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Posted: 13 years ago
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destiny has its own way






kriya was crying to the worst...she closed her mouth tight with her hands and cried hard...she just sat leaning on the counter and was crying...

here rey was madly searching her...taani was very tensed and prayed they shouldn't meet( taani is just a new entry...mai use swayam ki behan nahi banana chahti)

they almost searched the whole venue...rey already had tears of loosing the chance to meet and talk to her...finally they headed towards the last left place...CANTEEN...

she heard foot steps ...she quickly got up ...cleaned her face with her dupatta and turned her back to them as if taking water...

finally the gang entered and rey muttered ...kriya...slowly...all of them saw at rey as he nodded that she was it...

neha: kriya...

she called out...first kriya decided not to turn but it would make them suspecious ...so she took a glass of water took a sip of it and made herself once again to make a fake image and turned with full attitude...

rey just stood there taking in the image of his love...

but someone was alerted ...and it was none other than swayam...he saw her eyes which were red now...how can he see her lyk dis so he instantly moved to her...


sw: kriya tum theek toh...

he moved towards her when she stopped him by showing her palm...she knew...once he came near her she would pour her heart out which she didnt want...

k: stay away swayam...dont dare mere paas ane ki...i hate loosers ...

she looked away with aatitude...

neha: neha not believing ...kriya telling swayam this all...how kriya...woh toh tumhara best frnd haina...


kr: oh shut up filmy queen...ye aur mera best frnd...lemme tell u its a pj ...poor joke baby...


rey was watching all this...

r: agar aisa hi hai toh yaha kyun aayi ho?????😡

kr: excuse me mr. mujhe tumhe explanation dene ki zaroorat nahi...mai jaha chahun wahan jaungi...

r: zaroorat hai tumhe ...tumhe meri saari sawalon ki jawab deni padegi...do u really dnt feel anything 4r me...kya mera tere paas hona bilkul affect nahi karta...


by saying this he went close to her...

( just lyk when he says...agar tumhe ye batadun na ki ladke kya karsakte hai toh kisiko muh dikaneki laayak nahi rahogi...)

she leans back...but controls her emotions and says with that attitude...

k: bilkul nahi...


r: BUT Y??????????????😡

by saying this he beat the glass on the counter table ...thus a large piece went onto his palm...


all: rey...!!!!!!!!!!!

kriya was shocked ...what just happened in two seconds?????????


sw: rey haat de...


he took his hand and pulled the piece out as rey winced in pain...this was enough to bring the hyper kriya...after all he is her love...she just cant see him bleeding...

k: vicky dekh kya rahe ho????/ first aid lao fool...😡

she shouted...first vicky pouted as she called him fool but soon rushed to bring first aid to his best buddy's hand...

she took rey's hand in her and started blowing air...all were astonished at her reaction...now she was crying...soon in 2 mins vicky is back ...she literally pulled the first aid box and was busy in taking the cotton and dipping it in antiseptic...he was just seeing her...the way she gets hyper ...he thought she doesnt really ditched her...now no talking ...he just want to know the truth...so he played alog...


she turned quickly ...took his hand in hers but he pulled back...she looked at him confused...

r: jo mujhe ditch karte hai unse help lena mujhe pasand nahi...

k: anger evident in voice...rey haat dijiye...

r: y do u care ...just go to hell...mujhe nahi karvani first aid...he shouted but the next second he was shocked ...


yeah he got a big blow...it was even more hard than the rose day one's/...he starres at her with shock...

what did she just do?????

she was cleaning the wound when he winsed ...instantly she pulled her hands back and looked at his hand in fear...tears rolled down teribly...slowly took it once again and now by continuously blowing air she cleaned the wound...rey was just lost in her...she quitely finished the bandage sobbing...he slowly cupped her face...

"sach kya hai bata bhi do ...i will take it...but ye mujhse nahi hoga...plzz"he said ...he is on a verge to cry...


this was it...finally she broke down crying loud...and slid down and sat on the floor...rey too kneeled in front of her...she suddenly hugged him tight and cried to the worst...finally rey pulled back and looked at her straight into her eyes...


r: baatcutter...


all: wat???????(- swayam)


r: wo wo...kuch nahi...kriya kriya hai...

sw: arey arey jhoot mat bol baatcutter bulata haina use...


all: baatcutter???????????????


sharon was the first to burst out laughing...


sh: rey aur koi naam nahi mila kriya keliye???????


rey: arey meri kriya ki chod...baatcutter toh waise bhi acha naam hai teri jo naam rakha hai na swayam ne...

sw: arey rey wo sab ab kyun???????

sh: meri naam???????kya hai rey...


r: siren!!!!!!!!

he said and all laughed hard...sharon glared at swayam who was looking down...

sh: swayam...tum ruko baad mei dekhti hun tujhe...abhi kriya se baat hojane do...tab dikhati hun siren kaise bhajti hai


kriya immediately grabbed reys hands ...he looked at her...he understood what she wanted to say...

r: haa...mission completed...*wink*


k: * excited* sachi ??????


r: muchi ...


both : dance ki kasm...and they both laughed hard ...but kriya ended crying again...

this tym rey wasnt gng to leave it...


r: baatcutter kya baat hai sach sach batao...

k: i missed u rey...

she againg hugged him...he was overwhelmed...indirectly she said she lyked him...infact love him...


r: baatcutter poori baat batao toh sahi,...uss din aisa kyun behave kiya tha??????//


k: rey wo...she stopped...

kya mai inhe kehdun??????nahi ...kya sochenge maa ke baare mei...sefish sochenge toh???/nahi maa selfish nahi hai...bas mereliye kuch jyaada hi protective hai...mai nahi bataungi...


r: baatcutter...kya hai??????bato...

k: rey us din maine jo bhi kaha sab jhoot tha...mujhe aap se door jaana pada toh maine socha agar aapko hurt karoongi toh aap mujhe bhool jayenge ...isiliye maine aisa kaha ...par plzz rey mai aapko reason abhi bata nahi sakti ...plzz galat...

she was cut...he placed finger on her lips...he hugged her tight...

r: bikul nahi...tumhe ye kehdiya ki wo sab jhoot tha bas ye khafi hai...im haapy...infact very haapy...ab mai kabhi tumhe rone nahi doonga and door bhi jane nahi doonga...



she pulled back immediately...

k: nahi rey ham saath nahi reh sakte...kabhi bhi nahi...*sob* and mujhe abhi nikal na hoga...shaam ko meri flight hai...plzz rey samjho...destiny has not decide us to be together...


rey was shattered but he cant see her lyk this so he cupped her face...

r: kisne kaha?????haa?????agar destiny nahi hoti toh aaj hum milte thodi hai??????? and haa tumhe abhi jaana hai na toh jao ...par wait karna ...mai jaldi hi aaunga tumhe milne...tumhe lene...

k: nahi rey...aap kuch nahi karoge...pehle hi maa ka impression kharab hai aap pe ...maine nahi chahti ki pehle ki tarah kuch ghadbad ho aur wo impression aur kharab hojaye...rey plzz accept it...hum mil nahi sakte waapis...plzz...move on...hume alag hona hi padega...

r: par kriya...

k: rey plzz...samjho meri baat ko...aap kuch nahi karogi...infact aapme se koi kuch nahi karega...mai abhi bohut face kar chuki hun aur nahi hota rey mujhse...aur tootne ki himmat nahi hai mujh me...plzz...aap sabko meri kasam koi kuch nahi karega...


rey was totally helpless...he finally nodded his head as the gang followed...

then suddenly swayam huggd kriya tight and cried hard...

sw: i missed u...

kriya: i missed u a lot...

soon all followed ...sharon too hugged her...she was very happy that she decided that with these memories she can lead her rest of life...atleast she got rid of the guilt...


all headed to her room ...they never wanted to waste even a second with her...taani was literally fuming...all were in kriyas room ...rey never left her...he was just hugging her frm behind as she was sitting b/w his legs//////...all the gang were chatting and all said how swaron came together...some teasing sessions of swaron and all...there were only two hours left...as the tym went on her grip on his hand increased...he in return hugged her more tight making her comfortable...finally she hugged him again bursting out...

k: rey kya hum kabhi saath nahi reh sakte??????


she sobbed...rey was also totally broken but he held himself ...he thought his friends could somehow help him but she has no one to share...she has to suffer alone...but he would never let it happen so he just blankly blurred out something to calm her down...


r: kriya ...dont worry ...hum zaroor milenge...we have destiny yaar...

k: agar nahi mile toh...
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r: arey tum tension mat lo...mai keh raha hun na ...tu aur mai hum hoke hi rahenge...hmm...agar tumhe ab bhi acha nahi lag raha hai toh kk...suno...7 yrs...ab hum 20 ki hai...mai tumhe 7 yrs ki gaurantee detahun...jab tak hum 27 ki honge tab tak hum mil chuke honge...kk??????

all looked at him with weird faces but kriya was elighted...

k: sach mei...

r: haan...he blurred something...

ye mai ne kya kehdiya??????/matlab ye hai kya?????maine aisa kaha kyun????????argghh!!! chal chodna rey ...wo ab khush toh rahegi...

k: thank u rey thank u so much for this...she hugged him tight...

k: par rey agar aisa nahi hua toh u have to move on in ur lyf...


r: u too...but y to fear ...im sure it will happen...


all were lyk...

WAT THE F**K REY!!!!!!!

he understood it by their expressions ...but he didnt bother coz his words brought a hearty smile on her face...


taani was full happy...

aise hoga thodi...aur waise bhi 7 saal...bohut tym hai mere paas ...mai rey ko aise hi meri pyaar mei gira sakti hun...

all went to the airport and it was her tym to leave...she hugged everyone...lastly rey...while hugging she said...enough 4r the gang to hear...


k: rey aapse milke mai bohut khush hun...meri poori sadness chali gayi...and mujhe aap pe poora trust hai...aapne kaha toh woh hoke hi rahega...kyun ki aaap kabhi galat nahi ho sakte aur jhoot toh kabhi bhol hi nahi sakte...mai aaj se tab tak haste haste wait karoongi aapkeliye...

r: haan par jab tak mai tumhe lene aaunga tab tak tu itni moti hona ki mai tumhe utha na paun...


k: rey agar aapko haati se hi apni life share karni hai toh zoo chale jaate...she cracked a pj...

r: im serious kriya ...haalat dekhi apni...agar aise hi rahogi na toh i swear mujhe bohut bura lagega and guilty bhi feel karoonga...

k: nahi rey...mai ache se rahoongi aaj se...

* announcement*

k: rey mujhe abhi jaana hai...mai aap ki wait karoongi ...bye ...jaldi aana...

rey hugged her tight 4r one last tym...she gave a peck on his cheek ...

k: aap hamesha se chahte the na ...toh ye aapki gift ...meri saari sadnesss door karne keliye...

all stood rooted to their places till her flight flew invisible to them...soon they found rey on his knees crying hard...sharon istantly hugged him...\

sh: rey ...rey chup hojao...

r: sharon...wo wo chaligayi...jab wo pehli baar gayi tab bhi inta dukh nahi hua...wo khush hai sharon...meri jhoot ki wajah se...maine use jhoota sapna dikhaya,,,,...itna trust karti hai mujhe...mujhe dar lag raha hai...agar mai such mei usse dobara mil nahi paaya toh?????? aur mai kuch kar bhi sakta...

he spoke in b/w his sobs...

swayam and vicky too joined to hug him...sooon the whole gang was in hug and all tried their level best to cheer him up...


there in the plane ...she was really very excited...may be her mad love 4r him made her believe her to all his * no proof * words...

she was looking outside the window with a wide smile plastered on her face...

as she went home smriti was surprised...kriya told everything as she doesnt want to kepp anything 4rm her mom now...

smriti was happy on one side that her daughter was happy but on the other side he was irritated of the fact that she met rey ...but she didnt say anything...4rm that day smriti saw a very different kriya...she has become very bubbly girl...always in excited mode ...kriya used to enjoy everymoment thinking that next moment he would be in front of her and take her with him and prison her in the cage of his love...


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star: dekhiye universe ji aapne sahi nahi kiya...kriya jhooti duniya mei reh rahi hai...aur aapne uss ladke ko aur dukh dediya...

universe ji: arey isme mai kya karoon?????? maine bas undonon ko milwaneki tayyari ki hai baaki sab unke haat mei hai ...meri haat mei toh kuch bhi nahi hai...isme mai kuch nahi karsakta...


star: woh toh pata hai...( sar castically)

universe ji: huh!!!!!!!!!!! hey prabhu bachalo mujhe isse ...

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so kaisa tha??????

acha ???

bura????????

bakwaas????????

agar chota ho toh plzz kuch mat kehna...iss part yahi tak de sakti thi...tum logon ko apna brain fry karna padega na ye soch ke ki aage kya hoga??????😆


he he im a sadist ...and im proud of it😛

kuch bhi ho ...lyk and cmnt...😳

pms on way...

luv u all😳

❤️deetha❤️










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Posted: 13 years ago

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Unres


Yupiee...first one to comment!!


Liked d way kriya kept d sadness in herself n showed d attitude...


I loved it when she showed her attitude avatar to swayam n Neha..


Im glad rey behaved lyk dat just to make her tell d truth..


Love was in d air...she cared for him which made him doubt her feelings for him...


Kriyaansh were really gud n rey was such a sweetheart he consoled her very well...


Rey lied to her not knowing anything for sure just to see her smile..


N then his breakdown after she went n she being happy for d destiny..


Smriti's response was expected..


Totally a fantabulous updt...


Loved it to d core..

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

bohut fast hai tu...
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Posted: 13 years ago
di don't worry main bhi saddist hun and same here proud to be a one...
pure update ke time there was a smile plastered on my face amazing...
except the taani part my smile turned into a frown... how despo!!!!!!!
isse koi aur nae mila ...
koi nae ab jaldi update karo na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...

loved how kriya thot of her mom...

and thappad yaayyy!!!! i mean acche purpose ke liye pada issliye...

u r a sadist... 7 saal baad hi toh milvaegi na...

loved how u showed rey caring for her especially her tightening her hold over his hand...

pata hai kriya sitting in b/w rey's legs and rey hugging her from behind is a common posture... u sue it in a lot of ur works...

chalo at least MU toh clear huyi ek tarah se...

waiting for next part...

and haan plz ab office wala...
Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update deetha.
this was awesome.
Kria loved the way how she composed herself to hide her feelings.
Rey knew her so well that his dance made her feel the pain.

It was nice to swee Kria's attitude towards them to hide herself but Rey ke samne thpo chathi nahi.
It was nice to see how much Rey affected her.
She was sweet that she didnt tell the reason ffor her exit but he comforted her.
The way thr hug got tighter with the passing moment to consol her Aww.

He just blutted out which means those were from universe ji so ab tho ho ke hi rahe ga.
tani ki bachi she is gonna get from all of us if she even tries to see Kriyaansh with those bad intentions.😡


Thanks for the pm.

Beautiful update.

Update next part soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
deetha as always awesome update par tujhe nahi lagta 7 saal kuch zyaada hogaya matlab yaar intna bhi kya tadpana plz un dono ko mila do jaldi plz plz plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved hiw kria sealed her emotions in the beginning on seeing them...kriyansh were just adorable...the band-aid scene was the best...loved how she opened up in front of rey...poor rey-kria ki khushi k liye usse lie karna pada...smriti's reaction was expected...good that kria did nt hide anything this time...the new side of kria as a bubbly gal just due to one lie of rey was grasping...loved it to the core..ab dekhna ye hai ki in 7 yrs mei universeji inhe kaise unite karte hain...and for that taani-i wud kill her...7 yrs...evn if she tries for eternity rey wud not fall fro her...he is not as shallow...loved it to the core...amazing work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
deetha it was awesome part...
no words to describe how superb it was...loved the way kria lost all his strength by seeing rey's wound and held him like anything and first-aid his wound with soo much care and wound and rey he is too sweet he believes kria soo much that once shesaid that every thing she said on that day was a lie he believed her and dint demanded any explanation from her...thats true love
and rey's promise that he will make kria his kria in next 7 years...that was soo sweet and kria too believed his every word...thats really very sweet and cute
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
7 saal baad woh bhi usi din jis din yeh vaada huya tha...

u know kriya ki umeed tutti huyi and the ekdum jud jaati...

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