so guys im back ...with an update...i thought of updating something else but ended in this/...coz the requests i got to update this impressed me...love u all to love my work...so here goes my update...
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it was evening ...4r of them were sitting in the garden having their sip of coffee havin a nice friendly tym ...they were speaking when sharon asked...
sh: waise hum jaa kaha rahe hai???
k: haan rey papa ne decide karliya kya???
r: nahi ...wo hamari choice rahegi...
sw: yes...!!
krisha were on one side and reyam on other side...
after a small conversations the girls and boys said at once...
girls: switzerland
boys : singapore
girls and boys looked at each other...
girls: switzer land...
boys : singapore...
girls: no
boys yes...
they ended in fight...finally the boys left and booked tickets for singapore...girls are fuming...they are not talking to them...
they have got the tickets 4r the next day luckily...boys informed the girls...the girls packed quitely ...
the boys tried their best to convince them...but as always failed...
next day the are in the flight...girls entered first and the boys
( guys just imagine the interior of the plane is lyk...two seaters on both sides and some free space in btw...just imagine aise shayad nahi hota ki middle space jyaada ho...but isme hoga😛)
their seats were lyk two in front and back of it ...girls went and sat on the back two seats...boys went to them...
r: ( sweetly) kriya aage aao na...
k: nahi mai yahi pe baitungi...
sw: sharon tum aage aajao na...( sweetly)
sh: mujhe bhi yahi pe baitna hai...
reyam: arey ...
they were cut..
krisha: aapko samaj nahi aata hame saath mei yahi pe baithna hai
reyam: yeh toh galat hai...
krisha: bilkul theek hai ab jao aur jaldi baito flight take off karne wali hai...
reyam : theek hai...* babyface*
the flight was ready to take off...reyam looked back silently ...
sh: shona daro mat mai hun na...
kriya was holding sharons hand tight...and eyes closed tight...rey for once felt he could gather her in his arms and remove the fear...
soon sharon grip too tightened...
k: ( opened her eyes..) sweetu tumhe bhi...
sh: (tensed ) haa mujhe bhi...
swayam too felt very bad...krisha caught each other tight ...airjostess told reyam to sit straight...the sat and were moving uneasyly...
they heard the girls chanting the names...
kriya: bhagwan ji bhagwan ji...sharon: jesus jesus...
they felt very bad and were very tensed ...finally they were in air ...krisha finally became normal...
r: yaar kuch karte hai ...mai aise use baat kiye bina nahi reh sakta...
sw: sach mei yaar ...mujhe uske saath baitna hai...
r: toh ab kya kare??
sw: idea...
he told the idea...both smiled and hi-5 ed...
plzz listen to the song guys...
rey: yun tera muskurana...
he turned back stood on his knees on the seat and placing his hands on the seat and resting his chin on hands he sang smiling at her...
kriya was shocked...
sw: aur aake chale jaana..
same as rey...
sharon too shocked...
rey: yun tera muskurana...
sw: aur aake chale jaana...
reyam: kismat ka hai khuljaana...
they got of their seats and strtd dng some bollywood steps ...( guys imagine kaise steps honge...mai sab describe nahi kar sakti...)
reyam:
Tera hi deedar hua
Pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua is dil ko
Na tu inkar hua na hi iqrar hua
Jana kia yaar hua is dil ko
Yun tera muskurana
Aur a kay chalay jana
Kismat ka khul jana
the air hostess came to them to stop dem from dancing...reyam looked at each other and soon rey smiled and kept his hand around the airhostress and strtd singing on seeing her...kriya was shocked that the airhostress was fully mesmerised by him...
Tera deedar hua
Pehla sa pyar hua
he did a step as if teaching her soon the airhostress to strtd dancing as the rest of them joined her
Pehli hi baar hua is dil ko
Na tu inkar hua na hi iqrar hua
Jana kia yaar hua is dil ko
rey smiled came to swayam and both hi-5ed and strtd dancing...
( at 1: 25) swayam strtd acting lyk singing that re ga ga/...with full feel ...rey looked at him confsed ...soon swayam said rey to continue...rey same at strting but cant so he pouted at swayam...swayam got irritated and twisted reys ear as rey shouted ...mariga paaa...
krisha lughed standing outside their seats...the boys looked at them...
sw: Tujh se mila tou jaagi duein
Aur nazar ne sajda kia
swayam walked to wards sharon singing and did lyk dua...and looked at her as she looke at him
r : Jannat zameen per aye utar ke
Khushion ne jesa chun sa liya
rey went to kriya and sang with a smile
4r stared into each others eyes...rey sang again
r: Tujh se mila tou jaagi duein
Aur nazar ne sajda kia
rey went back singing as the girls stared at them ...
sw: Jannat zameen per aye utar ke
Khushion ne jesa chun sa lia
swayam too went back singing...
girls looked at each other and then front but the boys were not there...
sw : Har manzar dil nasheen hai
he came from behind her and sang...
r : Tu hi tu har kahin hai
rey too came from back and their eyes locked...
reyam: Ho tera yeh addaein tu hai qaatilana
they came front ...
reyam: Tera deedar hua
Pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua is dil ko
Na tu inkar hua na hi iqrar hua
Jana kia yaar hua is dil ko
they danced...
at music they were doing salsa imagining rey as boy and swayam as girl...girls were laughing lyk hell...( lyk in choli ke peeche kya hai sequence)
at (3: 40) the boys got lost in their respective girls laughter...kriya sat down in the seat laughing when sharon caught the seat tight laughing...
boys walked slowly in front of them...
r: Tere bina main tanha tha har pal
Hoonto per har dam thi tishnagi
rey went on knees and sang looking at her with pain and hugged her by waist...kriya became silent
sw: Maqsad nahi tha sapney nahi they
Thi zindagi mein awargi
swayam took sharon's both hands in his and looked at her as she stared back...
r: Tu mera rehnuma hai
rey tightened his grip...
sw: Mazil hai rasta hai
swayam squeezed her hand...
reyam: ( still in their positions) Mere liye tu tu rab ka hai nazrana
girls got that they were getting senti so they went away andstrtd dancing as the boys saw smilingly
Tera hi deedar hua
Pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua is dil ko
Na tu inkar hua na hi iqrar hua
Jana kia yaar hua is dil ko
til now they dance...from now the respective boys come to then taking them into their arms...
Yun tera muskurana
Aur a kay chalay jana
Yun tera muskurana
Aur a kay chalay jana
Kismat ka khul jana
all the passengers stand up clapping and all the four dance ...
Tera hi deedar hua
Pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua is dil ko
Na tu inkar hua na hi iqrar hua
Jana kia yaar hua is dil ko
they bow to all of them...
finally all settle down...
rey: kya ab hum tumhare saath bait sakte hai.???
swayam too nodded...
girls smiled...
kriyaansh sat in front and swaron back of them...
( sorry guys as always i will focus on kriyaansh)
rey was hugging her from sidewards...
r: kriya...
she looked up still her head resting on his chest...
r: sorry...
k: nahi rey ...aapko sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...waise bhi mujhe kaha jaa rahe hai uski nahi kiske sath jaa rahi hun uski matlab honichahiye...waise agar aapne singapore select kiya toh zaroor koi special hoga...
he smiled and hugged her tight...
she slept in his arms ...he looked at her gave a peck on her forehead and her too drifted to sleep...
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r: kriya ruko...
k: nahi ...pakadiye mujhe...😛
they were playing on a hill ...kriya was moving back and rey was gng front without noticing ...he was just trying to catch...
suddenly kriya slipped and fell into valley...
reys eyes widened...: KRIYA!!!!!!!!!!!! he shouted...
quickly he ran down the valley just to find her on a big rock ...her head hit hard and her face and the rock full of blood...
he quickly went to her tryed to wake her up but it was too late...for the last tym he saw into her open eyes and closed them...
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rey opened his eyes breathing hard...he was sweating heavily...he looked around ...and found her safe in his hands...he tightened his grip...the airhostress came and asked...
ah: any help sir( concerned..)
r: yea...wash...wash room...
she pointed and he slowly made kriya straight and went to wash room...washed his face and came out. telling himself...
"bad dream rey...just a bad dream...just a dream..."
he sat back again taking her in his arms...he gave a warm kiss on her forehead...she moved in her sleep and nudjed herself more into him...he too pulled her close ...he tried sleeping but the dream strtd again...so he gave up the thought of sleeping...he just kept looking at her ...after smtym she woke up...as soon as she saw him he turned away to other side...
k: rey...
r: haan ...still looking other side as if finding the airhostess.
k: she placed her hand on his cheek and turned his face towards hers...she saw that his eyes were wet...
k: rey kya hua???( tensed)
r: arey kuch nahi kuch chala gaya isiliye...he looked back and called the air hostess...
r: can i have a tissue plzz...
AH: sure sir 1 second...
she went and came back with a tissue ...rey wiped her tears and acted as if cleaning his eyes...kriya was just looking at him...she knew him very well...something is irritating him ...she decided to dig it out...but soon they heard an announcement ...they went out...
sh: tum log luggage leke aao hum yahi pe bait the hai...
r: nahi ...tum log bhi hamare saath chalo...
sw: arey rey kyun yaar unhe aaram se baitne do hum laate hai na...
rey gave a pleading look to him ...
kriya was noticing rey from when she got up ...
swayam somehow pulled rey with him...krisha sat there talking abt the surrroundings...
near the luggage...they took them and were heading back when swayam stopped rey...
sw: kya hua???
r: wo mujhe poochna hai...kya hua???
he tried being normal...
sw: rey bas naatak mat kar...sach sach bata kya hua???
rey gave up and told swayam his dream...
swayam was shocked but he acted normal and hugged rey...
sw: its just a bad dream rey ...relax...we will take care kk...
rey nodded and the 4 headed to wards their rooms which were already booked...
kriyaansh:
swaron:
it was night so they directly ate and headed to rooms...
kriya trying all the way to ask rey but he ignored...
as soon as they entered the room rey knew that she would qsn...
r: kriya tum jaldi fresh hojao mai abhi aata hun
and he left before she could speak...
he went to swarons room...swayam opened the door ...sharon went to freshen up...
r: yaar bohut disturbed hun...really darr lag raha hai...
sw: rey wo just sapna tha...kk...dil pe mat le...
r: yaar achanak se aisi dream???
sw: rey tu kuch zyaada hi soch raha hai...for god sake its just a dream...ab jyaada soch mat...hum yaha enjoy karne aaye hai aur kriya poori tarah se trip ko enjoy kare wo tri responsibility hai...dream ke baare me sochna chod aur reality pe dhyaan de...
r: yeah dude i think u are r8/...
sw: ab jaao wo akeli hai...
r: hmm...thanks bro...
sw: kya yaar tu bhi...
they hugged slightly and rey left...
sw: itna ajeeb aur dangerous sapna...* phew* anyways hume careful rehna chahiye...
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rey went o his room ...she was already out of the washroom...
k: rey kya hua aap...
r: kriya mai fresh hoke aata hun nd he went in...
k: kuch toh hai jo inhe disturb kar rahi hai...mai jaan ke hi rahoongi...
he came out after a long tym ...she was sitting on the bed seeing him ...he was standing in front of the mirror...
k: rey ab bato ge bhi ki kya hua???
r: ( acting) arey kuch nahi kriya ...mai bilkul theek hun...
k: ( she went and stood in front of him...cupped his face) kya hua ??? aap itne tensed ???
he smiled on seeing her tensed face and kissed her palms...and caught them still on his face...
r: kuch nahi ...
he hugged her and closed his eyes taking in the moment but the dream came in front of his eyes...he tightned his grip...she felt strange and pulled back...
k: rey sach batayiye kya hua????
r: bas darr lag raha tha hi kahi mai tuhe kho na dun...
k: aise kaise kho denge...mai hamesha aapki hun...hum kabhi alag nahi hosakte agar hona hai toh kab ki hochuke hote hai ...ab tension chodo
she wiped the lines on his forehead and kissed on his chest and hugged him...
he too smiled and hugged her back...he lifted her in his arms and placed on the bed and slept beside her taking her in his arms...both slept peacefully in each others arms...
guys i know u expected some romance and all and this was a boring chapter ...but kya karoon ..stry aise hi socha maine...so sorry for this sad and peeka update...
hope u all will lyk it...
lyk and cmnt...😳
❤️deetha❤️
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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