New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#3 link#4 pg140 - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Okay guys here is a teaser for the next part</font>


<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="7" color="#ff0000">TEASER</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4" color="#009933">Geet's face was pale her hands were trembling and she was waiting for an answer</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4" color="#009933">Maan turned around and his eyes were spitting fire He shouted on top of his voice</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#ff0099">Maan: </font>Tumhe samaj nahi aata ye kya hai?<font color="#0000ff">[Can't u understand what do I mean by this?]</font></font>


<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">So guys when do want an update?</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">love-Piya</font>


scary teasor. Is maan planning to get divorce 4m geet kya?
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the teaser don't tell me he gave her divorce papers
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh teaser is giving me heart attack... is maan again a dust danav and asking geet to leave 😭😭😭

Piya i am waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice teaser...
Waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
updates soon piya eagrely waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg i am scared of this teaser
plz di update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh man terrible teaser..
really scary...
plzz update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update and again I am requesting you'll to be with the story the next few updates would be really emotional but I ensure u to give a memorable Maaneet fiction if u continue to support me and allow me to write the story as I have worked out in my mind
love-Piya
PART 22

Her crazy heart was thinking that the entire universe was joining in her happiness but poor soul she was totally unaware that this shower of rain was participating in her grief as they knew it was just a matter of seconds before she would face the harshest reality of her life'and her aspirations would be crushed in such a way that she will never ever think of dreaming'

FROM TODAY SHE WOULD PREFER LIVING A NIGHTMARE RATHER THAN WEAVING A DREAM

There was a knock on the door and Geet knew Maan was back. She opened the door and immediately hugged him with enormous love

Geet: Maan kaha chale gaye the aap maine aapko kitna miss kiya [Maan where were u I missed u so much]

She hit him playfully on his chest

Geet: Aisa bhi koi karta hai kya [Does anyone behave like this?]

Maan pushed her with some force and without looking at her face he uttered

Maan: Andar chalo Geet mujhe tumhe kuch dhikana hai [Let's go inside Geet I need to show u something]

He entered the house without waiting for Geet. Geet sensed a change in his behaviour but she cut off the thought immediately as she felt he must be tired after arranging a big surprise for her

The intensity of the rain increased as it was trying to warn her about the tragic moment that she is going to face;;; the nature wanted Geet to come back to reality before all her dreams come crushing down but poor soul she was totally blind in Maan's love and hence had to pay a heavy price for this blind trust

She went inside happily

Geet: Maan kaha hai mera surprise? [Maan where is my surprise?]

Maan showed her a box

Geet: Ohho toh Mr. Khurana ne Mrs. Khurana k liye koi special gift khareeda hai waise Maan aapki Geet ne bhi aapke liye kuch special socha hai [Ohho so Mr. Khurana has planned something special for Mrs. Khurana by the way Maan ur Geet has also arranged a special surprise for u]

She was just about to show him the sindoor but then she stopped herself

Geet: Nahi itne jaldi nahi pehle aap mujhe mera gift doge aur phir main aapko chaliye dijiye mujhe mera gift [No not so soon first u give me my gift then u will get ur gift]

Maan handed the box to Geet

Geet: I am sure ye duniya ka sabse best gift hoga kyunki iss gift par sirf mera haq hai haina? [I am sure this would be the most priceless gift of this world as this gift belongs only to me right?]

Maan: Sahi kaha tumne Geet iss cheez par sirf tumhara haq hai [U r right Geet this thing belongs only to u]

Geet opened the box and was surprised to see a file in it

There was a lightening in the sky which was requesting her not to open the file as all her innocent dreams would get burned in the harsh and ruthless fire of that this stone hearted man had ignited

But right now all her senses were paralysed as she was totally engrossed in her Maan's dreams

She opened the file and started reading the documents

All of a sudden Geet's face was pale; her hands were trembling; it seemed she was no longer alive

Her heart was not ready to believe what her eyes were showing her as usual she decided to hear her heart's voice and with great difficulty she managed to speak

Geet: Maan ye kya hai? Aap mazak kar rahe ho na? [Maan what is this? U r joking right?]

She was waiting for an answer as soon as Maan heard her question he goes back to his thoughts to find an answer

FLASHBACK

Maan received a message on his mobile after few moments of hesitation he entered his car and started driving towards his destination

He parked his car in front of a huge Mansion. It was Rathore Villa yes the house of Naintara

The servant opened the door for him and as soon as Maan entered the house Naintara welcomed him by giving him a tight hug

Naintara: Oh Maan humne aapko kitna miss kiya ye toh bus humara dil hi jaanta hai k aapse dur rehkar humne ye lamhe kaise guzare [Oh Maan I missed u so much; only my heart knows how difficult it was for me to live every second without you]

Maan: Tara humare beech ka ye rishta ab kaayam nahi reh saktha mujhe maaf kar doh par ab main tumhe apni zindagi mein wo jagah nahi de saktha jiska vaada maine tumse kiya tha [I am sorry Tara but now this relationship cannot go ahead as I can't give u the place that I had promised to give u in my life]

Naintara: Aap kehna kya chahthe hai Maan? [What r u trying to tell Maan?]

Maan: Tara tum shayad jaanti nahi jab tum bahar gayi thi tab itefaq se meri aur Geet ki shadi ho gayi aur ab hum kanunan pati patni hai aur Geet ko dil se patni maan chukka hoon aur uska haq main kisi ko nahi de saktha [Tara u r not aware when u had gone abroad me and Geet got accidently married and now she is my wife legally and I have accepted her as my wife from my heart and I can't give her place to anyone else]

Naintara: Hume jiska darr tha wahi hogaya aakir phasa hi liya Geet ne aapko apne jhoothe pyar k daldal mein [So my fear turned out to be right as Geet was successful in trapping u in the folds of her fake love]

Maan: Ye kya bakwaas kar rahi ho Geet mujhse sachha pyar karti hai [What nonsense is this Geet loves me unconditionally]

Naintara: Aur humara kya Maan humara pyar aapko nazar nahi aata? [And what about me Maan can't u see my love?]

Maan: Tara pls samajne ki koshish karo [Tara pls try and understand]

Naintara: Haan sahi kaha aapne hum naasamaj hai issliye jab sabne humse kaha k aapke Maan badal chuke hai unhone Geet ko national TV par propose kiya hai aur wo aapko dhoka de rahe hai tab humne inn saari baato ko jhutlakar aappar bharosa kiya [Yes u r right I am a fool as I did not pay heeds when everyone was trying to convince me that u have changed and u have betrayed me for Geet;I was wrong since I ignored all these things and kept faith in your blind love]

Naintara: Hume vishwas tha k aap jo kar rahe hai wo apne career aur apne image ko barkaraar rakhne k liye kar rahe hai humara dil jaanta tha k ye sab ek publicity stunt hai aap kabhi bhi hume dhoka nahi de sakthe [I trusted u since I believed that whatever u were doing was for the sake of ur career and I was sure that this was a publicity stunt and u will never betray me]

Maan was shocked

Maan: Tum jaanti thi [U knew this?]

Naintara: Aapki rag rag se waakif hai hum Maan aapse beshuma mohabbat jo karte hai par afsoos humare sachhe mohabbat ki roshni Geet k dhoke k saamne haar gayi [I know u from top to bottom Maan as I love u unconditionally but alas the light of my true love failed in front of the dark love of Geet]

Maan: Tara Geet k khilaf kuch mat bolo aur waise bhi tum kehna kya chahthi ho? [Tara don't u dare to utter any wrong word about Geet and what r u trying to say exactly?]

Naintara: Abhi tak nahi samjhe Maan hum samjhate hai ek baat bataiye agar Geet aapse vaakaiye mein pyar karti toh itne dino tak wo aapse dur kyun rahi aapse milne kyun nahi aayi? [Didn't get what I am trying to say? Answer one question Maan if Geet's love was true why did she stay away from u for such a long time she didn't even try to meet u once]

Maan: Wo' [Actually]

Naintara: Hum batate hai Maan kyunki tab usse aapki zarurat nahi thi hum maante hai k Geet khud mein ek top level ki actress hai par industry mein actresses ki shelf life kum hothi hai aur kab kaunsi actress k career ka d end ho jaaye koi bol nahi saktha [I will tell u Maan she did not require ur support at that time I agree that Geet is a top level actress but the shelf life of actresses in this industry is very less u never know when will d career of an actress reach its dead end]

Naintara: Jab Geet ki aur aapki shadi ho gayi uske haath toh jaise sone dene wali murgi lag gayi uske shaatir dimag mein ye baat bait gayi k agar kisi tarah wo aapko apne pyar k jaal mein phaas le toh usse aage chalkar kaam mile ya na mile uski usse koi tension nahi rahegi kyunki aap hona uski har farmaish ko pura karne k liye [When both of u got married Geet's hand got hold of a hen which was giving her golden eggs her evil mind immediately got an idea that if she traps u successfully in her so called love trap then even if her career ends u will always be there to fulfill her demands]

Maan was now thinking seriously.

Naintara knew that Maan was so selfish and so self centered that it would be very easy to convince him; she was sure that his feelings for Geet were still shaky she just had to bring back the ruthless and foolish Maan from his personality

Naintara: Par aap ye sab kyun sochenge? Maan jab aap koi nahi the jab aapki ek hi movie hit ho gayi thi tab hum the jinhone aapke pyar ko accept kiya kya zarurat thi hume Maan hum toh Bollywood queen haina hum toh aasani se thokar maar sakthe the aapki mohabbat ko par humne aisa nahi kiya [But why would u think in this direction? Maan when u were not an established actor and only one film of urs was a hit I was the one who accepted ur love. If I wished I could have easily rejected ur proposal as I am the queen of Bollywood but I didn't do so]

Naintara: Jaante hai kyun kyunki hum aapse sachhi mohabbat karte the agar Geet aapse sach mein pyar karti toh usne apne pyar ka izhaar kyun nahi kiya jab aap uske saath uss chothe se flat mein rehthe the jaawab dijiye Maan [I accepted ur love because my feelings r sincere but if Geet loved u for real then why didn't she confessed her feelings when both of u were sharing the same flat]

Maan had no answers and now he was totally under the evil spell of Naintara

Naintara: chodiya Maan hume aapse koi shikwa nahi aap khush rahiye ab aapki Tara aapki zindagi se dur chali jayegi aap Geet se saath khush rahiye [Leave it Maan I have no issues with u be happy with Geet I will go away from your life forever]

Maan: Nahi Tara mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai tum sahi kehti ho uss Geet ka pyar ek chalawa hai aur mein uss mein ab phasne nahi wala main abhi jaakar usse uski asli aukaad dhikatha hoon [No Tara u r right Geet's love is a trap and I am not going to believe her any longer its time now to show Geet her real place]

He hugged Naintara and asked for forgiveness

Naintara: (thinking) Bewakoof glycerine wale aasu dekhkar pigal gaya aur Geet k asli ehsaas ki koi kadar nahi hai iss gadhe ko khair hume kya karna hum toh issi baat se khush hai k Maan aaj bhi humare haath ki katputli hai [Stupid guy he melted by these fake tears that I got by applying glycerine in true sense he is a donkey as he has no value for the genuine feelings of Geet but what do I have to do with this I am happy that Maan is still a puppet of my hands]

She hugged him back and ensured him that she has forgiven him

FLASHBACK ENDS

Geet was still waiting for a reply

Geet: Maan boliye na aapka mazaak meri jaan na lele [Maan pls answer me your joke can kill me anytime]

Maan turned around and his eyes were spitting fire. He shouted on top of his voice

Maan: Tumhe samaj nahi aata ye kya hai? [Don't u understand what do I mean by this?]

Geet was scared after seeing this angry side of Maan she took few steps behind

Maan took the file from Geet's hand and removed the documents from it and threw the papers on her face

Maan: Mujhe tumse chutkara chahiye I want divorce dammit [I want u to go away from my life forever I want divorce dammit]

The sindoor slipped from her hand as her entire world collapsed in a matter of seconds.. it seemed that she had constructed a house from a pile of cards and today a gust of wind was enough to destroy the existence of her house...

PRECAP: Maan's accusations😡😡😡 and Geet's decision😲

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭NICE UPDATE😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago


hello ..😊





Beautiful Scrap update...😃







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