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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Oh My God that was heart breaking!

So Khushi's not dead- or hasn't lost her memories after all... Nisha Hmm? Intriguing! Can we get more of the past Please?

Gosh she found out he got engaged- Poor Sweetheart... Why doesn't Arnav go and search her nad say sorry already? 😭

Well over to you- Waiting eagerly for the story to progress! Thanks for the PM!

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Oh wow! You totally took me by surprise there! I was fully expecting them to say, "Ridhima Gupta" But it was someone else altogether!!

Loved the twist! :D

As for the emotions. My god, that was really good! I could feel my throat getting heavier and heavier as I tried holding back a few tears. This was beautifully described!

Amazing update! :)

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Neha

@melovemayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Nisha? Great!! I knew I shldn't make guesses.I made one n luk nw!! It was a bad hunch!!

I feel bad for Khushi!! n Arnav too!! Stormy blue n Tortured brown!! Hmmm..

Thanks for the PM I knw you are gonna send!! :)

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

As soon as I read a green sari my mind immediately went back to the Tere Meri sequence and I knew it was going to make an appearance. Very nicely written!

Can't wait to read why Arnav is getting into this engagement but then again he'll do anything if it makes his family happy so I am guessing that played a part.

So there is Arnav, Khushi and Nisha. Who is the fourth person in this story? Next chapter I am guessing? Update soon. :)

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KaaminiJha

@KaaminiJha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Awesome..!!

Thanks for PM..

Nisha?

nice name!

btw what is all the mystery about the past..?

Update soon...I'm dying out here...

And i loved the part about khushi at the end...at least i hope it was khushi..

Knowing you...it will probably turn out to be someone else.

😆

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Okay read the 3 chapters. So Khushi left Arnav and now he is getting engaged to another girl Nisha who at first read seems to be equally cold and ruthless as Arnav. Hmm why do I think this is a marriage of compromise. And what is Khushi doing. Did she end up in Sanjeevani? Interesting plot. Looking forward to the next update.

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

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OH MY FREAKING GOD!! that was breathe taking !! i was holding my vreath the entire time *sigh* thank god it was not riddhima !😛

NISHA FRANCES OBEROI wow sounds appeling !!and though i dont knowmuch about her ikinda like her !! and they both are doing this engagement for their families when neither of them are happy ? thats so sadd😭

so here comes the official entry of khusi kumari gupta !!

hats off to you rae👏 👏for such amazing work !! that was amazigly written ! and the twist * i am speechlesss * i had never ever in my dreams thought about this possibility !!i was already ready to read riddhimas name !! but u alawyas manage to surprise us 😊

that was beautifully written !! and the sari I LOVED IT

thanks for the pm 😃

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

Hey AT

i am new to your world of OSes and FFs.. based on the 3 chapters that i read, i should quickly go and read all of yours..

few very very nice things, which i HAVE to say:

- its sooo somber right now.. you know even as i was reading it, it was as if i was this Nisha female or Arnav.. everything around me, a haze.. slow as if moving towards a collosal explosion!!! i am getting the goosebumps as i think of whats going to happen

- i know what happened with our dear Arnav.. but what happened to this Nisha female.. i hope you will tell us soon.. actually i know you will.. you have created enough suspense around it with the 3 yr ago and the 5 yr ago picture that you paint..

- i love that the girl is not Khushi.. well if she were, the story wud be over right :P (for me, all the heat before the confessions/engagements is the funnn)

- i loveee that the girl is not Ridhima.. i never did follow DMG.. hostel life.. so yay!!

- sorry for this silly one.. but i love the fact that you have given links for previous and next chap at the end of each chap.. it was soo easy to read all 3 chaps in one go..

Thanks to Meera and my sis for introducing me to this FF..

My sis - intentionally.. she told me to read this one..

Meera - unintentionally.. i stalk her, you see :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

Firstly the song choice, apt, brilliant also because I love Mathew Perryman Jones.

Now the update, was very heart wrenching according to me.

The way you've written about the girl's reluctance is beautiful, yet it will leave you thinking about her even after you have finished with the chapter. Also, the sari is beautiful. The moment I read 'dark green' I was like, now we all know what is to follow. And the girl's name is beautiful. Kudos to you for creating her character, and she seems to have a past, eager to know more about that.

Arnav's pain is so well captured Rae, but what I don't understand is, he marrying again? But we'll get to know about that later I presume.

And the girl in the last para, would be Khushi, right? I really feel for her.

Brilliant work as usual, loved it to bits and I'll say it again, as always,

Update soon 😊

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

heya..

awesome update..nisha? why do i feel shes marrying arnav for her grandparents..

her costume was nice..aww she reminded arnav of khushi and the teri meri sequence..

khushi's pov at the end? cant wait to find out how she is and hats she doing..

continue soon..

many thanks for the pm..:)

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