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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
if I'm the Sanaa you're referring to..then I'm really really really sorry..been caught up in academics..!! :( My weeks are hectic..weekend go in just lying on my bed (coz i'm too tired to do anything else..honest) or spending my time at my cousins..helping babysit..!! :S So yeah..really packed..I'm sorry..:(
BTW skimmed through the whole installement...instead of putting it off I'd better just comment and get it done and over with..lolx..
Firstly..your writing has imrpoved by a GREAT deal!! Really..!! :) It's become amazing..and I'm saying that coz I've skipped the last few chapter - haven't read them..not bothered to read them now I have a gist of what's happening..- and the way your described everything was flawless..!! :) Bless ROhan being the best friend..but it's all Riddhima's fault isn't it?? she shouldn't have agreed to get egnaged to him..knowing she didn't love him..and then even if the whole world put pressure on her..that's just my thought though..it'll be interesting to see how she overcomes the problem..
ABOUT TIMEE!!! They need to catch that dude Vivek!! He's outsmarting everyone in the blinking officee!!! Huh..Outsmart the gang..fine..Outsmart Armaan..??! Grr..Outsmart hermione?? LMAO!! Impossible..though then again..that's only if your hermione is JK Rowling's Hermione...ie smae characteristics..though where's Ron?? Bless that dude..I do adore him..!! And Harry..!! I love their friendship!!! it's sooo awesome..ohkk.. so I started ranting off about Harry Potter..not abig thing considering I haven't read it in MONTHS and I miss it sooo much..lolx..
As for Abhi-Armaan relationship..well I think it's portrayed really well...and Abhi doesn't strike me as a character that's snobbish..I mean..he admits to his faults..and he congratulates and agrees with Armaan despite not liking him..But he has maturity and that's what always comes out..even in DMG..which never put Abhi in as bad a light as..uhmm.. Sid?? LOL..Well Sid coz he basically stole Ridz away from Armaan..made OUR Armaan cry..and claimed that Ridz loved him..well at the juncture she was stuck at..she'd probably love any third fourth of fifth person that came into the equation as well..lolxx...
Anyways..moving on from my DMG rant..Rahul - Armaan session..it was actually quite cute..well written..and really guyish..lolx..
OHkies..that's my comment..hope I can read up further..and comment on the next part/installment..:)
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX


Yeah I will make ..i actully make siggies for you and avi i learned a new type of avi..but my comp..its mother board ...usko kuch ho gaya..mera omp kharab ho gaya..papa ne kaha exams k bad or exam 11 june ko khatam ho ga..ab IN SHA ALLAH .mai apka liye siggies or banners or avi bhi bnao gi.

yar this study trust me merav ak word perhna ko dill nai karta...jab bhi laptop ka aga beth karchat ka sochti hai exam k khiyal ajata hai...
dont ask!ki tayari nai hai exam ki or exam 30 may se start ho raha hai:(

Jana you are going to tach me how to make avis when you are free from exams.
Aww!! Poor girl..Uncle would get computer repaired after exams.
Jana there are still 10 days for the preparation.If you devote 5-6 hours to your studies,I am sure that you are going to rock in your exams.Studies are really important ,so you should really work hard...
All the best for your papers.I would love to have your siggies and avis sweety...
love you..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Liashna

I read, finally.. Its midnight here..😆
Guys seriously, i can't handle praises too much, my doc said too much sweetness can cause diabetes.. touch wood..

I really wanna comment so Aasma and Maria, stip making me cry.. Feeling like butterflies in my stomach.. :S
:P



awww my baby wants to ry..common I am almost crying give me company yar..it is said tha when you cry no one there is for you..but cry with me and prove this worng🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54


Yeah I will make ..i actully make siggies for you and avi i learned a new type of avi..but my comp..its mother board ...usko kuch ho gaya..mera omp kharab ho gaya..papa ne kaha exams k bad or exam 11 june ko khatam ho ga..ab IN SHA ALLAH .mai apka liye siggies or banners or avi bhi bnao gi.

yar this study trust me merav ak word perhna ko dill nai karta...jab bhi laptop ka aga beth karchat ka sochti hai exam k khiyal ajata hai...
dont ask!ki tayari nai hai exam ki or exam 30 may se start ho raha hai:(
Jana you are going to tach me how to make avis when you are free from exams.
Aww!! Poor girl..Uncle would get computer repaired after exams.
Jana there are still 10 days for the preparation.If you devote 5-6 hours to your studies,I am sure that you are going to rock in your exams.Studies are really important ,so you should really work hard...
All the best for your papers.I would love to have your siggies and avis sweety...
love you..




Yeah I will mae you learn IN SHA ALLAH after exams ...i too gona again download phtoshop once my omp came so in that time i will make you learn too..its easy..and with the time you got better:)
yeah I am devoting my 5 hours atleast..and trying to prepare my weak subjets bio and urdu(ghazals ki tashreeh...seriously it sucks!!!!!! I am so week in urdu)..bio i out of 14 my 11 hapters are prepare but need to revise them other three are difficut..one iam not doing so I am preparing the difficult hater 11,9,14
ets hope for best:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I'm sorry to disappoint you Mahua.

I would like to know what exactly did you expect from this part.
Plz share your views coz it would let me know if my thoughts about the second installment are in line with your expectations or not...
I'm happy to know that you liked the realization part...
AR scene is gonna come in the next installment ,so don't feel bad.You are going to read a good long AR part soon...
Well Rohan knows that Ridz doesn't love him yet.But will he know that Ridz loves Armaan is a big question and you'll have to read this ff further to get an answer to this question...
AN are cute.Isn't it?
I also wish that I may get time to write the next installment soo.
love you...



Yeah missed AR so that disappointed me a bit but you did good work no doubt about it *applause*..I was expecting AR thats it :) nothing very specific but after so long I got to read VV so I wanted to read AR scene so that's what I missed in this one :(
Hmm certainly that will be turning point of this story wen rohan will get to know that ridhima loves armaan ..and even bigger exciting moment will be when armaan will get to know she loves him..yeah AN were cute :)...yup would like to read next installment very soon !

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Aww Aasma *hug*

I hope the hugs says it all, kuz am so emotional at the moment..

To the update, i bet the comment will be long..

The title itself got me hooked :)) Who would know this better than me, distance makes the hearts grow fonder.. 😊

I loved the way Riddhima ponders over the moments with Armaan =)
*day-dreaming*
But then realization dawns upon her whether Armaan think the same of her.. I'll just ignore the rohan part here.. Life is to beautiful to be wasted thinking about what you don't like..

Then scene shifts, Officer Armaan :))
Clue?? He loves her... weee. :D
I can imagine that smile on his face when he said that he should meet riddhima 🤣 I would crack right away if i were rahul.. lol

Muskaan and Rahul, how i missed them..

Ah Nikki and Abhi, loved their conversation.. And Abhi is real understanding..

So much to say,
Perfect!!!

Take Care Aasma, love you and update soon.. and forgive me for my late and short comments..

Thanks for the wishes :))

Liashna( At least you guys got the name right.. 😆)

The journey of vice and virtue will always b memorable for me.. love suspense stories, ur writing and <3

got to res sme spots on other ffs b4 they stop pmin me. lol.

mwaah sweetie.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

if I'm the Sanaa you're referring to..then I'm really really really sorry..been caught up in academics..!! :( My weeks are hectic..weekend go in just lying on my bed (coz i'm too tired to do anything else..honest) or spending my time at my cousins..helping babysit..!! :S So yeah..really packed..I'm sorry..:(

BTW skimmed through the whole installement...instead of putting it off I'd better just comment and get it done and over with..lolx..
Firstly..your writing has imrpoved by a GREAT deal!! Really..!! :) It's become amazing..and I'm saying that coz I've skipped the last few chapter - haven't read them..not bothered to read them now I have a gist of what's happening..- and the way your described everything was flawless..!! :) Bless ROhan being the best friend..but it's all Riddhima's fault isn't it?? she shouldn't have agreed to get egnaged to him..knowing she didn't love him..and then even if the whole world put pressure on her..that's just my thought though..it'll be interesting to see how she overcomes the problem..
ABOUT TIMEE!!! They need to catch that dude Vivek!! He's outsmarting everyone in the blinking officee!!! Huh..Outsmart the gang..fine..Outsmart Armaan..??! Grr..Outsmart hermione?? LMAO!! Impossible..though then again..that's only if your hermione is JK Rowling's Hermione...ie smae characteristics..though where's Ron?? Bless that dude..I do adore him..!! And Harry..!! I love their friendship!!! it's sooo awesome..ohkk.. so I started ranting off about Harry Potter..not abig thing considering I haven't read it in MONTHS and I miss it sooo much..lolx..
As for Abhi-Armaan relationship..well I think it's portrayed really well...and Abhi doesn't strike me as a character that's snobbish..I mean..he admits to his faults..and he congratulates and agrees with Armaan despite not liking him..But he has maturity and that's what always comes out..even in DMG..which never put Abhi in as bad a light as..uhmm.. Sid?? LOL..Well Sid coz he basically stole Ridz away from Armaan..made OUR Armaan cry..and claimed that Ridz loved him..well at the juncture she was stuck at..she'd probably love any third fourth of fifth person that came into the equation as well..lolxx...
Anyways..moving on from my DMG rant..Rahul - Armaan session..it was actually quite cute..well written..and really guyish..lolx..
OHkies..that's my comment..hope I can read up further..and comment on the next part/installment..:)
Love,
Sanaa

OMG!! Sana I just can't believe to see your comment here.
You are here after ages and I really missed reading your reviews.
It really means a lot to me when a wonderful writer like you appreciates me for my writing skills.I need to go long miles to write like you and many other wonderful writers on IF.
Sana you don't know how much delighted I am after reading your comment.I feel as if I am on cloud nine...
I'm glad to know that my writing skills have improved.I really needed to know that you see.Atleast kuch improvement toh hona chahiye na bade bade writers ki sangat mein rehne ka...
I can understand how much pressure academics put on poorstudents like us.I really miss the regular updates of LOOC and WK.
But I hope that now I would see your comments more often.
Coming to the story now.
To some extent you are right that Ridz should not have agreed for engagement but circumstances were such that she had to accept her father's wishes.Moreover, at that time she didn't know that she would fall in love with someone.She hoped that she will find a good husband in her best friend...All the games are played by destiny my friend..
Well Vivek and his gang is really smart.Isn't it?But don't worry Armaan and Hermione are going to catch him up very soon..
I also am a great Harry Potter fan.Well I didn't bring Ron into picture coz I always felt that Harry and Hermione would have made a better couple.He he he.Well this is what I have always hoped right from part 1..You see we both are crazy fans of Harry Potter.Ah!! I also have not read the book since ages yaar.I think I should start reading the series again...
I'm glad to know that you like Abhi's character and don't find him snobbish.But if you remember the first few parts then there are instances where he has been rude to Armaan.Well,abhi has always considered Armaan as his competitor which is the reason why they both could never be good friends..
Ah!! I just don't want to talk about Sid.I have got hard feelings for this character...
Rahul and Armaan make great friendsand I really love it when I write their scenes.
Sana I can't tell you in words about my feelings after reading your comment.
Thanks a lot for making me feel sooo good.
Plz stay around and keep motivating me with your kind words..
love you..
Take care!!
Muah!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path

Congrats Asma 🤗

res :)

Thanks a lot Vini for your sweet wishes..
I hope you may edit this reserve oy yours soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
hiii asma
awesome update
loved it
AR sooo cute thinking about each other
felt sad 4 ridzy
loved abhi
he was adorable
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanksss
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sweetdesire


Hey Aasma🤗...Finally we are on 3rd Thread of Virtue & vice..This calls for a celebration yaaar😃...Let's start then...Dhinchak Dhinchak...Yepiee🥳...A very Huge C-O-N-G-R-A-T-U-L-A-T-I-O-N-S for this achievement👏...You truly deserve it my dear...May you have many more threads like it and don't worry I will see to it ki aisa bahut jaldi ho😉.😆.I always love your writing and more than that you as my friend..I know that now a days you are very busy in ur academics and all but don't worry we are here only to support you😳...Love the first instalment to the core..Awiiee, Poor Ridzy...Feeling so bad for her...she is happy as well as sad also...completely understood her dilemma...So There is some progress in Ridzy's case...hope soon Armaan solve this case...Abhi-Nikki convo is also treat to read...Waiting for more so do try to continue soon...Take care..😊

Lots of Love

Geet

Geet sweetheart you are such a darling friend.
I am really fortunate to have you in my life.
Thanks a lot jana for your lovely wishes...
You have always been there for me and I can't thank you enough for it,,,
I'm glad to know that you loved the installment to the core...
Aww!! Don't feel bad jana.Everything will be fine soon.
AR are cute.Isn't it?A lot of progress is going to happen in ridz's case very soon jana...
You have been soo understanding dear and I love you for your amazing love and support.
Your inspiring words mean a lot to me...
Love you jana
Muah!!
A warm hug from my side.
Take care!

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