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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Its amazing...
Sab ladkiya uski behene...rofl...
It Was superb
do write more such stuff...
Thanx 4 d pm

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

this was an amazing surprise!!!

wow!!! trial room me proposal n romance🤣🤣

OLD MAN saying AAJ KAL K BACHCHE was too too goood

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

⭐️hey nishi thankx for such a wonderful surprise
i loved it it was awesome actually very hawt and romantic u r unpredictable yaar itna saare amazing idea akhir laathi kaha se hai i am breathlees and speechless
tye way rey pulls kriya in trail room and their romance passionate romance was awesome and rey try to jelousfy kria was dam good
i really really apriceate ur update u r awesome writer love u love u love for this
a big hug from me to u 🤗
thankx once again 👏
aur ha we r waiting for ur previous update so exam katam hotahi jaldi jaldi update got it
wish u once again all the best for ur exam give ur best👍🏼

Edited by anniemathias - 13 years ago

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Wow... Wat a lovely surprise... Nyc 1 yaar... Hehehe...thnx... For d surprise nd amazin way of proposal... Hmm... Luvd it... Thnx for d pm tc

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shemli

@ShemliArsha

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

what a surprise!! It was mind blowing...loved it to the core...
hamare kria saare shopkeeper's ka band bajadhiya... 😆
Loved the way rey made her jealous 😳 ...O..M...G love confession in trial room...that was so hot n romantic.
U are truly an amazing writer...hats off to u.. 👏
In short it was mind blowing update...
All the best 4 ur exams...and thanks a lot 4 such a lovely surprise..

Edited by shemlisalim7 - 13 years ago

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sarah

@lover_kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

He slightly moves towards her lips n places his lips on her's n gives a light kiss..when he was about to move back she pulls him into a passionate kiss..he was shocked by her sudden action..Now she was going wild she pinned him to the wall n kissed him hard on his lips...it turned into a wild one...she started kissing his neck ,chest ,shoulders and again thier lips found each others..Now he pinned her to the wall and slightly moved back
kissed n bit her ear ,she moaned in pleasure...he whispered "i love u kria..willu marry me?"

this scene was awesome loved it million times

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: anniemathias
⭐️hey nishi thankx for such a wonderful surprise
i loved it it was awesome actually very hawt and romantic u r unpredictable yaar itna saare amazing idea akhir laathi kaha se hai i am breathlees and speechless
tye way rey pulls kriya in trail room and their romance passionate romance was awesome and rey try to jelousfy kria was dam good
i really really apriceate ur update u r awesome writer love u love u love for this
a big hug from me to u 🤗
thankx once again 👏
aur ha we r waiting for ur previous update so exam katam hotahi jaldi jaldi update got it
wish u once again all the best for ur exam give ur best👍🏼

Thnq thnq soo mch dear...luv u too.😊😊😊😊...pakka pakka exam khatam hone ke baadh sidha gar akhe update karungi phir kana kaungi ...😆😆😆😉😉

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awsome surprise...love it to core
n da way rey plan executed was jst too good...he is too good yaar
n dere trial room romance hayee!!!!!!!!! n alk da tym rey was shirtless...hehehe
n dat AJJ KAL KE BACHE was tooo amazing...hehehehehe 🤣 🤣