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Posted: 13 years ago
I liked Vaibhavi immensely in this one.

I recant my earlier statement, that I do not like her much. In fact, in the moments where he walks backwards simply looking at her, in her eyes, all the way to the exit,..when I had first read Rajeev's version, it had an exhilarating feel to it.. like a sudden rush of air into the lungs ..

from her dazed ceiling-gazing, to the start of a surprise, like when wet fingers sprinkle dizzy drops when thrust from against the thumb..

and when I read , or reed Vaibhavi's version, how that gentle rebuke thrummed in her veins, in such a raw reaction, while he's leaving and even after hes gone.. its a heartbreak kind of twist in the chest, .. it doesn't leave , and it doesn't rest..

there's this that explains what further clouds her foggy judgement..

but how I love her here.. ( from hereon? :) )
and for the grace with which she leaves him, against her own need of wanting to comfort him, make up to him..

I almost hurried through the next part to read this again.

as for diversions you say, dont know,.. i feel its unlikely:).. looking forward to welcome surprises from you..
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
"date other people"
lets see how they can *smirking*
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Posted: 13 years ago
res!

Aha! Nice! So, Vaibhavi/Veronica was 'interested' in Rajeev the first few times she met him.. Interesting! You know what, I like this about you.. You give so much depth to the other characters too! The Vaibhavi-Rajeev part was really interesting. I'm looking forward to how things unfold for them..


And these two.. They can barely stay away from each other for two days, or stay away from each others' thoughts for two minutes!

Date other people?? Haha! That shall be seen, indeed! I second the person above me! :D
Edited by appy_12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm...arnav and khushi are going to end up deeper shit possibly in near future

they dont have clear heads now so it takes time to realise what they want to do

she is trying to escape the situation instead of dealing with it maturely
god save them

poor rajeev

great update
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Posted: 13 years ago
V is visibly upset and wants to make up with Rajeev but is taking things slowly...good.

Phew..arnav and kushi..they are running away from each other, fearful of the intensity of their feelings and repercussions it may have if it goes sour in future...good thinking...but alas..dating other people will of course make matters worse...because the heart has its own mind sometimes..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..i hope rajeev forgives v soon...and arnav and khushi are scared of being in some sort of relationship so they want to date other people...that seems interesting..please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love this ff... i just love it..

please update often.. don't make me wait to feel what i am feeling when i read this story.. it gives me such a great feeling... i cannot describe it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well they're reasonable lol n vib n raj awww
But arhi. I vote just screw it and start screwing each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
The khushi and arnav scene was electric...date other people? Thats so going to work...not!! Can't wait to see how they both fare with dating others! V and rajeev - seeing another side to v in that. Feel so sorry for rajeev!
Edited by fatima2603 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
such an excellent solution, date other people.. hahaha.. Khushi has seen him with other women and I am sure she is matured enough to not overreact though it is gonna be painful but Arnav has never shared his object of attraction with anyone... so it is gonna be a different story all together.. can't wait when they start dating..

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