Dil V/s Mind - A Swaron SS!!

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Madhura

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow!! This is just amazing..arnd more than 20 people liking my writing and cocept..really touched!!

Best response I have got..more than I get in my shop.I never expected it, really appreciate it and thank u so much for encouraging me guys..means a lot..warna I wudnt have ctd it.Thank u so much every1..

will do individual replies and post the next part soon!! Hope u guys like it..

Love

Madz

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Madhura

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: manasie

what shop???

I scrapped you. I meant shop yani...where I make siggies, icons, avs..

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Madhu you aren't a novice at writing.
You are one of the very good writers i have met in here
And i have also read your work in SF
This one is just another proof of your skills.
Sharon's inner war was well depicted
The heart is right, it will fight till the last breath.
Mind may give us victory but solace comes from the heart.
Loved it Massi.

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

madz dis is simply beautiful
mujhe toh title hii bahut pasand aaya its apt 4 Swaron
nyc start...very well written!!!
do continue!!!nd pm me

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Madhura

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon
Madz, this is so beautiful. I can't believe u were hesitating to post this.

You showed the inner turmoil of Sharon's heart & mind very well. It was a pleasure to read your OS. I'm glad that Sharon is finally ready to let her guard down, let her heart win over her mind for once. Aw, that's so sweet how Swayam's voice was the only one that helped her come out of her trance.

Thank you so much for posting this & I'm glad that I urged you to post this. Do post the next part soon. Can't wait to read it.

Thank you so much Srish!!! Glad you like it so much..haan yaar 1st time..I do write a bit or cont stuff, but not as a whole!

Am glad u loved the turmoil so much and swaron part.

I should thank u cos this got a great response!! Will do it today!

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Madhura

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: tanha_swaron
Wow! I have never read anything like this before! It was so beautiful. How amazingly you have shown the battle between the heart and the mind. I was so lost in it, that when it ended it came as a bit of a surprise. You should have continued. You write extremely well. This was by far the best representation of Sharon's inner turmoil. Please continue writing.

Hey sorry I dunno ur name!!

Wow..thank u so much for the amazing comment..am glad u liked it, and u were lost in it. Thats the best compliment a writer can get, to be lost in that world. I wanted to see the response I get b4 continuing...thank u again. Will cont now!