ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th2: Ch 17-20, Epilogue

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Res! :D

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That was a beautiful note Meera! :) And its nice to hear from the writer about their muse.
You can count on me to be a reader for ur prequel as well as sequel whenever you publish them! :)

As for the epilogue. It was sweet and beautiful. I loved Aditi's reaction! Especially these lines - "Ummm, Khushi Marry me. It's right thing to do. Long term benefits outweighs short term costs" LOL

Loved the moment Anjali and Shyam shared. The story ended and Anjali finally found closure. Nicely done :) As for Arnav and Khushi. Happily ever after indeed! :)

Definitely looking forward to more works from you! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

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You left me with a smile while I expected a bucket load of tears as this came to an end...I am sad but happy too because they all were happy. :)

I loved this story for the reason that there were no larger than life bad guys...they were all human, weak, strong, intense, passionate, guilty, angry, wistful...

And I love that you are filmi cos I am too and the filmi bits in your update touch my heart and make me smile and smirk and wink! ;) :D

Great great story, Meera and it ended as simply and beautifully as it went along with sweet moments shared between everyone! :)

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sRistee

@crazy44

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Posted: 13 years ago

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here
wilL be back in the evening to comment! ! :) i am busy with sm work !!i hope u dont mind ;)

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meera ! that was baeutiful !! perfectly done :)

i esp loved this diaglouge said by aditi "Ummm, Khushi Marry me. It's right thing to do. Long term benefits outweighs short term costs" hahaha LOL that was really funny 😆

i still cant get over the fact that it ended :( but you ended it beautifully meer !!i still have a huge smile seeing them !!

and anjalis and shyams eye contact that was so soothing !!

Once a long time back, two fates had been torn apart by her selfish act. Today, in a very small way, she helped reverse that wrong'... that was beautifulll!!

andthe note was socute !! and same pinch dear, i am one hell of a filmy person !! hehe ! i loved every bit of this story !! it was sweet and romantic and emotional !! 😊

and ill be waiting for your another piece :)

thank you for writing such a beautiful piece <3

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asulpyaar

@asulpyaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

sooo lovely ,, please PM when you update today plz plz plz ❤️

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indy12

@indy12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

this was brilliant! missing it already 😭

u are a great writer! keep it up! it's a talent to cherrish 👏

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blurey

@blurey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

wowww...

compltly in lv wid d story:)

hatts off 2 u fr wrting such a fab story:)

must say u r an awsm writr

plzzz do cntinue such work in future

egrly waitng for some new ff frm ur pen

god bless

take care:)

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appy

@appy_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

Meera!!!

Train chhoti nahin... Hum sab train mein hi hain! Warna itna mazaa kaise aata? Pakka train mein hi hain! :P :D

Ummm, Khushi Marry me. It's right thing to do. Long term benefits outweighs short term costs"

LOLed at that! Can truly imagine Arnav doing that! But you have given us such a sweet story with a totally romantic Arnav..!

And the chapter was really good. The fairy tale has ended. The princess and the prince lived happily ever after.. Saying their respective What thes and Devi Maiyas!

And now, for the thank you note! Man, you truly moved me.. You're too sweet for giving us an evil Shyam, a mean Anjali and a bitchy Lavanya.

But, even if you did, I think you'll do a terrific job! Looking forward to hearing from you again with an new FF or SS.. Until then, keep reading mine! :P

No, no.. take rest. You deserve a break! :D

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

That was awesome end to the chapter...anjali who caused the rift between them has tied up them together forever...

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

awesome ending...soo cute n sweet...

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

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Posted: 13 years ago

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oh just the perfect final touch! i dont want to elaborate more bcos i think it might ruin the beauty of ur writing. read ur authors' note too. I would love to read more of ur works- no matter if they Arshi or Anjali or Aditi. All that matters is we knw that u are a talented writer. btw dont hav any hitches if it would be liked - actually i'm not sure if u've read Marybarton's Avenging Angel (on IF) now she is writing Anjali-Imad's story and is much welcomed by many readers. so go ahead👍🏼