Apne MG My first fanfiction

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey everyone so this is my FIRST fanfiction ever i tired my best is you guys think its good and i i should continue please let me know i'll be more then happy to continue it.

he story is about about a family that falls apart but they learn to live without each other and how they come back together.

so here it is


Part 1

She was standing in the kitchen cooking breakfast. She was wearing a light pink and blue saree , her hair has put up in a bun and was covered by the pallu of her saree. She dressing sense may be a bit old fashioned but she didn't care. She suddenly felt warm hands creeping around her waist. " Maan app utte gaye." she whispered."hmm aur geet tumhe kitni baar bola hai ke apna kehal rakha karo" said Maan in a low voice. Geet picked up a towel , cleaned her hands and turned around. She put her hands on her shoulder as her pulled her closer his eyes became moist and a tear slid down his check . she slowly moved her hands to his checks and wiped away the tear." Maan ager meri kismet mein brain tumors se marna likha hai tou.." before she could continue Maan smashed his lips on her. They had a long passionate kiss. They pulled apart when they left they needed are. Both were breathing hard, Geet's chest was heaving up and down. Maan moved his head forward and rested his forehead against Geet's . " Maan you need to stop worrying about me the doctor told us na everything will be fine after the surgery, they will remove the tumor everything will be fine and I will be healthy again". Said Geet in a low voice yet confidently. Maan gave a week smile. " mamma mamma mamma." Maan slowly moved away wiping his tears and letting Geet go. "mamma papa good morning" Said Maahi in her babyish voice. Maan and Geet smiled at there cute little 3 year old daughter and Geet picked her, they both kissed kissed her check wishing her a good morning. She wiggled a bit Geet put her down and she ran away to her bua's room. " Maan tum dinning table per chalo and nashta lekar atti hoon aur han Arohi aur Daddima ko be bolalo I need to talk everyone." Said Geet as she started to finsh off what she was doing before. Maan left after asking her if everything was ok she nodded her and told him to goo.

At the dinning table Geet served everyone everyone food and sat down beside Maan to eat herself. She made Maahi sit comfortably in her lap and started feeding her. "Geet beta tumhe sabe kay bat karne teh" asked Dadimaa in a concerned voice. As Dadima finshed asking Maan looked over at her and Arohi looked up at her aswell. Geet put Maahi down and she ran off. She looked up and saw 3 blank faces looking at her. Since she found out she had a brain tumor everyone was depressed and sad no one left along for even a second. Geet started "Dadimaa Arohi Maan main cahhatii ke mein apni surgery jaldse jald karalo. Kal jab hum(meaning her and Maan) doctor se milne kay lia gay e the , he told me that Indias best neurologist is coming to Delhi today so I was thinking I go meet him today." " Theek hai Geet, tum theek ho ajo iske ilva hume aur kuch nahi chaie (need)" said Dadima , and she got up and left to her room. " Geet mein apni meetings cancel karva deta hoon and we'll go." Said Maan as he pulled out his phone and started dailing Adi's number when Geet stoped him and said" Maan no need for that I'll take Arohi with me, Tum fikar mat karoo" "Haan bhaiya I'll go with bhabi and don't worry we'll come straight to the office after coming from the hospital" said Arohi to her old brother assuring him at everything was going to be fine. Maan Sadly left for office while Geet and Arohi left for the hospital.

On the other hand at Sanjivani Delhi a handsome 24 year old walked in to the hospital walking down the halls making his way to the nursing station. All the ladies were just staring at him and were blown away by his sexiness. He walked to the nursing satiation " Hey sexy" he said to the nurse with a wink he picked up his file and left to go meet the senior doctor. The nurse who was at the nursing station was flabbergasted by what just happened and almost fainted. The handsome man knocked on the doctors cabin door and went inside " Welcome to Sanjivani Delhi Dr.Armaan". yep it was the one and only Dr. Armaan. " it's me plessure being here Dr. Malhotra anyways how can I help you " asked Armaan in the politest way possible." Well Dr.Armaan we have a patient with a brain tumor and we need to operate on her as soon as possible heeres her case file I'll show you cabin and she should be coming to meet you any time soon." Armaan nodded his head in agreement and followed Dr.Malhotra to his cabin. Armaan didn't bother reading the case file he just sat there remembering his past in Delhi and how is brother kicked him out of the house. His chain of thoughts were broken when he heard a knock on the door. 2 women walked in they couldn't see Armaan as his chair was facing towards the wall. The 2 ladies took a few more steps into the cabin Armaan still never turned around " Je doctor jab" said Geet in her sweet innocent voice. Armaan slowly stood up when he thought he heard that voice somewhere. Armaan slowly turned around was shocked beyond his wits. Geet and Arohi also were shocked. All 3 of them had moist eyes. Geet slowly make her way up to Armaan her hands slowly went up to touch his to maker sure she wasn't dreaming. Before any of them could say anything Armaan immediately pulled Geet into a hug and all that came out of his mouth was " BHABI" he closed his eyes and tears just flowed down his cheeks.


So guys if you like it and want me to continue ill give guys a character sketch and contiue with the ff. please do comment

Edited by KASHDJ - 13 years ago

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