FF: When Truth Prevails [Chp 46, Pg 121] 2/06

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

@DropofDew: Nyc story n interesting chapters.😊

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

This such a nice story,found it and was glued to it! an emotional story written very nicely. You have done a great job in portraying the emotions, can feel everything along with the characters... Just mind blowing writing, the one before the last update was full of all the things, grief,emptiness, happiness,acceptance all these were conveyed very nicely. And gotta say that update bought tears to my eyes as well it was that fantastic! From now on il be checking for an update of this story, continue soon, waiting to see how they are going to over come the new hurdle Shayam has thrown at them...

P.S I'm really fond of kids so arshiya was an added point for me😊

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR
Oh MY...! u r amazing! tht Ur skills to present the tornado of emotions between the couple were just awesome...especially with the newly-found changes in their lives.. Loved it too much as to how have put forward the conflicts these two are facing as to what could be right? As if to accept the new hopes that had begun to linger too close to them.
But..Urrgghhh...the evil man is already back...to break away those thin threads that had just begun to embrace each other's presence again...to have hopes of being one again. URRGGHHH! i hate shyam too much. I really feel so bad for this couple...of how they been denied all that they deserved always! But...then faith is all tht stands to make it correct, and i have that kinda faith in u...
I just hope this time u r gonna just make Shyam's evil deeds bring them closer...to secure the threads back as one. Anyways...i know whatever u have planned will be amazing...so just don't burden urself with my visions and go ahead...with what u feel should be happening!
I also liked how have put Anjali on the guilt tracks too and her willingness to repair all that she damaged!
Will be waiting for next update desperately.
keep up with ur adept style of pulling the emotions in the chapters.
thanx for PM! :)

Thank you so so much for this absolutely amazing comment 😳. It has actually rendered me speechless. Thank you!

I love your description and thank you for the faith 😊 and yes this track will bring them closer and not break them apart.

I know that in this story Anjali actually does not play the same sort of blind character that existed in the show. But I always imagined Anjali, as Arnav's sister to be equally as selfless as he is towards her. And I guess that's where her guilt stems from, she knows that her brother gave up his happiness for her and that in itself is enough for her to understand.

Thank you so much once again! xx

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: indcath101
firstly last chap was an epic.. i dn't knw why the it didn't get post.
they had finally come to a middle decision.. she had agreed to stay n he confessed..
although in anger still neva mind..
there was hope..

And nw...they r finaaly talking, hope is springing, they want to accept n they have taken their first steps.. but she is arrested...
i hate SHYAM..
he's so evil..
using her daughter's kidnapping to arrest her..
atleast let them be together for some tym..

pl bring them back together..

Aw that's alright 😊... Thank you for commenting for both of them! 😃

It's Arnav, where there is Arnav, there will be anger 😆.

Shyam is just a pathetic vengeful man but I'm sure some good can come out of this 😉 x

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan
Hey!

Khushi is continuing to go through a ray of emotions which is perfectly understandable.

She's been through a hell of a lot and she's still here. Where all the pain, hurt, distrust started.

She's one brave woman to come back.

Khushi's a great mother from what I can tell right about now. She's not been with her daughter too long but for the time that she has, she seems like a natural. Most of the times when she hesitates ... I think its just a first time thing for new moms.

I'm glad that Khushi is thinking from various angles. 😊

As for Arnav, well I don't really want to say much about him ... apart from the fact that whe he stood up for Khushi just for a second then near the end, it felt like the real ASR was back. The possessive man, husband, protector, lover. The man that protect his family no matter what and Khushi IS apart of it.

I truely hope nothing bad happens to Khushi. Please Please Please. 😭

Aah I love your thoughts about Khushi! You've put it so well! This is exactly what I wanted to get across about her character.

No matter how strong or hurt she is, there will always be this selfless forgiving side to her. And although in one part of this story she made an irrational decision, that has changed and with her growth as a person her decisions are more rational, she likes to think through things properly before taking any steps.

I'm so glad that the fact she was only holding back because she's just only getting to know Arshia came through well. I wanted to include the sort of realistic side to it all. Of course they won't have the same bond that there is between Arshia and Arnav straight away :).

Wait and see for Arnav... I'm sure the real ASR will make a proper re-entry in the next chapter. With Arnav in him for Khushi of course 😉 x

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: swatim318
😡 I HATE YOU HATE YOU HATE YOU... When will you stop doing this????

AGAIN A CLIFFHANGER...😡

That too at such a crucial point...🤢..

ok now enough of bashing...

but you know how much I love You right..😳.. and not to forget your writing...

awesomest update...

loved to see that some confusion has been eased now...

oh how wonderful the description was... the mother daughter comparison...loved it...

but why is khushi so angry on anjali too.. it wasnt directly her fault i guess or was it??😕

Oh God what is this Arrest for Kidnapping track now??😕.. but I know our dearest Arnie will take care of his wifey dear...😊

And this time.. PLEASE dont take so long to update... my heart is beating too fast to handle..😉

Thanks For PM...

God Bless!!!!

MWahaha! 😆... Kidding :P... I don't know :(. I just get so drawn to leaving you guys hanging 😛.

I love you too! 🤗 😳 So I will take this bashing and give you more cliff hangers 😆... No actually I will try... TRY for a non-cliff-hanger chapter next time 😛.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the comparison 😃.

Well I dunno this is a trait of mine that I've put into Khushi :P. I like to blame people when things go wrong and the fact that Khushi didn't sort of irked me a bit 😆. So that is the reason she dislikes Anjali, she doesn't know the whole truth so it'll be like that till she does 😉.

Aah it's to resurrect the good old ASR! 😉

I'm on it! 😆

Take care! xx

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: casker
loved the update.
Is it Arnav who filed that case against Kushi long back?

Thank you! :D

No the case was filed against Shyam when he kidnapped Arshia, so that led to him being arrested and put in jail. But now Shyam wants his sentence reduced by telling the court that Khushi was involved in the kidnapping too. He's just playing dirty basically. xx

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: zeedia
Read this ff in one go...
OMG..this ff made me laugh,it made me cry,it made me angry and what not..
Gosh I just loved it completely...
U've written this brilliantly girl...the journey of arnav n khushi uptil now was like a roller coaster ride..Woah I just can't express my feelings about this story..I m loving it.
Plz do pm me when u update next.

Oh wow 😳... Thank you so much! I'm left feeling so humbled at your comment! I'm glad you liked it! And of course I'll pm you! Thank you so much! x

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: srat

Thank you for the blog link. You writing is amazing, you certainly captured my interest from Chapter one. So many emotions from both Khushi and Arnav were portrayed superbly. I love the Scottish settings. The journey back into how they got married and then moving forward in time was done nicely, the mini update really helped. Both have suffered so much, when all they ever wanted was to be with each other. Arisha deserves both her parents and I am glad Khushi has agreed to stay and Arnav has said the words she longed to hear... Hope Anjali has not melted again upon hearing Shyam's voice.. he is more despicable in your FF...

Thank you so much! Your words really mean a lot to me. I love that you love the Scottish settings! 😃

That was actually a difficult part of this fic, although I wanted a prequel in between I sort of struggled to find where to stop and where to take it back to the future so I'm glad that it seems to have worked 😳.

Things are slowly working out and this little plot twist will bring that more into light 😉. Nah Anjali is a better sister in this, she's not foolish 😉. Thank you once again! x