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arhilover55

@arhilover55

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

wow..nice update..is khushi going to kiss him?

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berdine

@berdine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Khushi: I……..my……….heart………is………rac…..ing………is…….yours?

ASR: Gloomy……..your heart's racing because you took high dosage medicine………now……let's go……🤣

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Koeli

@Koeli

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+ 15

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Are you serious?

You stopped there?

😲😲😲

Please dont give a heart attacked by making khushi pass way in the next update...i so wish for a kiss 😳 atlease a peck if not a proper kiss 😍

Awesome writing dear.

Meye kya bolu tujhe...keep it up.

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 15

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: GoGreen
So Mrs.Zubain ka chutti honewali hai permanently...i say Zubin aunty ki chutti...Now my dought...who is sick now...and who is taking care of who???Some one was hellbent to take care of a certain sick person as the person was sure the other was so sick and need help...but now beechare sick one is more healthy than the supposed caretaker of the sick person...and even seducing the so called sick person...now will their so called 72 hiur friendship survive this acid test...will the so called caretaker for the night of the sick person of the house ever able to meet the eyes ...Will their friendship survive this ACID TEST...

Lolz even i am thinking in the same lines...

I hope they dont end up doing GET OUTS in 72 hours...looking at the caretaker...she just needs a push 🤬. Caretaker hui behoos...

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magyc88

@magyc88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Nooo how could you do this to us????????????

💔

How could you leave the story at this point????

😲

I woudn't be able to sleep up untill your next update!!!!!!!!!

😉

LOVED IT

❤️

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

hello dear! i just wanted to say that i just read all of your story and i loved it! i hope you can pm me updates? the way you wrote it had me glued to the screen! i would love for you to send me updates!

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

loved it dear...it was awsuuum n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

luved it...
n u cant end d chapter at dis point...
plzzz...
update asap...
hope arnav get to know dat khushi's other half is he himslf n khushi doesn't knw it...
arnav to bht jyada khush ho jayega...
but plzzz update soon...

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Fantastic update! and wht a cliffhanger! please update soon.. :)

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#620

APPY/PARO...PARO jaan...so u think same like me...thanchu thanchu...So now if they accidentally chumban karle...Khushi image infrotn of ASR will be down the drain...as they say when we r drowzy or high real self will comeout...so if she kisses im...he may think she too was like other girls back of him ...so me waiting to read updates...I will pray self appointed caretaker wont fail in her job even she is high on medicene...Beechara ASR...cant even enjoy his status as sick person...what a pity...