IPKKND: It's Not Right - Thread 3: Ch 34-41

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Just read the last 2 updates...ohh and am so loving this story...the light moments that they sahred in both the updates were just amazing...cant wait to read the next part..thanks for the PM

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TrueMuskaan

@TrueMuskaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Sooo sorry for the late reply! I had my inbox opened for ages but kinda forgot about it lol, sorry.

Back to the update, the ending was ☺️. And I honestly thought that Arnav had given the food to the hungry kids! How did he get the food to the lake so fast?

And LOL at Khushi's innocence when she sang tu mera hero lol

Update soon!

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

i just read ur ff:its not right, awesome updates, excellent way of presenting, pls update soon

i finished some of ur os,ss those were completed, khudos to ur brains

pls could u pm me further updates if possible

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Sumi

@mumz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

great update...Hope you are well now...look forward to your stories

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sarra0

@sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Such a sweet update, aw she baked him a cake and he pretended to give it away, hers was a nice reaction. She can't celebrate her birthday until she gets over wat happened, I'm happy they have had a conversation. tellin the families well they kind of already no, it will b interesting to c how they go about it.

hope you r feeling better.

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Oh man!! That was awesome! Especially the is this mine line!! Kya Baath hain!!!

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renee

@renee27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Ohhh great... loved the update... love this caring, understanding, naughty Arnav 😊

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Loved the update...cute, sweet, emotional, and the last part was uff, Hot...

I love the way this story is progressing...waiting for the next part

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

damn that was hot!!

I love the endearment!! I love him showing is love so visibly!1

this all excites me!

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Aparna

@-aparna-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Ur is first index m completing shuheda aftr my exams lol

fro d first tym i liked abhi for lettin arnav know bot khushi and her father and their dates r awesome :D

add me to ur list fro now onwards
:p