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Neeti

@hARSHA_Neeti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

neeti missing u ...

hey so sweet of u aroma u were missing me i to missed u my dear...ok so now cuming to update

Chapter-2

hm.. suspense haan.. evry1 keeping suspense akhir kria karne kya ja rahi hai jo smriti use warn kar rahi h...

Luvd kira's room its beautiful & abt d color so i ll go wid white itslf..

& so cute Sw thinking of KR reunion...

waise 1 sw hi hai jo ultimately kr reunion kara sakta hai...

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

aroma dekh aaj neeti ne bhi comment kar dia aaj to update banta hai i ll be waiting 4 ur update...

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti
i know i shud hav comented much b4 but dear truly speaking jst now i hav unpaked my PC & got a room ready 4 it...

1st of all coment for intro part

hey i'm new ... first time likh rahi hoo ..
please marna mat ... main try karugi apna best dene ki ... firstly thanks to neeti for being my friend ... neeti this is for u as u'r b'day gift hope u like it ... main tumhari trha expert nahi hoo ...so manage kar lena ...

So dis is my bday gift dat means dis is my FF😳 ryt??? (jst kidding)
well i trruly luvd my bday gift & i m vry vry happy 2 get dis gift dat too in advance😃
wat a gift i m so luky 2 hav such beautiful FF as my bday gift 4m my cutee & lovely friend aroma...

hmm... now coming to d update.

its rili awesome concpt & vry new 2,
hey dont think dat u r new not expert & all i m 2 not expert jst strtd writing ...
kria back 4m NY nice 1...

ha kitna miss kiya mene ... apna message box chek kar wha or b surprise tha ...

and wel come back

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: ShravniC
aroma dekh aaj neeti ne bhi comment kar dia aaj to update banta hai i ll be waiting 4 ur update...

wahi karne ja rahi hoo ... to wait ha ...

and tu to naani hey esi wish poori karne mein ... lol ...

but really i'm so lucky having friends like u ...

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Update pls...

I wil do strike until u giv d updt.

Im giving u lamba wala comments n u r not updting..

Update..

Tell me wen u wil updt I wil not irritate you.

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

firstly wel come back neeti ...poopy and meow ... tum logo ko to main itna hi bol sakti hoo kya baat kya baat kya baat ... or baki b jo isme shamil the ...

chalo update start karti hoo warna tum log muje maar daloge...

boys in reharsal hall . but wait rey or swayam is not there ...

bharat : abe bohat tension ho rahi hey ...

amar : alle tu english ka wold bola ..

viky : are ha ...

bharat : abe jha scoh scoh k halat khrab ho rahi hey ... ki wo jo dancer a rahi hey uske samne koi nahi tikta ... or tum log ...

nilesh : bharat tu thik bol rha hey mane bi suna hey she is head dancer of new york academy koi to baat hogi usme ...par j rey or swayam kha hey ...

viky : simple swayam sharon k pishe pishe hoga or doosri tarfa taani rey k pishe pishe ...(abi hasi a rahi hey ... thori der baad dekhna kya hota hey lol )

scene shift ...( kha khud dekh lo guys ) ...

taani :apne meri kal call kyu cut ki..

rey : please taani ab kal ki baat le k mat baith jaana ...

taani : u know what rey i'm u'r gf but u still love her ...

rey : no i don't love her ...

taani : yes u love her ...

rey : mene bola nahi ...(rey in anger now so stay away guys ...lol)

taani : nahi bolne se kya hota hey ... khud se baag rahe ho aap ...

rey : ha ...ha...i love her ..bohat pyaar karta hu main ...last s year se khud se baag hi to rha hoo ...uski jado se .bhol jana chata hoo use ...par is dil ka kya kru ...manne ko tyaar hi nahi hey ...ki wo mujse pyaar nahi karti ...sirf ek bar milna chahta hoo us se ...or pooshna chahta hoo ki kya kami hey mere pyaar main ... ( tear roll down from cheeks )

taani : selftalk * muje pta tha u love her or apke dil mein or kisi k like koi jgha nahi hey ... i prey to god ki wo apko apka pyaar milwa de ...( guys dekho mene taani ko -ve nahi bnaya )

( taani leave rey as she know rey need some time for himself )...

now canteen ...

sharon : guys vo baat je hey ki selection aaj hi hogi ...

vish : dude selection to kal honi thi sw : ha vish but kuj reason ki wjha se aj ho rahi hey ...

neha : par when ...

sh : ek hour k baad ...

simmi : but sharon itni jaldi ...

sh : i know but we have to ,koi option nahi hey ...

renni : u'r right sharon .

sh : but rey kha hey ...

tanni enter in canteen ...rey kuj kaam kar rahe hey so ate hi hoge ...(dekha boya ki to bolti band ho gyi ... bechare kuj bol hi nahi pa rahe ...)

sw : r u ok guys ...

boys : y ..y...y...yes ...

( every one leave tyaari b to karni hey na )

kriya and aroma enter in the college ...

kriya ki dress hope u like ...

kriya : aroma tum mere saath RDX k office chalo gi ja ...

aroma : u go ...main wait karti hoo ...

kriya : muje pta tha ...ok but koi panga mat karna ...

aroma : sure ...(evil smile )

(u know na main kitna bolti hoo ...or jha koi panga na ho esa ho skta hey kya ...poppy tuje to pta hey ... or neet , meow ko b lol )

while walking in the college aroma bump into some one ...

guy : age kya kam tension hey ...upar se gira diya ...

aroma : i'm sorry ...

guy : what sorry ...

aroma : bakra mil gya ...*self talk ok *

aroma : tumhara naam kya hey ... are btao na ,... shrma kyu rhe ho ab bol b do ...

viky : (kesi larki hey ) ...v...v...viky ...

aroma : v..v...viky ja sirf .viky ...

viky .: viky ...

aroma : ab kya tension hey wo b bta hi do ... are btao na ...

viky : a...ab...i'm a dancer so ...

aroma : ( shock lag gya )...dancer tum ...dance kar k dikhao ...

viky : pagal hey kya ...diwaani kha ho muje bcha li please ...( viky age age . aroma pishe pishe ... ) ...

in RDX office ...

rdx : hello kriya ...

k : hello sir ...

RDX .: gud to see u but mene un logo ko j nahi btaya ki selection aap kar rahi hoo ...

k : its ok sir ... ek din face to karna hey un ko ...to aaj hi sahi ...

RDX : ja . u r right ... best of luck ...

k ": thank u sir ...

scene shift ( bahi behan ka time hey ab )..

taani : swayam muje kuj baat karni hey rey k baare mein ...

sw : kya hua rey ko ...

taani : rey thik hey ,.. but he still love kriya ...

sw : how u know ...

ta. : rey ne khud accept kiya ... i want ki wo log phir se mil jaye ...

sw : main b wahi chahta hoo ...

(guys next post conti ...)

promo and kriyaansh poem page 34

chapter 5 page 43 .

Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

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aroma D3 dekhne ke baad unres kardungi

nd me 1st 1 to comment

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Fabulous updt.

Rey indirectly accepted dat he loved kriya still.

Love Taani for dis.

She really bugged rey n made him accept d fact.

Liked all d scenes.

They r really gud.

Dis tym Imnt late to comment.

Poppy u stole d first comment.

N Aroma next updt very big one n pls updt tmrw na.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

ok guys ...so agey suru karte hey ...

sw: main isi liya kriya ko find kar rha hoo ...taki kriyaans ko milwa sku ...

taani : kriyaansh ...

sw : ha rey or kriyaa ...

taani : inke naam bi ek doosre se alag nahi ho sakte ...

shene shift ...

neha passing through corridor ...whil she saw kriya ...

neha : kriya jha j kese ho sakta hey ...

( but next time she was not there ...)

main lagta hey tension ki wjha se mad hoing ...

( kriya aroma ko find kar rahi hey guys don't be confused )...

rinni in locker room standing front of mirror .

she saw kriya outside ...but jab tak rinni bahar ayi she was not there ...

rinni : vo kriya hi thi ... but vo jha kese ho sakti hey ... khi kriya ka bhoot to nai ...( omg isne to kriya ko bhoot bna diya ...poppy tumse sikha bhoot ...)

other hand vish ko kriya fire exit k bahar dikhayi di or simmi ko canteen mein ...(lamba nahi khicha ok )

charo girls different direction se bhagti hui a rahi hey or ek doosre main takrati hey ...

and scream : kriyaaa...

neha : u also dekha kriya ko ...

vish : dude tum b ...

simmi : mene b ...

rinni : guys kriya ka bhoot to nahi hey na ...( j to kriya ko bhoot bna k he mane gi ...)

neha : rinni j tum kese talking ...

simmi : guys hame is bare main swayam or sharon se baat karni chahiye ...

vish : u'r right ...

other hand ...

taani : to ab hame kuj karna hoga ...

sw : u'r right ... ab hum poori karege is prem khani ko ...( aye haye main mar jawa ...)

voice : how dare u ...swayam and taani o no ... (ops how filmy na . ab j kon tapka ...keep thinking ... tab tak main b scohti hoo kon hey j ...)

precap : boys or girls main khicha taani ...face too face ho ge sab ... u know ... kya hoga result ... keep thinking )...

ok j thi update lambi wali or jesi b hey chahe ghatiya hi ho comment please ...and neeti wel come back again bohat miss kiya mene ... megic thanks u ... poppy , meow ... or wo b jo kal jha p ek doosre k tanng khich rahe the ... )

thanks for all comment ...

kriya ki dress