Shattered Dreams - Thread 2 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Shruti21

super late to comment i guess...😛

nice part...

but i din got the first few lines...related to khushi...😕

Promises. People make them quickly without thinking of what they are actually signing up for or what would be the repercussions. It's only later that they realize the burden of the spoken word, the enormous commitment which comes uninvited when they give their word. But then it's always sadly a little too late.

Little do they know that words given in haste always come back to haunt us. While the intention is noble in most of the cases, promises always extract a heavy price from the person who has made the promise. In the end all that is left are shattered lives, shattered dreams.

beautiful lines...i jus loved it...❤️

shyam...😡

what a jerk he is...god i hate him so much...

sachi koi itna bura kaise ho sakta...😔

do reveal the past soon...

but after this ever depressing story end...

do remember u have to write how both lived happily ever after together,...please...😉

few ques still to be answered...long way to go i guess...

Originally posted by: ragaya

too little for the long gap since the last update, Anu! Now, don't tell me there is any truth in the backstory of Shyam. From the hint you gave (glint in his eyes when Khushi promised she would do anything for him), I suppose it is all false and I hope it stays that way. I can't really stand Arnav being accused of something so brutal. He is ruthless, yes, but characterless? No, can't accept that.

Coming back to the point, dearie, please update more frequently and move the story forward. Past two updates, the story has been going slower than I expected

amazing ff dear...

loved the concept...