OS: Her Eyes...His Desire - Page 10

Originally posted by: kajal620

good one

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Sister, I hate you for making it this short... but I love you for writing it soo beautifully! I was floating in the clouds whilst reading it... it was so light, serene, peaceful, beautiful... you captured every single moment perfectly... i could feel his desire to kiss her... and i could see her eyes, filled with fear and doubt... The reason it is short b/c I dont have any further ideas on this...and I also had exams coming up!!😳 Thank you so much Haffie!!🤗

what inspired you to write this sister? it's too beautiful... Actually to be honest...I was watching VD...and I had this idea to write something on the lines of what happened in the last part of the last episode of VD...but when I sat down to write...something else only came out!!😆

hey, you know that I don't really hate you right!!? your my sister! I know sissy!! I love u too!!

can you please write an part two? it's beautiful, it's completed.. but still a part two wont do any harm to this exquisite piece of writing... I will write a part 2 lekin only after my exams get over...really busy with them these days!!😳

Love you!!! Love u too!!!🤗

Originally posted by: JennyAvni

Loved it... If u have plans to continue plz do... I would love to read the update...
Thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: newmoon2011

beautiful os...loved it!

Originally posted by: saikrishnars

AWESUM!

HOPE U WLD CONTINUE!

Originally posted by: SankaDevi20

aww this is so nice, it kind of reminded me of a diwali remix! It seems to be a more current situation with the wall background kiss of diwali, and im a total sucker for what happened during diwali. I love how you mentioned that shes a gift from nature, sent to make him a better man. And that he will wait until shes ready! How they both can be so ignorant of their feelings at times .. lovely!