Kria and Rey FF (Ch 2 Part 20 Pg 138)

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Amazing update dear. I just love this one.

Love the firt part when Kria was comforting him when Rey was crying for his dad.

Also like the fortune cookie part specially zat of Rey which reads 'The precious part of your life just inches away from you'.

My god their romance is getting hotter and hotter day be day.

Kria was a little flustered .. " Yeah .. No .. no .. this model is beautiful "
He nuzzled in the crook of her neck " The one I have has no match" .Loved this line.

Will surely wait for the next one

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

awesome part...

it was superrb...loved the way rey and his dad expressed there love and kriyansh part was damm hot ...loved it very much

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

do i really need to say sumthing the last 2 updates were that sensous n hot that i have read it twice but still cant resist

cuming up to this recent update

luvd the way Rey cares for his father

their luv for each other is so pure

they both understand each other so well

their romance in the office...AWWW!!!!

poor Rey wenever plans to romance there's either a phone ringing or sumone knocking at the door

i luved those lineswen Rey says:" I am the boss here .. I can do whatever I want "

Rey sarcastically " I was just having it .." he eyed Kria and looked at her curves and wet his lips " I was just having my dessert when you interrupted me "

its a pleasure to read it

thnx for the pm n do update asap as i m waiting for it eagerly

Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Thanx for updating it . . . . Totally a surprise . . . . . I was expecting a long gap 😛
omg . . . His father is hospitalised 😲
rey loves his father but unable to show his feelings . . Afterall he is a man . . . They are too weak to show their feelings ...
but kriya helped him to take a step forward . . & he did that. . . & saw his father happy 😃
ahem ahem . . . . Fortune cookies already started their effect . . . . . Laptop kharab hona to bahana tha 😉
her look had that effect on him that he did'nt care about the place either 😆 . . . & there the hawtt & sensous part goes on . . . ☺️
gosh! . . . He called it lunch & dessert . . . . Itne me to manager bhi samajh gaya hoga ☺️
kriya imitated him so well . . . 🤣 . . . Ab to uski khair nahi . . . 😉

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

i am speechless it was dam hawt i just loved it

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Sheetal Rajput

@sheetal_arsha

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

you are a ⭐️

It was out of this world...aww it was hawwt..!

please update soon and thnxx for the pm..!

loved this part Rey sarcastically " I was just having it .." he eyed Kria and looked at her curves and wet his lips " I was just having my dessert when you interrupted me "

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Its awesome...luved the way kriya adviced rey to hug his dad...n kriyansh romance in the office was hot and sensous...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

d update was hawt and awesome:-)

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

tottally cool woww man rey so rmntic i cn imagine kriya imitatingg him lol plz update next 1 2dayy

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sujana

@sujana9

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

evvrytime u update i am speechleess yaar u write amazingly well awesum dear can i know ur name
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" I am the Boss here , I can do anything I want " i love des lines boss hahah 🤣

Manager : " Hope you had your lunch "

Rey sarcastically " I was just having it .." he eyed Kria and looked at her curves and wet his lips " I was just having my dessert when you interrupted me des lines were tho bang on
love u for wrting ddis awesum ff

thnx for d pm

update soon

nd i was jumping wen i saw ur pm

wen is ur nxt update ????????