FF:Maybe Misson Impossible {Chap. 2 - Pg. 24}

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Prologue

The snow flakes softly float and separated from the dark red clouds. It was mid December as the slowly fell partly visible by the dim streetlight.

Footsteps, screaming, and shouting could be heard from a dark corner of the alley near the end of the street. The red bricks with graffiti were the only the light reflected and seem bright on.

"Let me go!" Khushi Gupta squirmed as she managed free from an unknown stranger's capture.
'Oh princess, where are you going? I can't set you free this easily." The man, chuckled as he made a dash after her.

"Just leave alone me please!" Khushi pleaded while she ran as she huddled together from the cold climate. Tears stained her pale white cheeks, as she sprinted. She sobbed, quietly as the person in a black leather jacket searched around for her.

A loud ring of a cellphone filled the quiet, scary air. "Have you got the girl?" Another voice sternly questioned. "She's here somewhere Sir, but I'll do anything to bring her back to you." The tall boy replied as he turned and tilted his head around in sight of Khushi. "Listen up, Deepak, I'll make your life miserable if someone finds out about this, the girl can do anything." The voice snapped.

"Don't worry, Jha. No one will ever get the wind that this is even happening in the city." Deepak remarked as he hung up his phone.

Her red; sore hands wrapping around her knees as she feel against the brick wall as she sank lower to the ground. It was dark enough that she would blend in, hoping that he wouldn't see her.

"Look, you insolent girl, I'm giving you 10 seconds to come out of your spot otherwise bad things will happen to you just like what happened to your parents a year and a half ago." Deepak murmured under his breath.

She got up slowly, as she gulped. Slowly making' her way to him. Another loud noise startled Khushi as she began to see a body with blood on the ground. It was him. Khushi started to walk fast but suddenly someone gripped her wrist and pulled her towards an unknown face. She could barely see what he looked like, she squinted her eyes but it was no use.

"W..who are you?" Khushi trembled while her body shivered. The person didn't answered and looked away, but his grip tighten around her wrist.

"Let me go, please! Why are you even doing this, I didn't do anything to you." She sobbed, as she tried to get his hand off her wrist.

"Come with me." The man simply spoke, huskily. " But.. I don't even know you'" Khushi confusedly spoke as she clenched her other free fist. "Just come. Do what your told!" He strictly replied, as he began to drag her.

Everything started to spin, as she tried to hold her head up, her eyes began to close as she forced them to keep them open, suddenly everything went pitch black, just as she fell like the snowflakes...

Character Sketch
Deepak Sharma - Karan Kundra
Preeti Singhania -Krystle Dsouza
Aman Malhotra - Karan Goddwani

Index
Chapter 1: Just Stay
Chapter 2: Set Free


My very first FF is here 😛 I'm super duper excited and I'm waiting happily for your responses.. so basically in this FF, Arnav is a secret agent and is trying to protect Khushi from Shyam because he is a criminal..I'm not going to reveal much 😆 So please buddy me for PMs. I will let you more on stuff if there is anything you should know 😊
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INTERESTING START..CANT WAIT TO READ MORE..THANK U FOR THE PM
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WOO!

That was an amazing beggining! Absolutely love it, Im so drawn in!😃

This seems like an awesome concept & Oh wow! Arnav as a spy😍

Interesting! Oh i hope Arnav saved Khushi towards the end!😭

Really interesting :)

I was gonna add you as a buddy, I attempted to and realised you were already on my buddy list!😆

Loving this, Please update soon and PM me! Its brilliant🤗

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Loved it pm me when u update plzz
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Okay guys I have around like 20 likes and I think that either my writing sucks or everyone hates me! 😆 I would like around at least 50- 60 likes so I would have at least some readers here..please everyone, comment and like! I feel bad for posting this now... I know that every writer has trouble with silent readers from reading all the messages from others so silent readers please please please, comment and like! 😃 Thank you!
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Amazing start, Jessica! <3

It was totally amazing :)

Thanks for the PM and continue soon :D


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Thank you everyone for liking and commenting, I will update next week hopefully till now comment and like 😃
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sounds good..do pm me plz...
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Lovely concept...
Amazing prologue...
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I have a thing for thrillers..:P

That was bloody awesome. Continue soon ;)

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