Arshi FF: One night stand (cr)- THREAD ONE

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s2612

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

well khushi is being khushi...doesn't know anything but still playing the cards as if she knows everything!!!

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Alice

@alice54

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

This sounds interesting!!!!!!!!!

I love this...specially Kushi being so naive and Arnav trying to understand her much better...

do continue...

and plz PM me...

continue soon...

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Susmita M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

😭😭again sorry..i wasn't at home..thus, later reply😭 ok since, i am bit behind, i will just comment for both

for part one:

Oh teriii,...yeh kaha se tapak padi??? jisko ane thi, oh to nahi aye...or jo aye, oh to bo nahi...to phir ye kon hain ji? (excuse my hindi) nice thriller yaar...after reading this, though i didn't get to reply, my mind kind of switched on its "sherlock holmes" brain...i was kinda thinking of reasons, as to why she might be in the place of the other girl!

is she hear to ruin his reputation? or

is she in trouble trying to get the money ,through an easy away? according to arnav, she aint poor! then?

she aint a p***m...by the way he describes her and she is inexperienced, according to her thoughts..."old man..."...hahah Arnav and old man???🤣

"my husband is waiting, for you know what...we are on our honeymoon" --- arnave nearly choked...hahahahahah🤣 one hell of a smart girl...shocked the Tycoon...and got rid of the actual p***m hahahahahaha!!

part 2 as well...now it starting to make sense...short but

hilarious update...so naive of her. loved khushi's jaw dropping description. so full intentions to prove her famine, seductive side...hahaha

ASR: You know what you are totally crazy...tell me if i was an old man? or maybe some fatso...then? Tu to gai...(you whould have gone).

Khushi pouted...i dont know what i would have done...surely ran away from them...

ASR: Smirked and how did you wish to to that my dear?

Khushi: I would have kicked his...with eye gesture (b**Ls)

🤣 too cute dialogues yaar...arnav sounds sweet...not angry or anything...very calm and composed, with a motive to find out the real reasons, as to why she was here...very gentle manly of him...bechara ish ladki ka actions choke karte karte...bimar nah pad jaye🤢🤢 loved the bits, how he tucks her in, with so much care and consideration.

want to read, what else in store for these two!! great Appy...brilliant...wonderfully something different...anyway, will catch another update of yours soon...keep it yaar...and take care..

Edited by sman2195 - 13 years ago

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souryadeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

ok ok so this was a sugar sweet update ...loved how u made up the story line and loved the way u brought both of them at par with each other using the ditched physically by loved ones concept...waiting to read more...u stay in kolkata...in kolkata where do u stay????I stay in shyambazar

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

very sweet and amusing ...a great break from reality ...loving it

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

hey hun. just came across this and I loved the idea. please add me to your pm list

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Prerna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#287

very amusing part
plz continue soon

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lovely_sweet

@lovely_sweet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Hey buddy...just came across your FF and must say wow...really great writing...totaly love your characters...arnav is great and khushi, as jhalli as always, is just great...totaly fida over them...please continue soon and add me to your Pm-list if u have one...