New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#3 link#4 pg140 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I am extremely happy with the response that this FF is getting 😃 We crossed the 170 mark in the last update as I got 176 likes yesterday thanks a ton guys I expect to cross these many likes only in MH but you'll made my day😳 Thanks once again and yes from next update a series of TWISTS will begin infact every update would be a new Twist so be prepared😉😲
I dedicate this update to mu small sis Nilima [nilu710] and my VM queen Roopali
love-Piya
PART 20

Slowly the pain got converted into bliss and pleasure. She parted her lips and Maan immediately captured her petals giving rise to a soul searing kiss

He continued to rock her in a rhythmic tune healing all her pains all her loneliness by making her a part of not only his body but also his soul

This was the happiest moment of Geet's life God had blessed her with his godliness by converting every dream of hers into an unforgettable reality

They entered their dreamland slowly; their bodies were glued to each other and after a very long time both of them experienced their most peaceful and blissful night of their life

Next Day

Maan was the first one to step out of his beautiful dream but as soon as he opened his eyes he realized that the reality was more beautiful and magical than his dream

The most innocent and pure beauty was lying securely in his arms' there was no barrier between them ' she had embraced him in the magical folds of his love and he was holding her securely in his possessive and passionate touch

She was always beautiful but today there was an unmatchable glow on her face'it was the glow of his love no'this was not the truth it was the glow of their love yes this was the complete truth

Some of her curls were unevenly curtained around her lips Maan could not bear this sight as he felt that only he had the authority to claim her lips and her complete self

Yes she belonged to him'a small smile made way to his face as he remembered those 3 magical words that Geet had confessed ' She loves him oh he was unable to express his feelings when Geet had uttered those simple yet heart touching words

He wanted to tell her so many things but he could not voice his feelings

He started removing the locks from her lips possessively and was busy admiring the sleeping beauty

She shivered as soon as Maan's little finger touched her lower lip Maan felt extremely proud and special as he sensed that Geet recognizes his touch even in her sleep

He started caressing her rosy cheeks lovingly as he remembered the events of last night 'she had written her whole existence in his name by submitting herself completely in every true sense yesterday night'

He never knew that he held such a significant place in someone's life but yesterday Geet had made him realize that he was the luckiest man on his earth

Yes he was lucky as he had Geet with him' a girl who possessed a heart of gold 'and he was the heartbeat of this golden heart

He started placing gentle and loving kisses on her face

Geet was sleeping but it seemed she was still in the captivating trance of his love she parted her lips automatically and moaned his name

Geet: oh Maan'

Maan lost his heart completely as he heard his name from his angel's mouth.

He brushed his lips with her delicate and soft rosy petals' Geet's lips automatically got converted into a shy smile

Without opening her eyes she allowed her arm to take Maan in its loving folds and gave him the permission to make her morning more blissful by writing his name on her lips

Maan took her lips within his territory slowly and started claiming and tasting every inch of her petals' more than passion this kiss could be explained as a loving one

He was soothing her and making her realize that she is special Geet was allowing him to do whatever he felt like doing

Maan moved his tongue in the partition of her lips and seeked permission to enter and drink the sweet nector of her mouth

Geet gave him the permission and this marked the start of a journey which communicated the happiness of Maan's heart to Geet's soul and Geet's unconditional love to Maan's soul

Slowly their kiss became a beautiful blend of desire, love and passion. Their lips were now glued to each other and they were crazily sucking and licking each other's secrets possessively

They ended their kiss only when both of them were out of breath completely.

Geet was just about to open her eyes to see the king of her heart when Maan stopped her by placing loving kisses on her magical eyes

Maan: Geet abhi nahi tum thoda aaram karo kal raat tum kaafi thak chuki thi kuch der rest karlo [Geet take rest for sometime as u were really tired last night]

Her cheeks automatically turned into a crimson red shade

Maan bit her cheeks gently which made Geet to gasp in a sweet pain

Maan: Geet main tumhare liye kuch special karna chahtha hoon aur uske liye mujhe kuch taiyaariyaan karni hogi issliye main kuch der k liye tumse dur jaa raha hoon aur jab main lautu tab tak tum fresh hokar apne Maan k special gift ka intezaar karna par haan usse pehle kuch rest karlo mere liye apne Maan k liye [Geet I want to do something special for u and for making those arrangements I need to go away from u for sometime by the time I return back I want my Geet to be fresh and I want to see a happiness in your eyes when u see my gift but before that take proper rest for me for your Maan]

Maan shifted the spread slightly and exposed her nip***s and bit both her tips aggressively and uttered huskily

Maan: Apne Maan k gift ka intezaar karna Geet [Wait for the gift of your Maan Geet]

Geet clutched the sheet in pleasure as Maan once again marked her rosy hard tips with his passion

He caressed her beautiful face lovingly and placed a quick peck on her lips

Maan: Mera intezaar karna Geet main jald hi wapis aayunga [Do wait for me Geet I will be back soon]

He pecked her lips once again and left from there

Geet followed his instructions and slept peacefully for sometime

She woke after an hour and her eyes were welcomed by a beautiful sight Maan had decorated the entire room with red roses

There was a note that was placed on the table. Geet wrapped herself with the spread and walked towards the table and started reading the note

Maan had once again requested her to give him the permission to be away from her for few hours as he wanted to give her a special gift as a surprise

Geet kissed the note and went to take a shower but again she was surprised as Maan had arranged a rose bath for her 'all of a sudden she felt so special it seemed that God was writing the most beautiful memories of her life

She thanked God for his blessings and went ahead to take a shower

Meanwhile,

Maan was busy with his preparations; he had almost completed the arrangements when he got a message on his mobile

He read the message and after few moments of hesitation he took a decision and entered his car and started driving to his destination

Here Geet was all ready and was waiting for Maan but she did not apply the sindoor on her maang as today this was her gift to Maan she wanted him to know that he is the only one that her heart desires and she is incomplete without him

Today she will ask him to make her complete by requesting him to apply the sindoor in her maang

She was waiting for his arrival desperately as she was sure that from today the most memorable and divine love story is going to start 'but she had forgotten THAT AFTER EVERY BEAUTIFUL MORNING THERE IS A HORRIFIC NIGHT'

PRECAP: Beginning of twist 😲

So guys as I had promised if the response is good u will get an update of this FF on a daily basis. I hope to get a good response because I am really excited in penning down the series of twists that I am gonna include in this FF. So if u want a quick update keep on encouraging me with ur comments and likes I promise I won't disappoint u

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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EDITED!

OMG...OMG...OMG...

What a beautiful morninggg...

1st- my favarote ff update reading 1st thing in the morning
2st- my post 2nd on Piya Di's ff
3rd -last but not least but most imporatnt... This part is delicated to meee... omggg m on cloud 99999999999...

THANKS ALOT DIII
u made my dayyy

okay coming back to update...

what a beautiful morning start for maneet... geet felt blessed but poor her doesnt know storm coming up...
i m glad that maan didn't regret the night yet... i know he will later.. but i hope he wont...
i knew it, di.. i just knew it.. when maan said "i'll come geet, wait for me" not once but numerice times... i just knew.. something is gonn come up n he will not come backkk... poor geet will b left behind...
m just sure that NT is backkk!
i hope maan wont leave geet in that nt's insistence...

so series of Twists starts from next part... m so waiting for that..
my only wish is that if nt is w/ maan then geet should have prem with her to support her,,,,

it was suppperrrbbb update as alwaysss no doubt on thattt

Thanksss alot di for wonderful update n most importantly delicating it to me... m feeling so special blesseddd

thanksss a tonnn di... :)

I LOVED THE UPDATE N I LOVE YOUUU, DI!! :D



Edited by nilu710 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...loved it n precap scary...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome
twist opppsss


bt for betterment for geet


muje lagta hai maan used geet

nd he will do some cheap thing


i think sooo






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Posted: 13 years ago
awww piya that's great part...
I just don't trust Maan...
he has been so selfish in the past...
if he betrays Geet...I don't want her to be a weakling...
waiting for the next part...
Edited by namita25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply brilliant awesome
as geet didnt apply her sindoor i have afeeling that something might be happening to maan
might be hsi accident or THE entry of NT and she woudl start t create problem
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmmm yar
suprbb
lvd d vm...😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomm vm omg more twist...plz don't seperate our maaneet waiting 4 update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
is nt back?????????
gggrrrhhh...
thanks 4 pm
cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
is it naintara again i think

awesome update

thanks

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