Burning in your Love (Parts 14 to 19)

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Beautiful update. romance on Teri Meri. wow. awsum.

thnx for the pm. =D

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dumas

@dumas

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

awesome update loved that he is redoing the past loved how he got the sari and brought her to the office in his arms loved it very cute loved her description of him and her him playing her like a musician with his favorite instrument loved the update very beautiful thanks for the pm wait for the continuation

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

That was beautiful love the way he is trying to make up for all of his wrong doings.

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

wow amazing part smita it was beautiful and the song's lyrics were very sync with the dance ang their passion and romance reached new heights that was an awesome step taken by arnav to take her to AR and set up a stage for teri meri dance lovely sight really ...i enjoyed it dear

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meeyaa

@meeyaa

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

i wish this full FF is picturised on Sarun and we get to see it on screen...

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

I just came across your story and what can isay other than i LOVED it...

It's light, it's romantic, it's so in tune with the show/characterization... And i love the way you present your chapters with all those pictures in the story and your descriptions...

I enjoyed reading the way you described their little dance in the latest chapter...

And flirty Arnav is my favorite Arnav and you did a fab job with him and Khushi too...Their shy romance is totally addictive..

I like how you're going back to all the place where there are bad memories and writing new ones... Kash shown mai be aisa kuch hota..

Keep writing

Cheers.

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kajal

@kajal620

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

wow...awesome way u have told the dance

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Firebolt
I just came across your story and what can isay other than i LOVED it...

It's light, it's romantic, it's so in tune with the show/characterization... And i love the way you present your chapters with all those pictures in the story and your descriptions...

I enjoyed reading the way you described their little dance in the latest chapter...

And flirty Arnav is my favorite Arnav and you did a fab job with him and Khushi too...Their shy romance is totally addictive..

I like how you're going back to all the place where there are bad memories and writing new ones... Kash shown mai be aisa kuch hota..

Keep writing
Cheers.

very true.. i too wish the show was something like this..

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asrksr

@asrksr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

You are an amazing writer smita. Really enjoyed it. Continue soon.

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arnavluva

@arnavluva

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Omg Smita that was just awesome 😊 😊 Every touch every look and the intensity was just so heartfelt and that to my favourite song Teri Meri 😊 😊 Very beautifully written can't wait for the next part. Thanks for PM :) x