsh hojaun...

k: u smell ...hmmm...awesome...

r: haha...paagal...ab soja...

she slowly opened her eyes...

k: meri needh chali gayi...

she complained lyk a kid...

he laughed throwing his head back...she loved it...she got lost in him...she loved to see his laugh...she can live just by seeing it...she smiled wide...

r: kahan chali gayi...

he asked after his short laugh...

k: pata nahi...universe ji ne thoda bhagadiya aur aapne poora...

she said with a pout...she knew he lyks her pout and to make her feel special he would do something more lovely...and she experienced his extraordinary love...so she always wantedly pouted...just to gain his attention more...

he looked at it...he loved her pout ...he caressed her lips with his thumb making her shudder...smiled and kissed at the edge of her lips...

r: toh baby ko sulane keliye mai karun kya?/

he asked smiling heartily...

k: mujhe ab nai sona...

r: toh??

he asked genuinely confused...

she slowly went up and kissed him softly...

first he was shocked...but he too responded and the kiss was soft...very soft...he poured all th love in it and she simply responded leaving him to lead...this move of her showed him how much she trusted and loved him...

he pulled her upon him not breaking the kiss...he kissed her to earnest...tightening his grip every second...as she cupped his face...finally he pulled back...she blushed and looked down...she placed her head on his chest after giving a kiss there ...she could clearly hear his heartbeat ...which she felt were only beating for her and yeah its the truth...he only lives for her now...she is everything to him/...

r: kya hua kria?????

k: baatcutter bolo...

she asked sweetly looking at him with innocence...

r: ?????

k: bulaona...

she said cutely...

sw: rey!!!!!!!!

swayam shouted from outside...

k: argghhh!!!!!!!!!

rey chuckled and smirked...

r: haa swayam...

sw: jaldi aana baat karni hai...kriya uth gayi kya??/ nahi toh utha shar bhi uth gayi...

r: haan bas aarahun do min...

sw: kk...

swayam went...

k: aap abhi nahi jaa rahe ho...apne bhai ko boliye...kabab mei haddi kyun ban raha hai swayam...

rey laughed nad then smirked...

r: arey mei kyun kuch bolun????teri behan bhi toh irritate karti hai hamesha...

kriya faked anger...

r: kya hua aaj meri baatcutter ko bohut pyaar aaraha hai????

k: matlab kya hai aapka?????

r: yahi ki...i love u...

he said slowly and sweetly...

she smiled...

r: baatcutter...

k: hmm...

r: tumhe pata hai i love calling u that...

k: mujhe bhi...

rey smiled...

r: i...

she stopped him...

k: hamesha aap kyun jhukte ho pehle?????

r: kyun ki mujhe jhukna acha lagta hai...

k: par aap jhuke wo mujhe pasand nahi...mai hamesha aapko demand karti hun na...mai buri hun...

r: dnt dare u...meri baatcutter ko blame karne ki...

k: i love u...

r: love u more...

k: rey aap mere saamne kabhi mat jhuko...warna mai bigad jaungi...

r: chup...sshhh!!!!!!! tum hamesha mere dil mei hoti ho...toh mujhe jhukne mei koi problem nahi...waise mujhe nahi lagta mai jhukta hun tere saamne...

k: nahi...aap hamesha mujhe itna pamper kyun karte ho???//

r: kyun ki u are worth it...and mujhe bas yahi tareeka aata hai apna pyaar dikhane ka...

k:...

r: kya hua baatcutter...?????

k: toh mai kaise aapko bolun ki mai aapse kitna pyaar karti hun????

r: bas...jab bhi mere bahon mei hogi...feel safe...aur kuch nahi chahiye...

she hugged him...

k: hum aaj aise hi nahi rehsakte???//

r: nahi...mujhe bhook lagi hai...

he chuckled...

k: hit him slightly...mera matlab tha yahi pe room mei...

r: swaron ke saath nahi ghoomna????? mai poori zindagi tumhare saath hun baby...

k: rey????

r: haan...

k: agar mujhe kuch hogaya toh?????/

r: baatcutter...😡

k: sach mei...plzz...bolo...

r: baatcutter mujhe iss baare mei baat nahi karna...

he gently placed her on bed and went out saying...

"jaldi fresh hoke aajao"he said and left

k: paagal kardiya unka mood kharab...aisi thoughts aate hi kyun tujhe?????/arghh!!!!! jaldi jaake fresh hojao aur unhe manao...

she went to freshen up...he went out...swayam was sitting on the couch in the hall...he went and sat beside him...they talked abt their work and rest...then sharon entered in a simple hotpant and a tee...

sharon:


kriya:

she

came in...and both the boys looked at her...swayam was in awe!!!!!! sharon blushed and greated them...but yeah she was uncomfortable...both her husband and bestie are there itself...rey understood that...he decided to give them their space and went to the hall balcony and stood there leaning on the railing...he looked at the city drowned in his thoughts...the sweet morning played before him but struck at something...her words...

"agar mujhe kuch hogaya toh?????"

these lines moved in front of him as if some one is playing rewind and then playing...and suddenly out of nowhere that dreadful dream played in front of his eyes clearly...

dear kriyaanshians...yaad haina ki wo dreadful dream kya hai??????/ya phir mai yaad dilaun?????/ kuch nahi bas yahi tha ki...rey nad kriya were chasing near a cliff...and...haha😆😈...wah sabko yaad hai...i love u ppl for that...agar kisiko yaad nahi toh boldo...ache se explain karoongi...and haa better fix the dream in mind...kaafi imp role hai dream ka...😛 kyun ki ye dream hi banke reh sakta hai ya ...😈..
samaj gaye??????? wah...mere readers kitne hoshiyaar hai...chalo wo sab chodo ab enjoy this ...

he closed his eys tight and jerked his head to ri8 as if someone slapped hard...he stayed like that for 2 secs when he heard her scream...she was calling him...he snap opened his eyes and looked down...but no she was not there ...he looked at his room door it was still closed...means she is still in room safe and sound...he sighed heavily...he looked around...there swaron stood in each others embrace...looking at each other and talking ...lovey dovey talks...he smiled and turned not to disturb or see their private moment...he wanted to be with her ...but no...first he should get out of his fear...or else he would cry before her...and he dnt want her to be tensed...so he turned around and tried his best to be absorbed by the nature...he took a deep heavy breath...closed his eyes...and then looked up opening his eyes...and to his help cool breeze started its way...as it is 6 in early morning the weather was pleasant...he a tear rolled down his eye...he slowly wiped it as her smiling face appeared in the sky blocking the view of whole world to him...he grinned wide...

her thought made him happy...

ur my life bhi kam hai kriya...kya bolun tujhe...ki tum mereliye kya ho???? mai khud nahi jaanta...par itna jaanta hun ...mai wo sapna kabhi hakeeqat mei badalne nahi doonga...

he quickly wiped the second one before it made its way...shaked his head and looked forward ...thinking the night before day...cool breeze hit him and he felt her flavour in it,...he just inhaled it closing his eyes...

guys...just jo slow and soft...its too simple yet sweet and romantic...so dnt read in hurry...imagine everything happening slowly...do u remember kriyaansh tujhko jo paaya dance...just like that...so soft ...smooth...cute...i know kuch jyaada hi bol rahi hun par its necessary u know...aur agar jaldi mei ho toh then aage se baad mei aaram se padlena...



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he stood looking t sky!!!!!!!! folded his hands and rubbed them as he felt the cold breeze...and then stretched his hands and closed his eyes inhaling the fresh air...and suddenly two soft hands moved on his chest and ended around his shoulders from back...he knew it was her...as soon as her hand touched his skin he smiled...it was as if reflexes...her touch and his smile...he placed his palms over hers and squeesed them slowly...and then caught her ri8 hand and pulled her front...she came front and soon caught her ears with a pout saying sorry for what she did...they didnt speak once...it was their hearts speaking...he looked at her taking her image in...he slowly pulled her close cupped her face and kissed on her forehead when she kissed his chin at the same tym...they stayed like that for a min and pulled back...

looked deep in each others eyes...she again mouthed a sorry...he slowly nodded his head in negation and hugged her hiding her head in btw his hands...he gripped her tight in fear ...she senses something...she pulled back and looked at him questioningly...he just nodded nothing giving his million dollar smile...she too smiled...they kept looking at each other for sometym...soon she broke the eyelock...and to change the topic she clutched her dress and lokked down asking excited how she was looking through eyes...

he just looked at her dress...

gosh!!!!!!!! dead!!!!!!!!!

how could she be too hawt he thought...he checked her from toe to head...she stood grinning wide...and finally when their eyes met she came to know what effect she is having on him ri8 now...she blushed hard as he looked at her intensely...he slowly slid his hand and pulled her towards him by waist...he was abt o lean when she moved back...he stopped...she gave her sweetest smile for which he got lost...and she moved back slowly and turned around taking fw steps...but he caught her wrist...looking at her back...she turned and gave him . one of her sexiest smiles...he slowly left her hand as she stepped back...he wanted to kiss her now...but he was just rooted to his place...more than kissing he want to take her image as more as possible...he was looking at her back ...she went forward and pulled the curtain...he frowned...after that she turned...looked at him and blushed and looked down shyly...he shaked his head to come out of trance and think abt the situation...

then he got it...swaron wer straight to them so she covered the curtain...he looked at her with "did she really do that "expressioon continuously a smile playing on his lips...he slowly walked to her...she was blushing too hard...he went near her nad cuped her face...

and lifted her face for her eyes to meet his...he looked at him shyly...he was wondering what happened today that she was being too bold...

she is kriya ghai!!!!!!! oops...kriya reyaansh singhania rey...she is too un predictable...

he leaned down to take her lips into his/...but she placed a palm on his chest and stopped ...he looked at her confused...she gave a sweet smile which skipped his beats and went close to him...slowly encircled his neck with her hands and stood on his shoes...and went on toes and took his lips in hers...as soon as she moved close his hands went automatically around her gripping her tight and pulling her more into him...the kiss was too soft...they slowly played trying to take each others lips into theirs...finally he pulled her more close and took her lips in his...all the while both were chukling slightly...as soon as he kissed she closed her eyes...left aroung his neck and right in his hair...and he pulled her more close such that their each and every part of their body touched each others and slid his left hand down and pulled her right leg by her thigh as she clutched his left leg with her ri8 after pilling up...and his hand still caressing her thigh...finally they pulled back when they were in lack of air...and then she looked at him slowly pulling herself away and finally onto her feet...

k: har baar mere paas aane keliye aapko jhukna nahi chahiye...kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi aane dijiye...

r: kyun ??? mera tere liye jhukna acha nahi lagta??????/

he asked caressing her hair...

k: acha toh lagta hai...par kabhi kabhi mere pati ko kisi cheez keliye jhukte dekhna mujhe bilkul pasand nahi...chahe wo khud mai kyun na ho...

she said making his collar perfect ...he smiled at her...he pulled her close cupped her face and kissed on her hair...

on head above the ear on the hair...i especially love that kiss...jab bhi mai roti hun mera bhai wahi kiss karta hai...i feel protective and care towards me...try once 😉

she closed her eyes and kissed his arms which were still on her cheeks...

to say ri8 on his muscles..uff...agar koi aapki chera pakadta hai and u turn to kiss their hands in the same position thn jaha kiss karte ho wahan...

he pulled back after a min...they smiled...
.and both chuckled slightly seeing where they were and what they were doing...they interwined their fingers and entered the hall...swaron just went apart and were abt to turn to search them when all the four noticed each other...all smiled not to make a awkward moment as all were doing the same thing till now...reyam finally broke the silence telling them to take their stuff and hurry up as they are gng to leave for sight seeing...TOGETHER!!!!!

all shouted YAY!!!!!!!!! and the girls ran inside to bring their bags in which their and their dear hubbies wanted stuff was present and came back...

boys took those and all went down to take their breakfast...


thats it guys!!!!!


sorry for being so late...but adjust...

NEXT PART:

SPECIAL FOR FRIENDS!!!!!!!!!!

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plzz cmnt and like!!!!!!

love u all



deetha( wildcat)









Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally u upadated this ff...

I so love this story...


Awesome part deetha

lovd it...

Hayee kria's morning avatar was so damn amazing...

Pehle sharon pareshan karti thi ab swayam...lolz

sab kabab mein haddi ban rahe hai...

Bt wat was that end...m really scared...firse kria ko kuch honewala toh nai hai na?
Arghh u cnt end it on cliffhangers
so nt fare...


muje laga tha it was nt totaly update...
Finaly its done
aww deetha love u...simply amazing part yaar...
So cute, romantic n so purely kriyansh...
Lovd to see that kria took the charge this time...
Such awesomee kriyansh moments...perfectly wrote abt the 3 kisses...

U r a wonderful writer deetha...

Superb part

Plz update soon

waiting 4 d nxt part...



ps - i lovd kria's dress...
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
abhi tak jitna likha loved it..

looks like aur bhi hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ur update was fab...
lvd it to the core
Kriyaansh are too cute in this
aaur THANKU FOR THE UPDATE
i felt ki pata nhi kitne years ke baad aapne update kiya...

brt truly it was awesommeee

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