FF: Fate-Mate Updated Part 19

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tmowla

@tmowla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

awesome story di. when is the next part coming??

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Wonderful Fabulous Beautiful!

Remember I said something about being in a dream while reading Fate-Mate? Well, this update changes it all! It's more like reality this time... The way she cried after seeing him for 2 whole weeks; probably fighting with herself how to talk to him, wanting to talk to him and still not talking with him... Even if you didn't word that turmoil for us, I could feel it during that conversation she had with Mrs Zubin...

And then the little scene between ASR and Mrs Zubin; well that was adorable for some reason!

And then the durgah... I have never seen something this complicated to be this simple! Seriously! There were no fights, no arguments, no nothing! Just one question - How could you think about me like that? And just one answer - I'm sorry!

Sooo reealll, this time!

Awesome update! Continue soon! Will be waiting!

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Divya

@hakunamatata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

you actually gave us that bbbiiiggg an update...

wooow...thanks a billion ton for that :D :D :D :D :D

it was superb...khushis antics were mins blowing...

from the dancing to the proposing to the gorgeous bride to the "its not like he is your boss" to the getting ready...it was all so KHUSHI...her name was all over that antic...

and ASR was still cool about it..wow...he took care of her inspite of being THE ASR...love it...

he finally decides to speak to her...a sigh of relief.. :D :D :D :D :D

and khushi breaking down in his arms at the end...icing on the cake...

cheers :D :D :D

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#774

hey! I just caught up with it. Its amazing. I dont know how i missed this fic. I just love the way khushi blabbers. It looks so real. And arnav..he is answering it patiently. Last update made me laugh to the core. Khushi's antics were hilarious. Arnav patiently dealt with it. That was too sweet. Finally the air of misunderstanding is clear. Plz pm me when u update.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

awesome loved ittt alottt...

thnks for pm😃

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sooryalekshmi

@sooryalekshmi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

loved it so much yaar...
It was really a beautiful update

The misunderstanding is cleared.
Mrs.Zubin I love you.
I did mention her role like this in my last comment. I am glad I was right..

And Arnav., DEAR you are too good.
I wish I too had a friend like him.

Even in the end he didn't let her complete herself thinking that was too personal..

He is such a gentleman

And Khushi???????????

I didn't know how I controlled myself reading her antics...🤣

Arnav; HATS OFF yaar. You patiently Dealt with everything. If I was in your place I would have gone mad

And the last line was just brilliant

She collapsed into his chest and buried her crying self in his chest, hugging him………

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kethgauthami1

@kethgauthami1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#777

You are really a very very very good writer i enjoyed all your parts till 15 and i m totally in love with this ff...Actually i thank "Appyindy" for suggesting to read ur ff...Because of her only i am in total love with this ff

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purplepixie

@purplepixie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#778

awww!!!Our arnie boy is so sweet and khushi as usual stupid and impulsive but cute!! Thank god Gloomy and Tsunami are back!!!!

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lipika20

@lipika20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#779

and... what yaar
please post the next part soon
its darn hard to wate for it to publish
post it sooon

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#780

One thing i must say...MADE FOR EACHOTHER... First she stopped him when he wanted to say what she did that night...and now he stopped her what she wanted to say to him...i think ASR watched loads of Hindhi movies from that fate full day he got ristha for him from Khushi herself, and learnt we have to stop in the middle if some one was revealing a secret to them which will clear their misunderstandings...

A big Hug to MRS.Zubin Aunty...for clearing the MU between Khsuhi and ASR...other wise...ASR might have watched each and every bollywood movie from black and white to till 2012 movies...So So So ...Khushi Praposed ASR...and he accepted her marriage praposal...😍😍 made him dance to her tunes...she danced every where except on his head...🤣🤣🤣,even kicked him out of his bedroom...beechara...kudi guest bangaye...unihi gharme...🤣

To the point ASR is so much in love with her...isnt he...otherwise the man who is serious and reserved was patiently handling Khushi and her tantrums...and tried his best to fullfill Khushi wishes ...he even confessed he never leave her...Isnt he kept his word...by staying away from her as she wanted him to stay away...he was worried to death when she used to see him and shed silent tears...

Atlast he came to know what Khushi was imagining...thank to lord ...they cleared their MU...hope Khushi gets a nice job...

Kammy waiting for the update sweety...😛😛😛😛😛😛