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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatz77

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ZARA OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
i cant believe i commented first wohooo !!! ... n i actually liked the update first 2 :):) ... im actually really happy n im smiling lyk sooo much promise 😃 Yay! glad you commented first!😊
alright then ... the update was frikkin fantastic ... YAY!!!
awww love the way arnav was caring 4 khushi n getting her ready n putting on the makeup on 4 her ... thats shooo sweet ... arnav is such a caring husband ... khushi's vry lucky 2 hve him :D
Aww so glad you liked arnav's thoughtfulness.
n awww love the khushi n aman connection ... its shooo sweet yaar ... n awww aman can do anyfin 4 khushi ... n LOL khushi was proper goin out of the apartment lyk a prisoner while aman as hell scared hehe 😆 yes i feel bad for aman in a way but meh i find it funny, lol
n haha khushi kept spkin in the car ride 😆 ... usual khushi.😆
n when aman n khushi came bck ... things were gettin intense n stuff when arnav started screemin but then khushi fainted n arnav came bck 2 being vry caring 😊 ... intense and caring scenes are fun to write. thank you.😊
n then the airport part n jet part was soo frikkin cute n romantic 😃 ... eeep 😳 thank you !!!
n all the picz were perfect :):):) *hugs* they take some time to find lol.
also the precap seems baree interesting hw arnav aint hvin sex with khushi until she becomes fully better n lol khushi was quite feisty in the precap ... but plzzz tell me khushi aint gonna leave .. she does something more...um...khushi, LOL😉
... do continue soon n thnxx a lot 4 the pm sweety 😊
love u loadz

P.S: the begging gift was sooo nyc n wow !!! ... thnk u 😃 welcome !!!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zara-


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thnxx 4 the gift sweety
loved it a lot
cant wait till thursday
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey zara!
It was in so many days that i could actually comment early like on the 2nd page after the update. Yippe:) i knw i'm really mad.

The update was freakingly awesome. Bechara cute and sweet arnav . He cares so much for her. Khushi is lucky girl man. ! I wish even my hubby would be like this. Sry cming back to the update.

Arnav woke her up, made her eat , got her ready n nt only that he did her make up n made her hair . Aww... Thats so sweet. Such a loving hubby. Nw to i really want one like him.:) ;)

He instructed her so firmly nt to move out of the room n even sent aman. But khushi to khushi h but that's one of the reasons i luv her. Aman bechara. But i really was amazed the way they escaped n khushi was able to do her mischeif of tying their laces. Agar arnav ne tabhi pakad liya hota to kya hota . But thex escaped so happy.

Aman would hv thought anyways pakde to jana hi tha. The way khushi entered n saw arnav would be just so funny. Arnav was angry like hell. It was smart of sj to take aman n move out of the room.

He is concerned as well as angry. So he scolded khusi facing the door. Hey he really turned overprotective but that's sweet.

Khushi was so cute to bring candies for them. Arnav really doesnt mind PDA . He so sweetly carried her into the jet. Hey the jet is so awesome. I liked it so much.
I really loved the interiors n the decor akhir choice kiski h.

Khushi gave that candy to sj that was sweet n his reaction too. The whole scene was awesome.

Arnav is so concerned abt her health . N that shows in the whole update n the last scene.

The precap was really interesting. Khushi wants him n she's telling him n he's cntrlling it just for her health. But khushi seems to be really pissed of nw. Lets see wat happens.
Update soon.

And ya best of luck for ur exams. May u pass out with flying colours.:) .
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Posted: 13 years ago
bechara aman
i know she will do something like this when she asked aman
in that rush also she tied their laces hahahahaha
i got candy for u so forgive me 🤣🤣🤣🤣
awesome update
great precap
will wait for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

heheh poor Aman he was scared as hell! while khushi was so exciting totally not caring Arnav will be damn angry!
the shoelace part was hilarious🤣
Khushi sometimes is just like a kid😛
ohhh and not to forget SJ! lol
SJ + Khushi = double fun... :D
Arnav is such a caring husband! always taking care of khushi😍
overall a great update!👍🏼
p.s: glad to hear your feeling better.
p.s.s: good luck with the upcoming exams!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arhi-fan

Hey zara!
It was in so many days that i could actually comment early like on the 2nd page after the update. Yippe:) i knw i'm really mad. no its cool. really glad i could red ur comment early.😊

The update was freakingly awesome. Bechara cute and sweet arnav . He cares so much for her. Khushi is lucky girl man. ! I wish even my hubby would be like this. Sry cming back to the update. yes i also wish that i will get a hubby like him tooo😳

Arnav woke her up, made her eat , got her ready n nt only that he did her make up n made her hair . Aww... Thats so sweet. Such a loving hubby. Nw to i really want one like him.:) ;) hehehehehe😳

He instructed her so firmly nt to move out of the room n even sent aman. But khushi to khushi h but that's one of the reasons i luv her. Aman bechara. But i really was amazed the way they escaped n khushi was able to do her mischeif of tying their laces. Agar arnav ne tabhi pakad liya hota to kya hota . But thex escaped so happy. khushi being the mischief one got them both in trouble lol. yh. it was fun writing that scene. thank you.

Aman would hv thought anyways pakde to jana hi tha. The way khushi entered n saw arnav would be just so funny. Arnav was angry like hell. It was smart of sj to take aman n move out of the room. arnav furious volcano is intense and scary to write aswell, LOL.

He is concerned as well as angry. So he scolded khusi facing the door. Hey he really turned overprotective but that's sweet. arnav being stern in this part made it more fun to write too. thank for the compliment.😳

Khushi was so cute to bring candies for them. Arnav really doesnt mind PDA . He so sweetly carried her into the jet. Hey the jet is so awesome. I liked it so much. yep everyones dream jet.
I really loved the interiors n the decor akhir choice kiski h. LOL thank you!!😳

Khushi gave that candy to sj that was sweet n his reaction too. The whole scene was awesome. yh SJ aman and khushi moments are the funny ones. thanks for liking them.

Arnav is so concerned abt her health . N that shows in the whole update n the last scene.
The precap was really interesting. Khushi wants him n she's telling him n he's cntrlling it just for her health. But khushi seems to be really pissed of nw. Lets see wat happens. uhhhuh!😃
Update soon.

And ya best of luck for ur exams. May u pass out with flying colours.:) .thank you!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zara-



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hey thanx for liking my comment!! And i liked my gift very much!! Waiting for the coming thursday!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ur precap ROFL sexy kushi is turned on and ur update loved it but Really the shoelaces ROFL i would have never thought abt it zara u r naughty girl u must like doing these kind of pranks LOL loved ur update
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG.. KHUSHI N HER ANTICS.. IF SHE HAS TO DO IT, SHE WILL... N POOR ARNAV WONDERIN HOW IS HE CONTROLLING HIS HORMONES.. LOL.. PRECAP SOUNDS SEXY... TC :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
K sneaking out and taking aman to explore new places...gosh i can understand the plight of arnav, who must have been damn scared not finding K...sometimes her childishness gives a scare to arnav...but then how can he stay angry on her for long...😳...it was a very cute update which showed their bond and loved the care and concern that they hold for each other...

simply marvelous

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