(M&G) Bandit Queen (2)-[Ch.23 & Epi. Pg.90] - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

471

Views

75.8k

Users

119

Likes

1.4k

Frequent Posters

mrs.msk thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Note:

Okay guys took me long time but I deleted whatever names I did not recognize...I apologize to NEW READERS that just added me...please re-add me again!!! I sent all the pm's b4 that..so please ADD ME AGAIN!!

DOUBLE CHECK IF YOU ARE ON MY PM LIST..IF NOT THAN ADD ME!!!!
doll9 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
i think dats maan who z watchng her dance.
$ara_$hachi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Oops, is updated part ko meine OW se phele read kiya tha but comment post nahi hua. Never mind, waise loved your effort in different story line.

A story has Maan as cop and Geet as thief, than another has Maan as heart throb and Geet as healthy and so on. God bless your brain. Coming straight to the point. The other gang members are planning something odd but in favor of Geet, adi finally tells something to Maan, they both are in same party but overall kya chal raha hai yeh toh Simi ji batayengi. Cooking something big in your brain, huh.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
mrs.msk thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys!
I know I haven't been updating this!
sorry is all I can say!!
I will def. update this 2day! For sure!!!😳
Just give me some time to finish the part!😆
JeevanaP thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Hey guys!

I know I haven't been updating this!
sorry is all I can say!!
I will def. update this 2day! For sure!!!😳
Just give me some time to finish the part!😆

will be WAitING 😍
HeytzMaaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
WAITING
😍
Will u update CL too
😕
mrs.msk thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Sorry for the delay! Last minute stuff came up from work! *sigh* Finally finished the updates..So enjoy!!! 😳😳😳

Chapter 18

Geet rolled her eyes as she danced with the same person but for some reason she kept looking back feeling as if someone is watching her. She felt really weird and nervous something that she hasn't felt in a long time. She looks at the clock there was still half hour left till they would execute their plans...she looks at the person dancing with her...she could feel his hand rising upward toward the middle of her back...she looks at him with anger..slowly she puts her hand on top of his with a smile...the only thing that was visible of the guy was his mouth...she could see him smirking...he leans closer toward her and whispers in her ear

"you have a beautiful body"

Geet (smiles back and slowly puts her right hand on his shoulder while her left hand was on top of his hand on her back..she leans closer to him whispering in his right ear) Do you know what you have?

"No what..."

She looks at him with a smile while he smiled back...her right hand moves downward his right arm slowly while she captured his eyes...she rested her hand on top of his right hand..she holds it...Meanwhile, Meera and Yash looks at the scene in front of them...Meera saw the guy hand moving slowly upward Geet's back and she knew what was going to happen..she was just scaredthat this might put their plans at halt...

"Yash go over there before Geet does something.." He nodes his head but before he could even get up..they heard a guy scream in pain...

Geet holds his hand tightly in her hand giving him a smile before breaking it...the guy holds his hand and screams in pain...the lights turn on...everyone stares at her..."you have a broken hand..." She looks at him with anger..."next time think twice before touching me or any other girl again..." She was beginning to walk away when the lights turned off again...

Music began to play...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DYIk5oN4KA[/YOUTUBE]


Geet looks around feeling uneasy for some reason..she takes her mask off to see the unknown..she didn't know who she was looking for but she felt someone's presence...everyone around her started dancing around her with their partners...she felt someone poke on her shoulder..she turned around to face the person but he was gone...she shakes her head going toward her table...

She remembers her moments with Maan...when she first saw him on the road unconscious...him running after her during their first date...their first confession..she felt his presence behind her...someone places hands on her arm slowly bringing it toward her hands...she closes her eyes feeling the touch..she wasn't sure if it was a dream or reality but whatever the case was she loved it...she felt herself being turned around...Geet slowly opens up her eyes to look at the person but before she could do so she felt something touching her eyes...she touched them with her hands and realized it was her mask

Woh lamhe woh baatien
Koi na jane, ki kaisi raatien
Ohhh barsaatein
Woh bheege bheege yaadein
Woh bheege bheege yaadein
Na mai jaanoo, na tu jaane
Kaisa hai yeh mausam
Koi na jaane
Kahin se yeh fiza aayi
Gamon ki dhoop sang laayi
Khafa ho gaye hum
Juda ho gaye hum

She quickly opens up her eyes to see...she saw a man wearing black suit walking away..she runs after that person...she saw herself getting closer and closer to him..he was now standing near the fruit punch bowl...Geet stops running as she approached him...she puts her hand on his shoulder...slowly the person turns around...she was disappointed when she saw somebody else..in her heart she had hoped that it would be Maan...she shakes her head slowly walking away...

Woh lamhe woh baatien
Koi na jane, ki kaisi raatien
Ohhh barsaatein
Woh bheege bheege yaadein
Woh bheege bheege yaadein
Oohh oooh ooh


She sits at the dinning table thinking of Maan...she looks straight up feeling him near her again...she saw him standing in front of her leaning against the pillar...smiling at her...she gets up going near him...Meera stood in front of her as she was approaching him...Geet couldn't comprehend what Meera was saying...she pushes her away slightly looking where Maan was standing...she goes at the same pillar touching it gently...she leans against it with the pillar as if she could still feel his presence..she looks down to see a note...

Sagar ki gehrai se
Gehra hai apna pyar
Sehraon ki, in hawaon mein
Kaise aayegi bahaar
Kahan se yeh hawa aayi?
Ghataein khali kyon chahi?
Khafa ho gaye hum
Juda ho gaye hum


She slowly picks it up..her heart beating fast...she holds it in her hand tightly...after few moments of gathering her thoughts..Geet slowly unfolds the paper...inside the paper there was am sorry written in blood...she drops it on the ground not sure what to believe..the person that she wanted to find was here...she was damn sure but now the question remained what should she do?

Woh lamhe woh baatien
Koi na jane, ki kaisi raatien
Ohhh barsaatein
Woh bheege bheege yaadein
Woh bheege bheege yaadein

Geet closes her eyes trying to gain her strength...he was here somewhere...her enemy...she bends down picking up the paper...she still remembers his betrayal as if it had happened just yesterday...her wounds were still alive leaving a gap of emptiness and hatred...she looks at the paper..running her finger through the blood written note...it pinched her a little to see the blood but that little pain was nothing to the pain he caused her...

Meera comes up to her and looks at the paper..."Who wrote this?"

Geet (wipes her tears) Maan..he is here (she looks around)

Meera: But how can he be here..it is not possible

Geet: I don't know all I know is that he is here somewhere and it won't be long before I track him down...(she rips up the paper and looks at the time) We got to stick to our plan

Meera: Geet if Maan really is here than do you think that it is safe to go ahead with this plan? (she looks at Meera) What I mean is that if Maan really is here than he would've came with a backup right? What if we go through this robbery and get caught?

Geet: I guess we have to wait and find out! I don't back away from my decisions Meera..you know that...lets see how really good Mr. Maan Singh Khruana really is! (she smirks...the lights go on...they saw the lady entering the party with guards surrounding her from front and back...Geet eyes the necklace that they are going to steal..) Are you guys ready?

Meera: Yeah...Yash is already in his position and so is Pari..we are just waiting for your cue!

Geet: Okay lets go ahead...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
He watched her disappear with Meera to the ladies bathroom..he knew that Geet was going to go ahead with the plan..she was stubborn but he was no less...he had little bit of hope to get her back after seeing love in her eyes for him...he was glad that somewhere deep down she still loves him now it was up to him to gain that love back..to make her realize the truth...to make her know that he still loves her no matter what...it was just unfortunate that their love didn't go as he had hoped...

"I will not leave you anymore Geet...I am here whether you like it or not..." (he smirks)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Geet and Meera enter the bathroom stalls...Meera locks the bathroom door after making sure that no one was there...Geet stands in front of the mirror trying hard not to remember Maan..she needed to be focused on her mission...Meera helps Geet take off her mask while Geet removes her dress..underneath the dress was her bandit queen get up..black skinny leather jeans with a black tank top...Meera goes inside one of the bathroom stalls...she stands on top of the toilet opening up the tile from the ceiling..a bag falls down on the ground..she quickly takes out a leather jacket with black gloves and mask...Geet throws away her heels and the dress toward Meera to pack in the bag...

Geet looks at herself after completely getting dressed...Meera looks at her watch feeling nervous..."Geet we have two minutes until Yash cuts off all the lights..after that we have less then a minute to steal the necklace..." Geet sets the alarm on her clock..

"Am ready Meera..make sure while the lights are out you run out"

"hmmm" (Meera hands her the earpiece where everyone can stay in contact through that and dark vision goggles)

The lights go off...Meera opens the door...she gives Geet thumps up while running out toward the exit...

Maan smirks when the lights went off...it was show time!

Note:
Okay guys!
So what you think! I figured its time we get some maaneet moments in here..from here on out will be Cat and Mouse game! 😆

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
meena.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Hello simi...😊











update dear...👏












dear⭐️










very much dear...😳










dear...😉











Thank you
for updating...😛
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update Loved it!!
Awwhh Geet could feel Maan s presence! Maan could see her love which now and then gets clouded by the anger and betrayal!!
Whoaaa! BQ is back in full form with breaking the hand of that idiot!
OMG MSK was staring at her throughout the party!
OMG the note The way Maan disappeared and appeared sounded lovely yet painful!
Awesome choice of song!!
OMG Geet all stubborn and Maan no less ! Suits each other LOL!! Maan knew her so well and that she wont back out! While Meera seems the only
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
sane and practical one out there!! LOL! Now would Geet succeed in her plan?
Would Maan make her realize it wasnt his fault and he truly loves her?
Really loved Geets restlessness sensing Maan his love his eyes!!
Haayyyeee waiting for some Maaneet moments!
Continue soon!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".