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Oooh! You replying to comments is always a good sign! :D Will we be getting an update soonish!? :P

P.S. I could spam and aid you in starting a new thread? :D

Originally posted by: flutterby

the thing i really liked about chp 8 was that akash sided with khushi and left his house for her👏 and i liked how u have made payal a more strong character... she is angry with arnav... wrong word.. abhors arnav for choosing to leave khushi and marry nisha.. i liked how u explained that... " please bhai"... phrase ⭐️ a gem of a sentence...it was so.. deep and meaningful... but the best... was akash's response to nisha...
why dont u live her with ur parents... because i dont agree with ur marriage.. 😎

chp 9- the first sign of a crack in the arnav- nisha relationship... and nisha in this ff is acting like a female asr 😆.. giving her work the utmost priority.. leaving all other relations aside.. yet she consoled hariprakash just like khushi does...

chp 10- that denial thing by khushi... 👏 👍🏼 the emoticons i am using here doesnt express how much i liked that part.. especially this sentence.. Denying that life had miseries scattered around, she had found a sense of joy in every little moment. 👏 khushi despite her loss still wanted akash to return to his house.. which is so understanding of her.. she still cares for the family that insulted her, didnt understand, listen, allow her to defend herself.. and the khushi arnav dance... i loved how u described it... 😍 his touch.. her response... his pain her patience to share it.. ❤️

thanks for the pms... i will respond to the others in due time.. 😳

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Hi Rae!

So I've Finally! (haha, get it !? God! I am bad at puns, lol!) read this FF. I am feeling so many emotions right now, I don't know how to disect them and write a comprehensible comment!

First of all, I want to congratulate you for creating such believable charcters as Nisha and Sharman. It is really hard to create new characters that are believable, you have gone a step ahead and made us sympathize with them! Nisha's character could have been hated by a lot of people if not done right. But you gave a strong background story and let us connect to her in a way, showed us that in this relation she is suffering as much, if not more, as Arnav. Because Arnav doesn't have to compromise much, but Nisha has to bend to shantivan's rules and Arnav's anger, and all the while live in Khushi's shadow, a woman she doesn't know much about, except that her fiance is still in love with her. Thank You so much! You get Nisha's character and even sympathize with her in contrast to Arnav! Yay! :D

Yes, Nisha is difficult to write not because of her character per se but because of her role as Arnav's fiance and the reaction that garners! Lol! Glad you are liking her! :)

I don't understand Nani's bullheadedness about Khushi, but I think a strong opposition was necessary for Arnav, so that he could overcome it and be with Khushi at all cost. But Arnav crumbled under the pressure (holding off judgement on this!). I applaud Khushi for walking away because until Arnav realizes that Khushi means as much, or if not more, as his family, Khushi would never have the stability she deserves.

True that. More on Nani-Arnav-Khushi later. :)

I don't know what Sharman had has done, or why Armaan and everyone hates Nisha so much, but I can see there is a lot of ways their story can go, and I can't wait to be a part of that journey!

*Bows* Welcome then! :D

My brain is kinda scrambled right now after reading that, and I don't know what I babbled about in the first 2 paragraphs, hopefully it makes sense!

It did. :)

PS: I miss my Ayaan, he is so much cuter, kinder, funnier, lovelier, and better at everything! Aynu, I miss you!😭 Come back soon! *puppy eyes* Please? You got your Ayaan and in a new avatar, didnt you? ;) :D

Originally posted by: kritz11

Wow, so Arnav and Sharman finally meet! I don't expect any blazing exchange between the two for now, at least from Arnav's side as he is right now least bothered about anything else.
But what I particularly liked was that for the first time Arnav was receptive to Nisha's feelings and this was because he could relate to the beautiful emotion of lost love. He caught it instantly in her eyes maybe because it is forever present in his eyes too. Sigh!
I am liking NiSh so far😊
Good one👍🏼

Originally posted by: Anisha_91

Just caught up. Gosh this is really intriguing...i'm loving it. I really wonder why nani dislikes Khushi so much?? can't wait to know. I loved the phone convo between Payal and Khushi and i loved the part where u wrote how she denies everything. Also the part where Nisha wears that saree similar to what Khushi had once worn and Arnav's reaction and emotions was brilliant. Loved it and the latest chapter was fab. Arnav was considerate to Nisha's tears. Brill update! Continue soon Rae x

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

Wow. Rae this chapter was just something else. It was so great. How you described Nisha at first when she came down changing her saree, the confident one that didn't care about anyone. Then when she went into the party and saw Sharman there, no felt him first then saw him. It was so good. Your described the emotion perfectly. How Nisha who was calm, composed and collected before had the look of a broken girl who fell in love and moreover what was great was that Arnav recognised this and he knows how he feels. Now I can't wait to see how Nisha see's Arnav and Khushi's confrontation.

There was not even a hint of arrogance, a hint of the strong will that she brandished ever so willingly...she was...looking broken, lost, pained, hurt and in love.

loved this it shows so much about them two. But I wasn't surprised that Arnav did his research on Nisha and found out about Sharman. Sharman thinks that Nisha told him so when Nisha finds out about that somehow, she may just have a blow up with Arnav about it for checking her background. Would it be bad of me to say I'm looking forward to it already?

"Take care of it..."

These words were wow. He was holding the coat but was talking about her. He still has feelings for her you can tell. But what intrigues me is what had happened in the past that has caused them to behave like this.

18 years down the line and still she was crying, craving, wanting.

Nothing had changed.

This was another great few lines. How she stayed crying wanting to be in some one's arms but those arms were taken away from her. I hope that sometime soon Arnav and Nisha talk about their past relationships and how they feel about them because honestly I think they would understand each other a whole lot better and could possibly see what they have to do next to make it right. All in all a great chapter once again. Loved the Sharman and Nisha scene. Sorry for the late comment.

wow. Is all I can say to your writing style


But coming to the story.
Omg. Arnav n Khushi are divorced , he is getting married to someone else. But the seer tourcher n pain he is going thru ... Hope to see Khusi's pov n where she is? ummm I only read 3 chapter is there any mire updates that I had missed. If so can u plezzz send me the link. Or pm me your next update I would live to read it further.
First page said part 1-13. But I could only read up to part 3. Than it dosent go any further. Plz send me the link if there is any
Thaks a ton love[/QUOTE

Originally posted by: curledup

okay! sorries! really sorries 😕 its all my exam's faults, and my fault *Scrunches nose* I loved this update it in itself said so much about three of the main characters

Sharman - This man clearly feels guilty and still loves her he sounded so adorable too me when he was speaking to her. I loved his character here frankly speaking I loved the entire chapter, I loved how you conveyed all of their feelings within the chapter, it was b e a u t i f u l l y constructed and marvelously told! I loved it.

I loved it when Arnav made her go change, I loved it when Nisha fought back and loved it when they all met at the party! I loved it..there is no question <3

And the end - my heart went out for her! it was so sad, her whole life she has had to dance to someone elses commands..I feel for her 😆

also Khushi and Arnav are not going to meet till later later? 😕 are you trying to kill me? 😆 how late are we talking here? like married late? 😉 or sangeet late? 😉

-Aashifa

Originally posted by: kashforlifex

Just caught up with this and can I say it is beautiful! It's so heart-wrenching and so complex, I love it! I usually like happy, light-hearted stories but I thought let's try a dark and sad FF and it's beautifully painful. I love how you describe each character's complex life in so much detail, revealing information slowly using the flashbacks. I like Nisha, liked her from the first chapter :) I'd really like to know what happened between her and Armaan. And I'd like more of ArHi flashbacks and more about Khushi!

And obvs, Arnav is my favourite in this one :D

Originally posted by: Shruti21

baap re...

i'm so super confused...

i read all the parts in 1 go...

then also i was wondering ho kya raha hai...??

but i must say you write beautifully...

different different...

but this story is seriously very complicated...

i hope i will get something after you update few parts...

hehehe...