FF: When Truth Prevails [Chp 46, Pg 121] 2/06

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: -Suchi.P
Girl you made me cry! that was such a great update! Both want their daughter's and each other's happiness! That was soo beautiful!!
Them wanting each other but not being able to go do that was too good! And the last part, TOO GOOOD!!! The way she put stone on heart and told him to marry someone else, his confession, her acceptance! Man, I LOVE YOU and your writing!! 👏🤗

Shyam, dude just go die!! That's all i have for you!!🤬
BTW what does he want now, revenge or money! And please tell me that since ArShi are together now, his appeal would no more work and he will be rotting in jail and someone else in gutter!!🤬

Thanks for the Beautiful and magnificent update!! 😊

Suchi x

Aww no Suchi... Again? :( I don't wanna make you cry so I'm gonna try extra hard to lower the emotional factor for the next update.

Aaah and I love you and your comments! 🤗 😳 Thank you so much hun!

Lol "just go die" hahaha! He wants both money and revenge 😉. Hmmm... as much as I want him rotting in jail let's wait and see what happens 😉 xx

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
I have just stared to reach the FF and just reached Chapter 18 - loved the FF!

And so far as I can make out, its poor Arnav who has got the rough end. Khushi chose to leave him because of her guilt - I think she owed him an explanation at the minimum. I don't know what happens going ahead but any anger that Arnav had towards her is justified. She was selfish in not giving him at least a reason, which I think she def owed him, he's actually been a sweatheart so far!

Loved their college build-up - it was beautifully written!

Thank you so much and I'm glad you like it 😃.

Reading this from the beginning for me was sort of an experience too ... I had to read it all over again to write a brief summary a while back and it brings right into perspective how things take a flip turn when he sees her on the terrace with Shyam :). At first it's Khushi and her guilt that ruins everything and then it's Arnav and his insecurities that ruins everything. It's like there are two halves to the first part of this story with each one being on the blame end at different parts. And now this is the part where they will both move on from the storms that they both conjured up to ruin things and bring them together for the sake of the little angel that they created in the process 😊.

When I started writing this FF I wasn't sure of where it was heading but I'm glad that you've gathered the story in the way I wanted it to be seen as so far.

Thank you xx

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: ipkknd_gbdfan
LONG update!! Loved it. :D

Can't wait to have Arnav and Khushi remarry.

But what was up with Roy? What did he gain by lying to the court?

Aha! Thank you! 😃

Roy is just desperate for money and when people are desperate they will sometimes succumb to the lowest of lows.

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: zafi
Superb update.⭐️
So much pain and suffering.😭😭
Both Arnav and KHushi are suffering.
SHyam is the culprit.😡😡
OMG why is shyam calling Anjali?😡😡😡😡
I hope Arhi find happiness with each other and their daughter soon.😊
Update soon. Can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😃

Thank you so much! :D

Why is Shyam calling Anjali? You'll see 😉

On it! :P xx

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: Saniii
Hey, I read the whole FF in one go and I really love it. You write so realistic and full of details, that I can feel what the characters feel. Please pm me and continue with updating :)

Omg thank you so much 😳 your comment really means a lot. x

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR
she got to know the truth...shyam kidnapped arshia...
urghh that shyam...m so pissed off at him..how can he ask roy to do all this...blame khushi for kidnapping her own daughter as a revenge against arnav...
is he outta jail or is khushi going to get arrested????
when arnav khushi part started...at some point i felt so angry with arnav...i mean he said all those words to her...he misunderstood her,...her asked her to leave and now HE was the one expecting khushi to come all happy and tell him that u r going to be DAD...seriously...
but the turn of events...khushi's point of view...arnav inhibition for not asking her to stay...all that made me choke on my tears...
and then finally everything felt so right with him finally wishing that she would stay...
and amazing update/...thanks for pm :)
and all the best for ur exam :)

Omg! I love you! Your comment looks freaking amazing! 🤗

Shyam is a dirty, cunning twat! Shyam is not out of jail yet but you may be onto something with Khushi *wink* *wink*

Aah thank you so much! I loved how you described your reactions to the Arshi parts. I just love this comment of yours! Thank you! xx

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: Love_SA
that was sooo beautiful!!!

i was choking..my heart was sinking..soo emotional, pure heartwarming..amazinggg...

u are a wonderfulll writer!!! blessed

i have tears in my eyes!!!

Aww thank you so much 😳 xx

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crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Just read all d updaates in a day...and i have to say this is a marvellous story. i was way too astonished at the number of turns this story had gone through. Really u have got a good hand at writing...keep up!👏

loved the story to it's core. Especially they way u have tried ur best to justify with levels of pain and hurt equal for both Arnav and Khushi in their respective courcses of life. I really appreciate how u have worked on not having just the Khushi to be on the suffering side always.

so i had dropped in a buddy request for u...as i had love to closely follow ur work.

would love to see an update as soon as u can post it...u have me at edges right now! 😉

and i had like to thank u with the pic below for such an amazing story!

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR
Just read all d updaates in a day...and i have to say this is a marvellous story. i was way too astonished at the number of turns this story had gone through. Really u have got a good hand at writing...keep up!👏
loved the story to it's core. Especially they way u have tried ur best to justify with levels of pain and hurt equal for both Arnav and Khushi in their respective courcses of life. I really appreciate how u have worked on not having just the Khushi to be on the suffering side always.
so i had dropped in a buddy request for u...as i had love to closely follow ur work.
would love to see an update as soon as u can post it...u have me at edges right now! 😉
and i had like to thank u with the pic below for such an amazing story!

Aw thank you so much 😳.

I'm so glad that you like the fact that both of them have been on the suffering end of things. I guess I wanted them both to be imperfect in that way, it's a cycle and not just Arnav constantly hurting Khushi.

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment! I have accepted your buddy request.

And *drools* I now have a handsome ASR pic on this page thank you! x