~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 49

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

Awww!

Honestly I nearly felt like crying!

The whole Nisha thing was heartbreaking and now her friend won't even look at her and if he does all she gets is cold stares

Now I really want to know what happened between Nisha and Sharman and how they got seperated :(

The whole Khushi lying to show she's okay is just like Khushi in the show

But her father can see right through her lies!

Arnav and Khushi need to have some sort of confrontation and so do Nisha and Sharmaan!

That way Nisha could get her friends back as well, Friends that she seemed to have lost

I don't know why but I'm feeling really sorry for Nisha as it looks like she doesnt have anyone at this moment except her grandparents and even in front of them she has to keep up this facade of being happy so they don't see through her.

Yes she has Arnav but really there is nothing to the relationship there.

This has got to be one of the longest comments I have wrote on a FF 😲

Thanks for the pm

Although now I want to know more about Khushi

We have gotten a fair view of what Arnav is going through and what he feels about it, but I want to know Khushi's view and how she is coping with the news.

But all in all I know your going to get round to that as you mentioned because this is just a teaser!

Originally posted by: april2003

Another brilliant update. From what I've gathered, Arnav has scarificed his love for Khushi for something to do with his family. Nisha may have done the same thing as well. Somehow I believe Nisha's sacrifice had to do with some social-class issue. Khushi is now thinking that Arnav has moved on completely, while him on the other hand is praying that she comes back. I don't blame her for leaving him but what's the use when they're both miserable. Thanks for the PM and please continue. This is quite a gripping story. There is so much more I want to say but I will reserve some of it, your writing causes that😆. Loved it

Edited:

Your writing is really staying true to the title. Arnav and Nisha both want to be with some one else.

Originally posted by: Krani

That was amazing!

Loved reading how you are weaving the past with the present, how their choices have an affect on themselves, as well as those around them.

I loved the added touches of Armaan and Ridhima in the story, as well as Shashi.

This chapter was mostly to introduce us to the pain of Nishi, however the last few sentences left an impact on me of the amount of pain Khushi is suffering through, but hiding behind the facade of happiness and cheeriness.

This line really stood out. Especially since the last episode was all about Khushi lying to her mother - a girl who could hardly lie about the tiniest of things, was lying about something as big as marriage.

His daughter had learnt to lie.

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Nisha and Sharman - the other part of the story. There is so much of pain here and a sort ruefulness. Nisha's recollection of her earlier engagement and the formality in her and Arnav's 'relationship' too shows that. Looking forward to know what that text is for.😊

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

Okay, I'm heavily confused now!!
I think I'll have to read this from the start, once again!! 😕
You're writing style is awesome, bey...
Bas mera dhyan nahi lag raha.. Iss vacation ke vajay se...

Ek baar main waapas aajaoon, tab Ek baar phir padhoongi... Theek hai?
Bas ghussa mat hoyiye, meri maa!! *doing a bhaktipoorvak namashkar* 😳

Originally posted by: zaniax

This is sooo damn interesting!!!

im eager to noe wat xactly happened between Arnav & Khushi..n why is he gettin married?

i guess will hav to keep wondering till u update 😛.eagerly waiting & thanx for d pm :)

Originally posted by: kritz11

I couldn't log on to IF for two days and when I do I receive two updates for this fic, I open it eagerly and I find out my whole recognition of the characters is wrong!!😕😆 That girl was not Riddhima too!! Though baffled initially, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and ya Nisha and Sharman get a👍🏼 Lots of progress to keep my mind churning😆

Originally posted by: curledup

I always said to myself I will find an author who will make me so apart of their work and will make me feel so I cant even describe that feeling but I think no wait I am certain Rae I just found her!

its you :D

the way you write everything the beauty the pain the anguiish! I feel like I am a part of thos story more than the characters I feel like I am literally a part of it a and wathcing them destroy themselves I feel their pain and their wmptions I feel what they feel and see them create havoc I can lieterally picture everything in my head and beliwve me when I say this I have never found such an author who has madee feel like this.. You are unbelievably gifted dont trifle with it! I cannot name what it is about your writing but its something Rae I can see it picture it and feel it! :D

Coming to the chapters I must say and I have aaid thia before that the way you structure it all is. such an added element and makes everything stand out! its stunning! Now I dont know if anyone else noticed but I did that subtle comparison you done with nisha and khushi was so well put and then that hot flashback to the cold present, it was a sibtle but well put difference! Aah NIsha I want to hate her and not like her but somehow I feel like she is a culprt to something and everyone is doing an Arnav- meanong they are seeing what they want to see and not what she is showing them,make sense?

Im happy Arnav did not give up and he actually went looking for her, wait is she actually getting married or is he thinking she is? and Arnav for flip sake stop wallowing in self pity man the heck up! Phew I needed to rant that out!

the last paragraph from this chapter was...I was bowled over! way bowled over I cant even, I dont know it was really really good << that word does not do justice to this chapter but thats all I can think of!

*sigh* Is Emotion Ko Kya NAam Do!

Bte this was written off my phone forgive my mistakes!

-Aashifa