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Posted: 13 years ago
So I'm going to read the 2nd chapter and then comment on the whole thing ... so this is 'like' leaving a 'res' ... 😳, but not literally. I'm off to read the next one ... can't believe I missed it.

Oh, and I did have to scroll all the way up to check if this was IPKKND or DMG, half way down the first chapter .. hehehe, wishful thinking I guess.

-S
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: appy_12

res!


Nisha Francia Oberoi?! Love the name.. The girl seems... likable, but I don't know much about her.. So only time will tell!

I swear, jab I saw that pic, I thought Teri Meri only!

So khushi has just made an official entry into your FF? Dhanya ho! :P The lead comes after three updates! No, not berating you! I'm only admiring your nerve.. KKG ki late entry karathe ho?? Dekh na, Devi Maiya tumhe nahin chodengi! :P

Okay, enough of fun! So Khushi is several hundred miles away.. Where? Lucknow? Mumbai? London?

So the ring felt like an intrusion to both, eh?

Yea, well.. For people who have had melodramatic sagaais in Mandirs with gauge as the ring, normal engagement won't seem normal!

So Nisha seems to be doing this only for the old couple - her parents? Hmm..

So bloody interesting Rae! Continue soon!


Thank You! :)

The name appeals to me. Glad you liked it too. :)

And glad you like her...although your final decision hasnt been made yet...

And the sari had to be green cos I wanted Teri Meri! Lol! ;) :D

@Bold - Haha! Lets hope not. :)

And honestly, the prologue says 4 people and that means 4 leads. :)

No answers as usual but glad you find it interesting. :)

And I mentioned in the update, the old couple are Nisha's Grandparents.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

Mine!


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Goodness gracious, woman. You are going to kill me!

My heart was thudding throughout imagining what Arnav's reaction to the green sari was going to be. And it was all I had hoped for and more.

I like Nisha. She seems to be a female version of Arnav, Just as hurt, just as tortured, just as manipulative and yet crying out for help (wait, is that wishful thinking on my behalf?)

She did, of course, vaguely wonder why but she never asked in all the times she had met him, which hadn't been many to start with, because she was afraid he would ask her the reason behind the storm in her own and she had no answer for that.

Poignant, the words above. Tortured brown meets stormy blue. What a pair of broken hearts!

Will they help heal each other?

And Khushi...Bring her to the story. Soon :)

I miss her almost as much as Arnav does!





Awww! I hope not! I love your writing and your comments! ;) :D

And glad you liked it! That was a difficult bit for me cos that was the first connect to the past (which we have seen and know) if you noticed...so I was apprehensive and changed stuff around till the last minute! Lol!

About your opinion of Nisha...I wont say anything cos as I told Varsha, I want my readers to develop their own understanding of the characters independent of my opinion on them. :)

Thank You, Meera for such a wonderful comment! Glad you liked that part! That was one of the more ambitious bits in the part...thought it might not be as powerful as I wanted it and worse may look fabricated but glad you liked it! :)

And about Khushi...awww but no answers, sorry. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmm so did not expect that...But I think she was the one who was with Barun in DMG right? I only watched DMG for a year or so...
but yes coming back to the update..this was awesome as usual..seriously your narrative style is brilliant...and finally we get to see Khushi's situation...can't wait to read the next part..thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
I haven't read the third chapter yet, honestly, and I have to rush to pick my kid up from school. Won't be able to read till much later today!!!

SO, I have this weird feeling the gal will be Riddhima??????

Wow, way to combine the two ..

Assuming it's not ... well, let's see.

Will be back with more comments after I read the 3rd chapter.

-S
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rae...I just caught up with this FF. Seems very interesting...but I am lost as to who the characters are . I am assuming it was Nisha in chapter one and 2, and chapter three is their engagement. Is Khushi yet to be introduced in first person ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all sorry for such late comment
Very busy this week with all the functions at my home
Coming back to update

Nisha Francia Oberoi?! Love the name
Francia is she part Christian or something
Green reminded Arnav of Teri meri aww even he thinks that the lyrics is so apt on them
Well this reminded me of again watching the sequence onece more
Khushi has made a entry in ur FF wow
Can't wait for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay wow!
First of all you are a spectacular writer man!
You really do know how to describe the emotions and set the scene!
I was in it all the way through, thinking who is the girl?!
And this is some new one! Nisha!
She's not interested in the engagement at all as well
So there is some stories of her that are not being shown!
Khushi has seen the news and it still hurts her!
Love the way your progressing the story!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ri_luvs_ArShi

Too bad I lost the bet😆

seriously your writing made me all thinking that it is Ridzi😆
But I loved the fact that you surprised everyone!
While reading the description of the part..I thought that when Arnav will see Nisha he will surely remember Khushi from the Teri Meri Sequence and See...He remembered each step and every single touch😳
I am really looking forward for Khushi's entry and the fourth person.😃


Riddhima didnt have dark blue eyes! ;) :D

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Gargee

Oh My God that was heart breaking!


So Khushi's not dead- or hasn't lost her memories after all... Nisha Hmm? Intriguing! Can we get more of the past Please?

Gosh she found out he got engaged- Poor Sweetheart... Why doesn't Arnav go and search her nad say sorry already? 😭

Well over to you- Waiting eagerly for the story to progress! Thanks for the PM!


Hahahaha! Why would you think he has lost his memory?!

Thank You! :)

I am glad it resonated with you!

And you will get to know more as the story goes on, so read on.

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