Reminiscences - A SwaRon FF - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nishyyy*hugs*
Kaisi hai re??I'm soo soorryyy for being so late.look kaan pakar k sorry
OMG u hv already started a new FF.but wait Granparents??like seriously tumhre dimaagh mein unique idea kahan se atay hai??:P
Anyhow loving this new concept.at first when I started reading this FF I thought u have changed the characters names.but when the coolest dadaji wakes up nd asked sharon kya hua??I was hell shocked k dadi is Sharon!!
Thanx for the pm nishy wishy. I will try to be abit active.do continue soon.Love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part, it was nice to see SwaRon getting along..!

Thanks for the pm
update asap!

btw Did you get in IIT?
and are you done with all other exams?
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG. I finally read your FF RAMESHHH. 😆
Its awesome. SwaRon as grandparents how cute is that? 😳
Loved it to bits. PM please. And waiting for the prom night.
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW i loved ur description of SHARON 😲

So beautiful she must be looking ! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 5


Sharon and Swayam sat with their friends but they couldn't take their eyes off each other.. Swayam had to remind himself that they were here as friends.. The music was getting really addictive and Sharon's feet were begging her to dance..

Sh: Do you mind if we dance?

Sw: Should I be asking that?

Sh: Mujhe laga ki tum uss Gauri ke kutte ko poochogi.. I didn't wanna lose you to a dog! I mean I cant believe she brought her DOG To PROM!!

Sw: Not a bad idea.. Shall I go and ask?

Sh: Maar padegi tujhe.. Ab Chalo!

She literally pulled him out of his chair and into the dance floor.. The song had just changed into a slow romantic number.. It was Sharon's new favourite.. Swayam took Sharon's Hand and Swayed her to the middle of the dance floor..



Faili thi siyaah raatein, aaya toh subah leke
Khama si zindagi mein jeene ki wajah leke
Khoya tha samundaron mein, tanha safeena mera
Saahilon pe aaya hai, tu jaane kis tarah haan leke

They both looked into each others eyes getting lost.. Sharon could feel electricity running through her body as Swayam pulled her closer by her hips..

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Ab kya hai kehna, humko hai rehna
Jannatein bhula ke teri baahon mein mein panah leke

Faili thi siyaah raatein, aaya toh subah leke
Khama si zindagi mein jeene ki wajah leke


Her Beauty had engulfed his every emotion.. He could look into her eyes and find a pool of emotions.. He saw Longing, Need, Shyness, Care, Love..


Meharbaani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tere nazara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Takdeer ka jaise koi ishaara mila

They swayed Slowly in the spot light.. Swayam could see himself falling for the Angel in his hands.. He lifted her up gently and twirled around and slowly put her down carefully as if she was a glass doll..

Roothi hui khwaishon mein thodi si sulah leke
Aaya tu khamoshiyon mein, baaton ki chirah leke
Khoya tha samundaron mein, tanha safeena mera
Saahilon pe aaya hai, tu jaane kis tarah haan leke

Sharon's mind was racing with thoughts about the guy holding her gently.. His eyes spoke to her on how he wanted to care her and protect her.. She felt complete there in his arms..


Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Ab kya hai kehna, humko hai rehna
Jannatein bhula ke teri baahon mein mein panah leke
Faili thi siyaah raatein, aaya toh subah leke
Khama si zindagi mein jeene ki wajah leke

He twirled her around a several times and slowly ended the twirls as he held her in his arms and looked into her eyes.. They were still as if nothing else in this world existed.. It was just Swayam and Sharon.. Just them!

Finally after the next song was half way through, they both came back to Earth and were pretty embarrassed.. But they kept on Swaying to the next couple of songs..

Sh: Swayam?

Sw: Hmmm..

Sh: Your amazing..

Sw: Thanks Shar.. Your no less amazing..

Sh: Hmmm..

Sw: Did I tell you that today is one of the best days.. ummm.. nights ever?

Sh: No..

Sw: You know now..

Sh: Thanks for coming with me..

Sw: Always there..

No official declaration was made but that was the last intense conversation they had that night.. The music had taken a more faster tone and they just danced around with their crazy bunch of friends, clicking photos and the rest of the night was History..

*End*

Ti: Awww!! So you guys never knew?

Sw: No.. We were just Good friends then..

Sh: That's what every couple who didn't realize their love called themselves but who knew!

Ti: Do you by chance have any picture of Prom?

Sh: Wait let me get the Entire Album so I don't have to get up everytime..

Ti: Yay!!

Dadi came back to the Bed with a Big Red Velvet album with a small SS in the Corner for Swayam and Sharon.. She opened the album and turned the pages without saying anything.. And finally smiled and Took out a picture..

It was a picture of her and Dada in the Prom under the red lanterns and a subtle white satin sheets.. Dada had his arms around her waist and her hands for on his shoulders.. They both were smiling..

Ti: Awwiieee!! You both look so adorable!!

Sw: I already told you I am always cute and Adorable!

Sh: Self-obssesed person!! -.-

Ti: Now Tell me what happened after that?

Sw: Oh well.. We were really good friends.. But I wanted to tell her..

Ti: Did you!?!?

Sw: Not really..

Ti: Temme na?!

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Hope you guys Liked it.. Im not very confident about this FF and would Love to know Any changes, Track ideas and Anything Cuz I really love this entire Idea of the FF So yea.. Please do Drop them in :D And sorry for taking this Long.. Had to create the player.. I failed miserably.. But u can still play the song :D

Edited by nish22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res

unres!

Yay! First one to comment!
I liked the cute romantic chapter..!
and the prom night and dance was beautiful..
The present bit at the end of their picture and Swayam saying I am always cute and adorable! was actually adorable! 😆
and Sharon's remark 'Self obsessed person' was quite catchy!
They still fight like toddlers..!
cute and sweet part..!

update asap!
Edited by surbhi_d3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res
*Unres*
Rabtaaa Awww Nish I Love Dat Song n Yeah It Ws AWESOME N PERFECT 👏 👏
N Thanks For Pm 😳
Edited by NikiBh8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWW.
Ramesh, i loved the update. So cute it was! How much i love SwaRon? 😳
Its awesome!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
this was short :(
cutie update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww:) such an amazing update nish . the way u described abt the dance and prom night , it was truly awesome !! the ss prom album must have been adorable :) waiting for the next part , update soon...

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