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Hey guys back with an update… enjoy reading

Chapter 10


Rey – she cant leave me Swayam! She cant!!!!!

Swayam – she wont rey! Calm down! Everything will b fyn!

Sash – jijz ye kya…

Karan – rey and Kriya luv eachother

Sash and arjun – what!!!

Karan – since a long tym back!

Sash – but den…

Just den ridhimma came out of the ICU

Rey and Swayam was the first one to notice and they rushed towards her.

Rey – Kriya kaisi hai??

Ridhimma – shes fyn. Would gain conscious in 1 or 2 hrs. thanx for bringing her over here rey! U don't know how close she iis to me!

Rey (selftalk) – so as me!

Ridhimma excused herself telling that only 1 person can go in. so all decided to go in one by one… all had gone in and seen Kriya… they wanna stay but karan somehow made them go with him as he knew their would b a lot to b sorted out b/w KR

Swayam even saw her for the last time and went back.

Rey was having an inner turmoil. He wanted to go in but those flashes of pre-valentines night always came infront of his eyes.

Rey selftalk – rey no that wasn't true! U know dat and u have to find d truth!

Comeon rey go for it! Said his inner voice.

He went in just to see a bandadge on her head and she lying on the hospital bed like a dead body and nothing else! His heart ached seeing the sight infront of his eyes!

Rey st – see rey! Its all ur fault! Sab teri wajah se hua hai! Agar tune us tym thoda dhyaan diya hota toh she would not have been in this condtion! Its all ur fault rey! All ur fault!

Unkowiningly he started moving towards her. He all wanted was to knoe the truth! That's what really matters to him! He kissed her forehead. She was not at all reacting. Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes afterall he cant see his baatcutter in this condition!

*sash's house*

Sharon – oh so u r back Swayam gr8!

Swayam – shut up Sharon!

Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes! There were 2 reasons for this thing! First his best friend Kriya is der in the hospital and none of her friends even cared to ask about her and secondly he broke his friends trust! Damn yes he told d truth to rey!

===== Flashback =====

Rey was crying like hell and Swayam was all the time consoling him. Now it was limit and he cant stop telling him the whole truth and he blurted out everything infront of him which only made his condition more vulnerable!

Damn he wanted his answers! He wanted to know why she didn't told him! Swayam tried to explain him but all went in vain.

===== Flashback ends =====

Sharon – Swayam tu…

Swayam – just leave me alone guys!

Karan, sash and arjun were confused as they never saw Swayam talking to Sharon soo rudely and soo as lousians.

Vishakha – Swayam dude tum us moron ke liye itne aasun baha rahe ho? Oh comeon!

Swayam – u know what guys? U all r sick! Tum logon ko toh sach bhi nahi pata! Tumhein ye pata hi nahi ki . . .

Swayam stopped in the middle regretting what he said just now.

Neha – ki ???

Amar – Swayam tach kha jai? (Swayam sach kya hai?)

Swayam – why do u all care to know d truth? Shes nothing to u na! then cool great! Its not Kriya who don't deserve to b ur friend its u all who don't deserve to be her friends! Its really disgusting guys!

Bharat – oye gaali di?

Amar – ale nahi gaali nahi di!

Vicky – Swayam sach kya hai? Kal tak toh tu us Kriya se nafrat karta tha aura b achanak se aisa behave kyun kar raha hai?

Swayam – huh! Jhut tha wo sab kuch! Dikhava tha! I can never hate Kriya and will never do! U know why? Coz she sacrificed everything for us! She sacrificed her dance her love for us! And this thing u all can never understand!

Neha – what saying u Swayam?

Swayam – u noe what guys just leave it!

And he left for his room!

*Kriya's hospital room*

Finally after 2 hrs Kriya reacted, rey sat up straight.

Kriya – re..rey

She spoke in a broken tone

Rey – Kriya… Kriya im here only. U fyn na?

Kriya – ah! Rey my head its paining!

Rey – everything will b fyn baatcutter!

Kriya – rey im sorry!

Rey – I know Kriya

Kriya looked at him all shocked.

Rey – I know all that was a lie! Why didn't u told me before Kriya? U know I would have understood!

Kriya – but kya aap mujhe bhula paate? Kya aap life me aage badhte? Boliye rey! Kya aap kar paate?

Rey – but baatcutter…

Kriya – boliye rey!

Rey – no!

Kriya – isiliye maine aapko sach nahi bataya! And I think this was a wrong decision too! U left dancing! Why rey? Mere liye itna kyun?

Rey – coz I love u Kriya! I love u!

He said and he broke down into tears. (P.s. – till now Kriya was sitting on the bed. Rey made her sit)

She was shocked! Yet again!

Kriya – rey!

And she hugged him tightly as if she would never let him go away from her.

Kriya – I love u too rey

She was still hugging him and crying like a baby!

The lousians also came to the hospital to get some answers but they were shocked to see KR hugging and crying like hell.

They all were shocked coz all of them knew about KR break up and rey being sad but here its totally diff. they are hugging as if they never wanted to leave eachother!

Finally they parted and Kriya look at the door. She saw all the lousians standing on the door with a confused look. She went pale. She didn't knew how will they react but rey went towards them.

Rey – just leave guys!

Neha – rey but neha wanted knowing the truth!

Rey – oh really! Where were u when she was in hospital say it neha!

Vicky – rey tu neha pe kyun chilla raha hai?

Rey – tum sabko sach sunna hai rite to suno!

He narrated the whole story to them

And now please leave!

Kriya – rey…

Rey – tum chup raho Kriya! Its enough! Tum nahi jaanti ye log…

Kriya – I knew it rey!

Rey – what?

Kriya – Swayam told me!

She clarified!

All looked at her shockingly!

Kriya – what? Didn't he told u today? Coz uske alava kisi ko bhi sach nahi pata tha!

Rey – he told me! But not this thing that…

Kriya – that I was in contact with him! Maine hi mana kiya tha! Main use phasana nahi chahti thi!

Neha – sorry Kriya… we saying soo many bad things to u! sorry im!

Kriya – its k neha

All were having tears in his eyes and they have a group hug including rey

But someone was missing!

Kriya – Swayam kahan hai?

Rey – umm pata nahi! He went back to home!

Swayam was there standing on the door smiling whole heartedly!

Swayam – I already told this thing to u before!

Kriya – yaya I know!

Swayam smiled seeing her expression and again all the lousians have a group hug and Sharon even apologized to Swayam

***THE END ***

Angry coz I ended it? Wait for it! Mere paas bahut saare plans hain! 😆 maybe till the dreams one end or it even depends on the replies! It all depends on u!

Now me bhaaging yahan se nahi toh sab mujhe peetenge bye!


- K / konpal

Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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res😛
m pehli ho bol rahi hun
kyeh kal unres hoga yaa meri aane k baad😛 😭
Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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resd...

pata nai kab kar paungi...

sry...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

res😛

m pehli ho bol rahi hun
kyeh kal unres hoga yaa meri aane k baad😛 😭


wat!

not fair

aaj nahi kar sakti??? 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey k tu update dene bali hai kya?????

res😃
unres

1st i m gussa on u tune ff end kar diya😭
n cuming 2 d update,,,,,yes it was awsumm update as always ,,,luv swayum frndshp,,,,,fnly rey or gang ko sab pta chal gya n happy ending v ho gya,,,,,bt me kriyansh kiss ki expect kar rhi thi,,,,
btw waitng 4 ur suprise

Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

hey k tu update dene bali hai kya?????


res😃


arey pehle pura likhne do

maybe its d last of this FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
no k it should not be d last😭😭😭
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Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

no k it should not be d last😭😭😭


it indeed is 😭

everything has an end dear!

i just cant strech it
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Posted: 13 years ago
k tu khatam ni karegi...

dats it...
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya


arey pehle pura likhne do

maybe its d last of this FF

no no plz k,,,,,,,esa mat kario,😭😭

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