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LIONHEART

@LIONHEART

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: bones88
superb👍🏼

Better than the so called track the CVs r working on. I really hope it does happen this way than the other way around

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myanu10

@myanu10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

loved it hope cv's also show sumthing lyk that ...ya phir diwali wala kiss arnav complete kar de😳

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@JasKaBarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Omg omg omg jyoti 👏 Wah yaar tu Teh kamaal karta 😲 👍🏼 Loved loved loved it <3

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sidhu285

@sidhu285

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: JasKaBarun
Omg omg omg jyoti 👏 Wah yaar tu Teh kamaal karta 😲 👍🏼 Loved loved loved it <3

Thank You...Jas Ji..Try mari si...IF Friends Passand Aagayi...buhut chaanga Laaga...

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sidhu285

@sidhu285

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ---Pari---
RES babe! :)
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HOLY SHIT!!!! omgomgomgomgomg!!! You're such an amazing writer! You have a lot of creativity in you yaar!!! It was just wonderful!!! When arnav was about to open her dori, my heart was going all dhak dhak! And I'm not even joking! Pleaseee! Do us all a favour and make this an SS and CONTINUE it! Please! I want to see what happens next! You can't abandon us like this! You have to have to have to continue and write the next part, maybe with Khushi retaliating and somehow getting the truth out to him! Please! I absolutely NEED to read the next part!
Please update part 2 soon and please pm me! I am really really looking forward to reading it!
If possible, update today itself please!!! I promise I will give a really long comment! I promise promise promise!!!!! please do me a favour and continue this! I will seriously, like, hug you!!!! NOT EVEN JOKING!!!! Pleaseee continue!!!
Lots of love,
Sanju

This Is really Nice of You...Liking my First try like this..only your Long and Lovely comment has made me think ...if I Should write little more...Will let u know...and I think might Update soon..

Thank You for Such A lovely comment...😊

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sidhu285

@sidhu285

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: LaxshaLOVEArshi
Actually I cant believe dis is u r first one cozz it wozz awesome and u should continue wwriting dis
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Thank You for Lovely Comment...might give a another Try...

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Good SS.

I agree that Arnav needs to start drinking now, to chill. He is too stressed. Not good for health, man.

Not sure if I like the idea of them 'doing it', and Khushi accepting it that easily.

But I agree that he needs to get drunk several times, and not forget the next day.

I also think they can add a Khushi kidnap for ransom by unknown gundas - not an Arnav kidnap by Shyam. After all, its happened in Delhi a few times recently, where the kids of executives were kidnapped for ransom.