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farfar319

@farfar319

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

GREAT insight into how they should feel! loved it!

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@..MorningStar..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

awww ...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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punjabiquddi

@punjabiquddi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Loved it!! So much emotion!! Please continue!

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

This was writtenly fantastically!! Please tell me there is more parts to this!!

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dancedanceRR

@dancedanceRR

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Really well written! Wish Arnav would've tried to find her though!

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winter.03

@winter.03

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Wonderful OS, hope there is a Part 2?😳

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Ohh u plan on continuing?!

Would love to know how arnav finds out the truth and gets Khushi back!

Do continue! and please pm me :)

- Pria -

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Tara

@Hollagurl

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

WOW, this was beautifully written, and I loved the parts where Arnav went to look for Khushi's belongings in the room and how different it looked without them...every detail was so heart wrenching, I read it more than once ;) Do pm me if you write a part 2? It's too good to miss out on😊

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Marci

@Marci

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

It was bad enough that I cried while Khushi narrated her story, and now I'm crying due to your story!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Truly dear this was such a heart wrenching OS, it pulled the heart strings especially with the song in the bg!!!!

Excellent work dear, and please do continue!!!