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@saucechips: Nyc SS!!!!😊

Enjoyed the entire SS. The best part was the "NK ki vidaai " thing. Would surely like to read it again a little later 😃

he gal i just came accross ur work n sply this story... i just loved it man u hv written it so beautifully...

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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.

It is the most hatke attempt on the redemption track.

I loved KKG's reasoning. The marriage was out of convenience not love. Though Khushi has forgiven Arnav, that doesnt change the fact of what he thinks of her... That stays the same and she walks out. 👏

That is so like Khushi on the show to forgive him simply and not hold grudges.

The 2nd bit I loved the most is when Arnav looks at the boxful of jaleibis and thinks that he will eat it all at the cost of his life if that is what it takes to bring Khushi back home. 😳

And amidst a lot of tussle, where he knows she cares and she tries futilely to show she doesnt, their families fix their marriage. When they got married on the sly they didnt ask their families. Now their families didnt ask them when fixing the remarriage. Fair enough 😛

And then the typical saucechips touch. No one does humor like you. Each wedding rasam was humorously handled and at the same time you give the audience an idea of how bit by bit their relationship is strengthened. But I do pity NK in all this. 😆

But before they wedded again, you also tackled the issue of trust and I liked that. Trust is the most essential ingredient in any relationship and especially in theirs.

She is not a gold digger and he knows that. It was important for him to tell her that he knows and she has nothing to worry about EVER. ⭐️

And finally... again I need to reiterate. You do humor beautifully. You must be so pagal to write such pagalpan. Bas!

Superb

I just loved this!

Too cute! :)

Wonderful journey!

Read it one go. It was fabulous.

This story is hilarious, loved it 😊

Hey!