~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 16

Originally posted by: kritz11

Yayy glad that sanjeevani is a backdrop, I really miss that serial😊, but both the prologue and chapter 1 left me confused coz I am sure the lady you have described doesnt match Khushi,yet she is soon to be engaged to Arnav!! Woww it is really interesting and I should pay heed to your note and be patient to find out the rest of the mystery and how sanjeevani and ArHi can possibly be related😊
Loved it,left me wanting to know more👍🏼

Originally posted by: curledup

Hello!

Okay I shall start with my response to the prologue. First off you are an amazing writer did you know that? and second off woah m taking a step back because this was amazing. I love that all of them are so different but so the same. They all seem to show the same pain in aa different scenario. LOVING IT!

Now chapter 1 I love the suspense and mystery the whole way through. The one part I think I absolutely fell for is they way you constructed it all. The splitting in the papragraphs just at the right moment was and is perfect and the bit I love is ' Because they were exquisite'. That was so amazingly written And now the confusuion and suspense is this khushi or ridhima? and why does everyone hate her? no no its ridhima right? no wait its khuhsi? okay I am befuddle but I bet half my chocolate cereal that its ridhima.

Do update soon and do not keep me in suspense. Once again you are an amazibg writer. Also I have sent this comment through my phone sorry but I ws dying to comment and I didnt want to just res and leave it :P


-Aashifa

Originally posted by: sini1234

That was a really intriguing prologue .👏 Whoever that was I felt like reaching out to poor little tortured soul and give her a hug .👍🏼 Cant wait to read more .

Originally posted by: abhiyaluver1

wow... 😊 loved the first update 😊 i am really very confused is it Riddhima of Khushi ? 😕 but hope its khushi 😆 sanjeevani and arshi 😆

lol... your FF is really interesting 😊 hats off to u 👏 👏 thanks for the PM and update soon 😊

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Dude!

What a comment! I am just thrilled! aww! you're welcome! 😃

Thank You so much! :) you're welcome! 😆

I am so glad and humbled that you like my style of writing! you are really good! 😃

You got the prologue bang on. They are all messed up in different ways in their life and are experiencing pain but they all have a connect wohoo! I am ishmart!

And about the splitting chapter 1 - I am just glad you noticed! They were very pivotal to the plot. :) I DID! OHH BOOYA! I'm too good I tell you 😆 No really I love the way you structure your chapters and on general your work, it is really good! 😃

@Bold - Thats exactly the reaction I wanted with the girl although I cannot answer any of it right now but I am just happy that I am getting the reaction. :) time to cry 😭 😆 tell me soon!

And this is an amazing comment, so no apologizing! :D Thank you! And I'll stop spamming now!

Originally posted by: crazy44

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in clas, wil be bk :)
*edited *
i am sorry for the late edit, buT i was in clas and then i had a seminar to attend and then i went for a coffee with my friend! ;)
buT here i am ! hehe
i LOVED THE UPDATE rae!! though i am confusd wheather it was riddima or khusi, buT i thnk its riddimia or maybe khusi! ah i dont knw, i just have to wait to find out!
and the detail description was brilliant written!
chapter 1 was realLy interesting! u already got me hookeD to ths!
cant wait to read more!
thanks 4 the pm :)

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You! :)

Its okay...shoud I read more into the 'wink' with the coffee... ;) :D

Anyway, glad you liked the chapter...all questions will be answered as the story progresses... :)